My first card in a while. The Nightmare Baron!

[destron]

[align=center]

 

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Flip Summoned except by ta card effect. This card cannot be Special Summoned except from your Graveyard or removed from play. Once per turn, you can discard 1 card from your hand when your opponent draws 1 card to look at it. If you do, you can pay 1000 LP after looking at it to flip a coin. If heads, it is sent to the Graveyard. If tails, you can add it to your hand.[/align]

 

Rate fairly plz.

[Squirrel Girl]

Found some errors but I think this card is good so I give this card a 8/10

[destron]

Care to share such errors?

[Squirrel Girl]

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set except by the effect of a Spell, Trap, or monster effect. This card cannot be Special Summoned except from your Graveyard or removed from play. You can discard 1 card from your hand when your opponent draws 1 card to look at it. If you do, you can pay 1000 Life Points to flip a coin. If heads, it is sent to the Graveyard. If tails, you can add it to your hand.

 

This are the correct ocg I think, there can be some small errors in my corection

[ragnarok1945]

"except by the effect of a Spell, Trap, or monster effect" <--change this to just "by a Card Effect"

 

"You can discard 1 card from your hand when your opponent draws 1 card to look at it." <---this effect should be limited to once per turn

 

7/10

[destron]

Fix'd. Thank ya.

[destron]

BUMPINGTON