AlucardTheOld Posted March 27, 2010 Report Share Posted March 27, 2010 @Alucard: The RP sample is a requirement to join regardless of position. Unless you provide it you won't be accepted. If you've RP'd before (anywhere)' date=' just copy and paste something that meets the standards (i.e. four lines ect.).[/b'] @JadenXAtem: I was applying for E4 number 2, but because of the number of people who wanted Gym/E4 positions I dropped it so people who didn't already have a character could take it. What I wanted to do with them wasn't really that important anyway. I'd only post your evil team people if you've got Apocalypse Horseman's permission to have them. If you haven't done so then PM him about it - he may have his own ideas for them. @Pegasasu: A minor point, but I can't help feeling a full team of fully evolved pokémon is a bit much for the first gym, particularly Hypno and Metagross (this even more so since the sixth leader has Metang), and also Gallade to a Degree. I'm fine with the others since they're possible at the levels the first leader usually has, but those just seem a bit over the top. Feel free to ignore me, or have another set for gym battles or something, I just felt I needed to point it out. @All: First, I suggest people only have a gym leader or an elite 4 member, rather than both, since they're in high demand, and second pay attention to what other people have posted. I guess the issue will resolve itself, but I suspect many of the clashes are because of just scanning or only looking at what's in the first post. Can I just quote a post from an RP about yugioh or any other RP I have been in? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pegasasu Posted March 28, 2010 Report Share Posted March 28, 2010 Here is my RP sample: Talia fell backwards onto the ship, landing in a flip. Ocean water sloshed aboard the boat, leaving a rancid taste in her mouth. She was soaked quickly, her clothes sticking to her. It was late at night, and she was tired- but she had to keep fighting against the strange creature that stood before her- that haunted the nightmares of little children, and strolled in the bedtime stories of toddlers- the Craken. Foamy fingers of the waves crashed yet again on the ship, soaking her even more. She didn't have time to regain her balance, for another wave shot at her. Suddenly, a different obstacle smashed against her- the sticky tentacles of the Craken. Talia stabbed at the terrifying tentacle with a harpoon she had snatched. The tentacle fell off the ship, limp. Still, the Craken wasn't dead yet, so she had to continue. Talia wondered, while she was being swept around by the waves. How did she get here? More importantly, why was she here? Her life flashed before her eyes, her parents waiting for her to bring back the promised gold coins, little Jonny playing with his friends.... And she fell overboard, sinking into the deep vast waves of the ocean... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FeralSnake Posted March 28, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 28, 2010 Could you all please refrain from having conversation's on here? It makes it a lot harder to get through all of this stuff. pegasasu you have to use one of the towns I created.Alucard, it doesn't matter what the RP was about. Guys, I like what Time Psyduck said, one Gym Leader or Elite 4 per person. Elite Four Applications:1: Deadly Beauty2: willpower_93: Alucard4: magnet soldier Until I sort this all out NO ELITE FOUR MEMBERS, seriously guys, this thing is actually making me stressed. EDIT: Time Psyduck, you are officially the Co-Owner of this RP, if you want. EDIT: Gym Four is needed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pegasasu Posted March 28, 2010 Report Share Posted March 28, 2010 Oops- sorry! I edit my app... NOW! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AlucardTheOld Posted March 28, 2010 Report Share Posted March 28, 2010 Here is my RP Sample (it is from an RP last year):Suichi woke up' date=' it was 11:56. "Good thing I got here a few days in advance." Suichi said as he woke up in his own dorm. He grabbed his deck off of the desk that lay three feet from the bed and threw the yellow blazer under the bed "I wont be caught dead wearing yellow, even if it is uniform." Suichi then left his room and waited at the dock for the first of the freshman to arrive. "Not much longer now, they should be here in the next hour or so." Suichi said as he sat down and laid next to a rock. He struggled to keep his eyes open as he slowly came closer to the darkness of his dreams.[/quote'] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FeralSnake Posted March 29, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 29, 2010 Alucard, you are accepted. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pegasasu Posted March 29, 2010 Report Share Posted March 29, 2010 You konw I edited- am I accepted? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FeralSnake Posted March 30, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 30, 2010 Accepted Pegasasu.Youldid is Taken, these cities are not: Igniaus Town and Coral City. This goes for both Alucard and Pegasasu. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Naimo Posted March 30, 2010 Report Share Posted March 30, 2010 Youldid is Taken' date=' these cities are not: Igniaus Town and Coral City.[/quote'] woah, wait, I asked for Coral City in my app, which has been edited with the RP sample Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AlucardTheOld Posted March 31, 2010 Report Share Posted March 31, 2010 Accepted Pegasasu.Youldid is Taken' date=' these cities are not: Igniaus Town and Coral City. This goes for both Alucard and Pegasasu.[/quote'] I applied to be Elite 4 number 3 though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stardust Acceleration Posted March 31, 2010 Report Share Posted March 31, 2010 Is this gonna start anytime soon? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FeralSnake Posted April 1, 2010 Author Report Share Posted April 1, 2010 Accepted Pegasasu.Youldid is Taken' date=' these cities are not: Igniaus Town and Coral City. This goes for both Alucard and Pegasasu.[/quote'] I applied to be Elite 4 number 3 though. Oh sorry. Elite 4 Accepted. Oh crap, Pegasasu, I found an error in your App, could you use Weaker pokemon, Hypno and Girafarig can stay, but the others should go, or become there first form's. I would Perfer:Metagross = BeldumGallade = Kirlia, or RaltsAlakazam = Kadabra, or AbraAlso, you have to be the Gym Leader of Igniaus Town, or just make a Trainer instead. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JadenxAtemYAOI Posted April 2, 2010 Report Share Posted April 2, 2010 Are we going to start this or not? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pegasasu Posted April 2, 2010 Report Share Posted April 2, 2010 Edited AGAIN Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FeralSnake Posted April 3, 2010 Author Report Share Posted April 3, 2010 Pegasasu Accepted. We will Start soon. EDIT: Before I start I just have to say something, I'm not the only one whom the first Post has disappeared for, right?When I click on Quick Edit, I can see what I posted, but I can't without clicking edit, what kind of glitch is this? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spartan919 Posted April 3, 2010 Report Share Posted April 3, 2010 I sort of notice this. Just most of the post is missing...Interesting. I don't know how to fix that... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FeralSnake Posted April 3, 2010 Author Report Share Posted April 3, 2010 For me it is the entire Post, I just deleted some of the Post, mostly unnecessary things, to see it if it would show back up Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr420QuickScopes Posted April 3, 2010 Report Share Posted April 3, 2010 I want to join? Name: KierrynSex: MaleAge: 17Gym Type: Dark & MixedGym City: Sin CityGym "Number": N/ABadge Name: N/AStarter Pokemon: AbsolCurrent Pokemon Roster:Absol [Male] (LV. 49)Haunter [Male] (LV. 40)Pikachu [Female] (LV. 34)Umbreon [Male] (LV. 47)Chikorita [Female](I chose for it to not evolve) (LV. 44)Appearance: Short white hair, blue eyes, jet black clothes with hotrod red, and gold.RP sample:"Absol, use Rock Slide!" Kierryn's Absol made heaver boulders crumble onto the enemies Zigzagoon, "Noo!! Zigzagoon!" Cried the opposing trainer, but the Zigzagoon had fainted, "Want some more?" Said Kierryn, "No thankyou, sob." Said the trainer."Great job Absol!" Yelled Kierryn to the Absol.The Absol jumped with joy. There.. Hope it makes it? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Magnet Soldier Posted April 3, 2010 Report Share Posted April 3, 2010 No offence Ansem but your sample isn't good. It uses formatting which is now not allowed, it is a short post and doesn't have much description. Also, Apocalypse, I cant see it either. I can see your sig and such but it's as if you put in an empty post. Is this how it is to you? If so I have never seen it before and I am sorry. Ask a mod. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JadenxAtemYAOI Posted April 3, 2010 Report Share Posted April 3, 2010 I want to join? Name: KierrynSex: MaleAge: 17Gym Type: Dark & MixedGym City: Sin CityGym "Number": N/ABadge Name: N/AStarter Pokemon: AbsolCurrent Pokemon Roster:Absol [Male] (LV. 49)Haunter [Male] (LV. 40)Pikachu [Female] (LV. 34)Umbreon [Male] (LV. 47)Chikorita [Female](I chose for it to not evolve) (LV. 44)Appearance: Short white hair' date=' blue eyes, jet black clothes with hotrod red, and gold.RP sample:"Absol, use Rock Slide!" Kierryn's Absol made heaver boulders crumble onto the enemies Zigzagoon, "Noo!! Zigzagoon!" Cried the opposing trainer, but the Zigzagoon had fainted, "Want some more?" Said Kierryn, "No thankyou, sob." Said the trainer."Great job Absol!" Yelled Kierryn to the Absol.The Absol jumped with joy. There.. Hope it makes it?[/quote'] * bashes head against desk* Read ALL the posts in the thread before posting please. All gyms are taken except I think number 4. The evil team leader and second-in-command of the evil team are mine. I also remember Horseman saying to hold off on the Elite 4 apps. So basically apply for Gym 4 or become a trainer or grunt. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Quiksilver Posted April 3, 2010 Report Share Posted April 3, 2010 Hmm...you're right Apocalypse...All the words for the first post seem to have been deleted...Glitches, anyone? Do what magnet soldier suggested. Ask a mod. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Naimo Posted April 3, 2010 Report Share Posted April 3, 2010 Apocalypse, you've got too much text in the post, which is why you can't see anythingYou'll have to break it into two posts Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Magnet Soldier Posted April 3, 2010 Report Share Posted April 3, 2010 Magnet, he just said he shortened it. I dont think telling him to shorten it more will help. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Naimo Posted April 3, 2010 Report Share Posted April 3, 2010 It's still not showing, there's still too much textLike I say, I think he'll have to break it into two posts, not shorten it (that's what Master Red and I did with Eon, we had the same issue as this thread is having now. Humans, Spirits and Neo Androids also had the same thing happen to it) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JadenxAtemYAOI Posted April 4, 2010 Report Share Posted April 4, 2010 Can we just start the RP please. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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