/성成현賢/.led Posted March 20, 2010 Report Share Posted March 20, 2010 CnC n Class pl0x (No BS pl0x) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JG. Posted March 20, 2010 Report Share Posted March 20, 2010 Hand is too bright and oversharpened. Otherwise, I quite like it. FX are ok. Solid Nov =P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
/성成현賢/.led Posted March 20, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 20, 2010 lol I tried to make obvious focal more obvious... It is the light source after all... Advice? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JG. Posted March 20, 2010 Report Share Posted March 20, 2010 Yes it is the light source, and it's ok well done. Although maybe lower the sharpening by 50% or something. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
/성成현賢/.led Posted March 20, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 20, 2010 TBH, I didn't sharpen it at all =/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JG. Posted March 20, 2010 Report Share Posted March 20, 2010 You did something that makes it look sharpened... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
/성成현賢/.led Posted March 20, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 20, 2010 C4D overlays? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest JoshIcy Posted March 20, 2010 Report Share Posted March 20, 2010 You used a cloud stock wrong (if thats a cloud at all). Transition along the render itself is relatively unbalanced and distracting. Space BG does not work well with this render as the art style does not match, resulting in something that's a probable mess =/... And that hard shading, is that a modified Inner Blur or something? ._." Blah. You should have went through it with an Anime Background Stock and stuffs. C4D doesn't enhance it either, since all it does there is distract your eyes from the rest (which isn't quite what a focal is supposed to do). Nyah, regardless of what ~JG~ said your choices were ill made. Ooh and you spelled "please" wrong. How you get people to do stuff for you with spelling so bad a hippie tripping on acid at a rave with epilepsy would correct you, is beyond me ._." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
/성成현賢/.led Posted March 20, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 20, 2010 You used a cloud stock wrong (if thats a cloud at all). Transition along the render itself is relatively unbalanced and distracting. Space BG does not work well with this render as the art style does not match' date=' resulting in something that's a probable mess =/... And that hard shading, is that a modified Inner Blur or something? ._." Blah. You should have went through it with an Anime Background Stock and stuffs. C4D doesn't enhance it either, since all it does there is distract your eyes from the rest (which isn't quite what a focal is supposed to do). Nyah, regardless of what ~JG~ said your choices were ill made. Ooh and you spelled "please" wrong. How you get people to do stuff for you with spelling so bad a hippie tripping on acid at a rave with epilepsy would correct you, is beyond me ._."[/quote'] lol, I chose the space stock and clouds for compo really. I can't think of a stock that would work XD The shading is all burn and blur, I'll lighten it up next time. pl0x is smex ;D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gizmo00999 Posted March 20, 2010 Report Share Posted March 20, 2010 Yes, it is a little too sharpened, the light is okay, could be just a little bigger, btw, where did you get that awesum render? :D The white on corner is a little too big, distracts me, and looks weird.The solar light effect could be less intense, and i overall don't the cosmic-like background. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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