Yugioh:Darkness Arises

[Max.]

Ok,I'm new to Fan Fics so go easy on me.

 

Prologue

Long ago,there was a great evil known only as the Darkness.It had the ability to take control of people,and turn them evil.It was eventually Defeated.Now it has Returned.

 

CHAPTER !

Mac and his friends,Jacob,Jessica,Ron,and Tyler were on there way home from The Domino City High School when a strange man approached them. "Are you Mac?" the mysterious man said,pointing to Mac. "Um..Why?" Mac Stammered "Well,I need to talk to you" The Mysterious man said. "Well um..ok.But my friends will come to."Mac said. "Very Well" the mysterious man said.Then the mysterious man led then to an alley way. "We Shall Duel,Mac."The Mysterious man continued. "The winner escapes alive and,The other will Get poisoned by the poisonious gasses around us, I require each of us to wear one of these Medalions" He said Handing each of them a Medalion,each with a different color stone. "What are these for?" Jessica said, "These Medalions will start to tighten with each Life point Mac loses,you,Mac,and the rest of your friends will Start to suffocate." The mysterious man said "You may call me the Keykeeper" the keykeeper said, and if you don't duel,you and your friends will automaticly die. Heh"The keykeeper said "Ok i'll Duel you." Mac said

 

Mac's Turn

I'll start by playing the Spell card "Exeno-Draw",this allows me to discard an "Exenomorph" monster to draw 2 more cards.Next I play "Monster Reborn" to revive my "Exenomorph - True Form"(?/?) in Attack Mode. Next I activate "Exenomorph - True Form's" effect, by Tributing him I can Special Summon "Exenomorph Form I - Boot-Up Soldier" (1900/1400).I set 2 cards and end my turn.

KeyKeeper's Turn

I Summon the "Lock Master"(700/1000) and Activate his effect.I can Pay 500 Life Points to Destroy 1 Spell or Trap Card on the Field.I'll Destroy your 2nd face-down!*Card Flips up Revealing "Mirror Force" Destroying it.* now I will Attack you with my "Lock Master"!

 

Mac's LP:4000

Keykeeper's LP:2800

 

Now with my "Lock Master's" effect comes into effect,Now I can Summon a Monster with "Lock" in it's name.So I summon the "Locking Dragon"(1800/2000)Now i activate "Megamorph" to Double my "Locking Dragons" ATK (1800-->3600/2000)Now My "Locking Dragon" Attacks your "Exenomorph Form I"!

 

Mac's LP:2300

KeyKeeper's LP:2800

 

End turn.....

[Kaisu]

Well then, apart from spacing errors, I don't see much, but.. I'll be back with my dogs..

[Gorm13]

Wow, I thought Yu-Gi-Oh was quite extreme, but a high-school boy simply saying "ok" when challenged to a duel of life and death?

 

The writing on the other hand is quite good. I'd like to know more about the custom cards the characters are using (and their opponent might as well), but that's more a personal preference.

[Max.]

Wow' date=' I thought Yu-Gi-Oh was quite extreme, but a high-school boy simply saying "ok" when challenged to a duel of life and death?

 

The writing on the other hand is quite good. I'd like to know more about the custom cards the characters are using (and their opponent might as well), but that's more a personal preference.

[/quote']Well,If he had said no,Him and his friends would have automaticly gotten choked.At least he has a chance to save himself and his friends from dying.