Final Fantasy XV {Latest Episode: Episode V - Whyt Mist} [PG-13] REVIVED!!

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@double_c4 (can i call u 2c4?): thx for the chara

 

and WTF??? I THOUGHT THIS CHAPTER WAS TOO LONG!

 

Hah lol Kk then ill make sure every episode afterward is long

[Twig]

I think you could have been more detailed. It was ok.

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yea, but im only a beginner at fanfics, so im trying my best!

[Twig]

For a beginner, you're ok.

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(=D)

[Kōsuke Ueki]

You should've done a Kingdom Hearts fic. That would've done better.

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D:<

 

there already is a KH fanfic

 

besides i like FF betta

[Kōsuke Ueki]

I'm only a fan of FFX. KH is still better than FF in my opinion.

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well, its all opinions! i gladly accept that ur a fan of KH

 

ps as you all should remember, i have decided to post the story once everyweek

 

so, ill post the next story wednesday!

 

ps HAPPY SPRING BREAK!!! PARTY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! WOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

 

>coughcoughmoreseriousvoice<

 

so, ....yea. happy spring break!

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ps @queenashe: Logan's full name is now Logan Highwind

[Des ＨＥＲＯ]

I kind of like FF since ive played 3,10,12,13 and tactics.So heres my character.

 

[spoiler=my character]

Name: Lance Winds

 

Age: 36

 

Appearence: hes only seen in his platium armour.He holds a blade called Oblivion as he has an green cape.He has a giant bag that he holds.

 

Backround/History: Commander of the green knights(an elite force) of Ginsine City.He lives in Ginsine City what is an armed city in the middle of the the Zactus Desert.His only friends are his troops he leads in the battle,his golden chocobo named Calas and the crystal(nothing to do with the cystals that gather to darkness) he holds that can summon Bahamut without magic.His mission is to go to Intera City for assistance in a battle.

 

Personalty: He is strict to his troop because he has too.He is also loyal,protective,kind and honist.He would rarely retreat a battle.

 

Job: Holy Knight-uses holy blades that cause some negative statues,always hits and some powerful blasts.

 

 

 

Your first chapter is quite good.

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thx destructionhero!

 

i will post episode II tonight

 

hm.... just one thing, ima edit his "mission" in the story..

 

also, thx for the new location!

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ok here's episode II

 

i hope u like it! ;D

 

[spoiler=Episode II- Into the Blue]

 

The knight in blue rushed Cid, with his blade still at Cid's neck, into the throne room. There are two other knights, one in green, the other red, with blades drawn, surrounding a small crowd of scared people. The group was composed mostly of nobles and royalty, of which include the King and Queen.

 

"Nicol!" Cid shouted in alarm. The Queen looks up to Cid, startled.

 

"Shut up!" said the blue knight, pressing the edge of the blade deeper into Cid's neck, "Kaipoj! Give us back the Crystal! Or I'll cut his head off!"

 

With these words, Cid was shocked. The king has already retrieved the Crystals?! Cid thought to himself.

 

The King was about to say something, when suddenly...

 

"Thunder!"

 

The two other knights are struck with a lightning bolt. The blue knight holding Cid pushes his hostage forward and jumps back just in time. They both look back to see Toren, with his Rapier drawn and aimed at the knight. Cid rushes for Toren, a little scared, hiding behind his friend.

 

"Hahahaha, a puny Red Mage?" said the knight, "What a joke!"

 

"I'm not laughing," said Toren very seriously.

 

"Well I am, at how quick this battle would be!" The knight goes into a battle position.

 

"Bring it on!"

 

The knight rushes at Toren. Toren pushes Cid to the side and dodges to the right. He casts Blizzard, but the knight shakes it off, and pulls out from a hidden sheathe in his back a second blade. He again rushes for Toren, and slashes at him. Toren dodges the first blade, but the second cuts him across the chest. There is now a huge gash on it. Toren screams.

 

"Toren!" Cid shouts. Toren falls over; he is not moving.

 

"Like I said," resumed the knight, "'A puny Red Mage'." He walks over to his accomplices. "Cure." His friends slowly rise. "Are you alright?"

 

"Fine, thanks," said the red knight, revealing itself to be a girl.

 

"Lets ge--what?" the green knight stops. All three look to where Toren lays to see Cid holding Toren's blade.

 

The knights start laughing.

 

"HAHAHAHAhahahahahaha... Does this...nerd...actually believe he can defeat us?!"

 

"GRAAAH!" Cid charges at the knights. All three of them dodge, and Cid falls forward, cutting his arm with Toren's Rapier. The knights are still laughing at him.

 

"Cid!" shouted a female voice.

 

The knights stop laughing, look towards the throne to see where the voice had come from. The crowd has already escaped, only the King and Queen were watching from the door to the Crystal Chamber (which was behind the throne).

 

"The Crystals!" says the red knight. The King and Queen quickly slam the door closed. The red knight quickly pulls out a blade and aims it at Cid. Cid is still laying on the floor. The blue knight grabs the blade.

 

"No..." the blue knight started, still thinking, "...he might make good ransom. We'll come back for him later."

 

Cid is still conscious, but barely. Though the cut on his arm isn’t that large, it is bleeding profusely. The last thing he sees is a mid-sized fireball heading towards the door to the Crystal Chamber. Finally, he falls unconscious...

 

[Twig]

It was ok.

 

I think you should put all the chapters in the first page so other people can easily see.

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"It was ok" as in "eh, it was ok" or "not bad, it was ok"

 

Important questions!

 

Ok when I get on a computer ill post the episodes on the first page

[Kōsuke Ueki]

You'll mention my character in Episode 3, right?

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Well, its my story. I'll add him when I can

[Kōsuke Ueki]

The sooner the better, I usually say.

[Twig]

"It was ok" as in "eh' date=' it was ok" or "not bad, it was ok"

 

Important questions!

[/quote']

 

"It was ok" as in it was good, but it could have been better.

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well... thanks?

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if u saw the title, then u'll see it says ima be late

 

im gonna be a little late with Ep III

 

not too much tho, probably a day (and a half maybe)

 

kthxbai

[Des ＨＥＲＯ]

Sorry I wasn't able to see chapter 2 immediaty I had problems on my internet.

 

Chapter 2 was good with an good suprise.

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hey guys i kno u all were expecting episode iii already but ive been really busy with laif and all so i havent been able to get it done

 

im not gonna give up on this but ima change the time between episodes again to 2 weeks

 

kthxbai

[Des ＨＥＲＯ]

Ok then good luck on chapter 3

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hey guys sorry it took so long but here is episode III:

 

[spoiler= Episode III - An airship?!]Cid is dreaming. He is on a hill at the top of a valley. It is sunset and it is beautiful; orange towards the horizon. But something is wrong. instead of the light fading, its growing. The sky starts turning orange. Then, Cid feels faint. He hears a voice.

 

~~A~W~A~K~E~N~~

 

Cid wakes up. He appears to be in the wreckage of some large vehicle. There is a young man crouching down in front of him. He is slightly tan, with brown spikey hair and a dark tattoo running from his eye to the bottom of his face.

 

"You alright?"

 

"Uhh...wha?" Cid tries to get up, but fails from a sharp pain in his arm. He looks, and sees a purple scar.

 

"Wow that's bad. Here stand still. --Cure--"

 

Cid starts emanating green light. He feels better. The scar fades, but not completely.

 

"The wound is too deep for Cure to heal it instantly." the man continues, "It'll just have to heal naturally."

 

"W-w-wait wait. Where am I?"

 

"...Welcome to Craal."

 

~~~~~Craal Plains~~~~~

 

"Craal?! Across the sea? How did I get here?"

 

"You crashed. Remember?"

 

"Bu--No I don't! Last thing I remember I was at Castle Intera."

 

A sudden exploding sound comes from the destroyed vehicle.

 

"Can you get up? This isn't the best place to talk, and you need to rest."

 

Cid gets up, and the man leads him away from the wreckage. He looks around and is horrified by what he sees. There is virtually no vegetation. The ground is muddy and the air wreaks of decay. Besides the rotting earth, Cid does notice that there is a town off to the left, on the horizon.

 

Suddenly, a sahagin pops up and attacks.

 

"sheet!" the man exclaims, while a staff materializes in his hands. Cid backs off, and allows the man to attack. The man points the staff at the sahagin and casts Thunder. The sahagin fades away almost instantly.

 

"God, sahagins are so annoying..."

 

Cid remains silent.

 

"You're okay, right?"

 

"Yea..."

 

"My name is Xero, by the way. What's yours?"

 

"Huh? Oh. Cid."

 

"Nice to meet you! Hey can I try something on you?"

 

"Uhh.. like what?"

 

Xero spins around and pulls up his staff and points it at Cid. Cid is a little shocked, until he hears the words--

 

"--Teleport!--"

 

A second later, Cid appears in a strange dark room. The change from light to dark hurts his eyes a little, but he can see that the room is quite simple. Just a bed, sink, the front door, another door (presumably the bathroom), and a few personal items. The lights quickly switch on. Cid sees Xero at the front door with his hand on the light switch.

 

"Welcome to my humble abode.." Xero says in a fancy voice, bowing to Cid. He rises and laughs a little.

 

"Where are we?"

 

"We're about a mile from the crash site."

 

"About that. What happened?"

 

"So you really don't remember?"

 

"No..."

 

"Well, as far as what I saw, there was an airship crossing the sea."

 

"An airship?!"

 

"Yep! When all of a sudden, this ball of fire came from the same direction and hit the ship. I think it might have been a Firaga or Flare. The ship fell, crashed, and I saw your body fall."

 

"I don't remember getting on an airship..."

 

"Someone must've put you there..."

 

Cid then remembers the words of the blue knight. ...he might make good ransom. We'll come back for him later...

 

"Did you see anyone leave the site?"

 

"No, why? Do you remember something?"

 

"....No." Cid lied. He remembers Toren's unconcious body. "I need to get back to Intera. Do you know anyway to get there?"

 

"Three. One, by airship!"

 

"Do you have one?!"

 

"No."

 

Cid looks confused and disapointed...

 

"Two, by boat!"

 

"Do you have a boat?"

 

"Um.....no. It sank a long time ago..."

 

Cid is starting to get annoyed.

 

"Three! The spell Teleport!"

 

"Great. You know Teleport."

 

"Yea, but it only works if you've been to the place you're teleporting to."

 

"Is there anything we can do!?"

 

"Well... we can go see Carolina."

 

"Who?"

 

"She's a white mage I know. She's been EVERYWHERE."

 

"Great. Then lets go."

 

"Oh she's not anywhere near here now."

 

"God! Then what's the point of all this!?"

 

"Hehehe. Well, we can go visit Carolina tomorrow, when she comes home from Tarrelet!"

 

"Fine... So, what should I do for now?"

 

"Well, you can hang out with me until then! ;D"

 

"Hehe..."

 

[Des ＨＥＲＯ]

Yes chapter 3 finaly and in a plain.Final Fantasy is not Final Fantasy without monsters they say.I say FF is not FF without More powerful versions of Spells.Both proven with some suprise of comedy.