StevenBray Posted March 25, 2010 Report Share Posted March 25, 2010 [spoiler=Card Lore]Once per turn during your Battle Phase, you can discard 1 card from your hand and the top card of your Deck to increase this card's ATK by 400 until the end of the Battle Phase. When this card destroys a monster by battle, inflict 400 damage to your opponent. When this card is destroyed by battle, you can add 1 Level 4 or lower FIRE monster in your Graveyard to the top of your Deck. Comment, criticize and help me to get better. Thanks. Knowing my luck its OP, but there we go... Plus: If anyone knows how I can use cards I make on MSE and put them on the forum, if you could PM me the answer and I'd be grateful.---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------EDIT: Decided to go with DARK instead of FIRE, and edit to ATK power-up length. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RedRaptor10 Posted March 26, 2010 Report Share Posted March 26, 2010 It looks more like a dark monster by looking at the pic and name. I think it's actually underpowered. Maybe it's attack can be 2200? or 2250 like Firewing Pegasus. I'm starting to like these pegasus cards people are making lol 8.9/10, will be 9/10 if it has higher ATK Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted March 26, 2010 Report Share Posted March 26, 2010 since it has 1800 base atk, the 400 atk boost should be fine, though I'd still cut off the atk at some point, most likely when it exceeds the 3000 mark other than that, I'll give this 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LourDeath Posted March 26, 2010 Report Share Posted March 26, 2010 It looks more like a dark monster by looking at the pic and name. I think it's actually underpowered. Maybe it's attack can be 2200? or 2250 like Firewing Pegasus. I'm starting to like these pegasus cards people are making lol 8.9/10' date=' will be 9/10 if it has higher ATK[/quote'] ZONE EATER is a real card.... duelist can say that... oh.. a real duelist sir... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
StevenBray Posted March 26, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 26, 2010 oh hell, made the card wrong. Ment to make the power-up until the End Phase. Edit made.It looks more like a dark monster by looking at the pic and name. I think it's actually underpowered. Maybe it's attack can be 2200? or 2250 like Firewing Pegasus. I'm starting to like these pegasus cards people are making lol 8.9/10' date=' will be 9/10 if it has higher ATK[/quote'] ZONE EATER is a real card.... duelist can say that... oh.. a real duelist sir... Comment on my card, not just on someone else. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
StevenBray Posted March 27, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 27, 2010 BUMP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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