ParaToxic Posted March 23, 2010 Report Share Posted March 23, 2010 Hello, those are the first cards I've made with YCM and I would like everyone's opinion. Hope you all like em Lore: By paying 1000 life points neither player can activate face down spell or trap cards during Main Phase of this turn. Lore: This card can only be activated if you don't control any other cards on the field. This cards activation can not be negated. When this card is activated you can special summon a "Dark Angel Mephis" from your hand, deck or graveyard.Your opponent can special summon a monster with less then 1500 ATK from his hand, deck or graveyard. Its effect is negated. Lore:This card cannot be summoned. This card can only be special summoned by the effect of Black Sphere. As long as this card is on the field, you can't summon, special summon, flip summon any monsters. When this card battles it destroys itself and the opponent monster. You don't loose any life points by battling with this card. Your opponent looses life points equal to the ATK points of the monster destroyed by this cards effect. During the Main Phase 2 of the turn that this card was destroyed by its own effect, you can pay half of your life points to switch from Main Phase 2 to Main Phase 1. Lore:This card can only be special summoned to your opponent side of the field by tributing 1 monster on your opponent side of the field. When special summoned by this way, it gains level equal of the tributed monster + 1. The ATK and DEF of this card are 400 * level of this card. When this card leaves the field the owner of this card looses life points equal to this cards ATK points. This card is destroyed after it attacks or was attacked. Please leave any ideas or things that I should fix :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Squirrel Girl Posted March 23, 2010 Report Share Posted March 23, 2010 Ocg errors and I think the cards are a bit OPed. Pics are OK but not more. I give these cards a 7/10 cause your new and these are good for newbies Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ParaToxic Posted March 23, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 23, 2010 Could u point out witch cards are OP-ed and how? :PThe first one blocks face down spells/traps that are face down but only during the Main PhaseThe 2nd one lets u special summon a monster as well as ur opponentI admit that the 3rd one is way 2 OP, but I've wanted it to b that way :)And dont forget about the last one, You are the real owner of it, so You loose LP.just noticed i've written "Face Down" 2 times :PDon't forget it blocks your spells/traps as well Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Squirrel Girl Posted March 23, 2010 Report Share Posted March 23, 2010 Dragon Angel cause it destroyed the opponents monster and inflict life points equal to the destroyed monsters ATK and you take no damage. Its just that card Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ParaToxic Posted March 23, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 23, 2010 Just said that i know and I need that Destroy effect for other decks that I've got :)How about I make it: "Both players loose half of the destroyed monsters ATK points"? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Squirrel Girl Posted March 23, 2010 Report Share Posted March 23, 2010 That should make it more balanced Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FriendlyHost Posted March 23, 2010 Report Share Posted March 23, 2010 You spelled "lose" incorrectly in Dark Angel Mephis, lol. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ParaToxic Posted March 23, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 23, 2010 My bad ^^But do u like em? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Squirrel Girl Posted March 23, 2010 Report Share Posted March 23, 2010 There are not just that error. There were many errors that I am to tiered to point out now Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted March 24, 2010 Report Share Posted March 24, 2010 life points should be Life Points spell or trap cards should be Spell or Trap Cards shame suicide soldier has no background most of the OCG errors are just capitalization ones anyway, so you did well for this set 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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