A Tale of Two Shinobi - "Forbidden Glory" PG16 [Prologue & Chapter 1 up]

[PrimalFear]

[align=center]Hello all and welcome to H_M Productions of the original Anime created by myself and my best friend. This will be the first in the series of two legendary Shinobi based on myself and my friend. I hope you all enjoy it and can't wait to write more episodes. Also as an added bonus with your consent you may enter a Character into the story. and by posting a Character Application for this story you release all the information to be published in this story should it become a real Anime. Also as a way to get more viewers, anyone willing to advertise the Fan-fic in their signature it would be greatly appreciated and you will also be rewarded for it. Be aware I cannot always be on time every week to get a new chapter up I am very busy in RL and with many forums that I am on.

 

[spoiler=H_M Productions]

H_M Productions is owned and operated by myself William S. LaBrake. This will be the first of the series of Forbidden Glory Created by Myself, and my best friend. This story is 100% my own and will hopefully become a hit Fan-Fic along with the possibility of one day becoming an Anime. Any questions, or suggestions about H_M Productions or my work plz contact me via PM.

 

[spoiler=Character Apps]

Also as an added bonus with your consent you may enter a Character into the story. But be warned by posting a Character Application for this story you release all the characters information and any copyright's of the character to me.

 

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[spoiler=Forbidden Glory's Characters]

1: Hayate Masaru

2: Kenji Shinobu

3: Hayate's Mom

4: Sensai Asamu

 

 

 

 

[spoiler=Prologue; "Chronicles of Forbidden Glory"]

The Chronicles of Forbidden Glory

 

 

It was dark out; the sun had fallen from the sky. In the flickering fire light the trees were casting dancing shadows. Two boys not more than 18 where seen by the fire not more than a foot or two apart. One was grasping a forbidden glove; the other mumbling so low that he couldn't be heard unless you were an arms length away.

 

"Allhah Etarie Sindron Tekai," Takumi chanted.

 

The boys watched as a lightning bolt shot from the glove onto both boys’ arms. Upon the boy's arms appeared a Glowing skull where they were hit. The skull was a symbol known only by the villagers and was referred to as there gods symbol.

 

“Did it work Takumi?" Isamu asked.

 

“I’m not sure Isamu!” Takumi exclaimed.

 

At that moment Takumi had touched his arm where the symbol appeared. There was another flash of blue light and a wolf leapt out of the boys arm and landed a few feet from them. The wolf turned to face the boys, with terror in there eye’s they watched the wolf pace in front of them.

 

“What should we do Isamu?” Takumi asked scared.

 

Takumi Had touched his brother’s arm exactly where the symbol had appeared. A second wolf came out of his brother’s arm. His brother staring at the wolves paralyzed with fear; couldn’t respond to his brothers’ question. The wolves started to move but instantly disappeared. In shock the boy’s sat trying to figure out what had happened. Neither boy could say anything.

 

“What have you done,” the Hideyoshi said walking from behind them, “That glove has forbidden powers you fools.”

 

The Hideyoshi grabbed his forbidden glove back from his sons.

 

“I don’t want you boys playing with that magic again I forbid you from ever using that summoning powers again.”

 

With that there father, the Hideyoshi turned and walked away. Both boys stunned not understanding why their father had forbade them from using there summoning powers, stood watching as their father disappeared into the night.

 

The next day the boy’s father walked into there room, “I have something to tell you two,” He said, “I’m the one who created that summoning.” He then pulled the arm of his robe up until he showed them the same symbol that appeared on there own arms.

 

“You see boys I forbade you from using that summoning because it drains your life force slowly but in the end it will kill you.” There father spoke softly, “I myself had felt this awesome power and its effects, I will soon die from the effects of it. I’m telling you this because I don’t want you to end up like me.” He then turned around and walked out of there rooms.

 

Several months had past and Takumi continued to practice the summoning against his fathers wishes. On the other hand Isamu had listened to his father and refused to use its magic. One day when Takumi was teaching a few others his summoning power on the outskirts of the village he came once again face to face with his father.

 

“What are you doing Takumi, didn’t I tell you not to ever use that power again,” The Hideyoshi shouted, “Because you have disobeyed me I have to take action, I can’t allow you to continue this and reveal the secrets behind this magic. It could cost many villagers lives. I have no other choice but to expel you and these people from this village, you are no longer welcome in this village. You have one day to pack your stuff and leave the village as an outcast.”

 

With that his father walked away. Takumi then went and packed his things, saying goodbye to his father, brother and to the other villagers he met with the others that he was teaching at the front gate. From there Takumi and the others left the village never to return again.

 

Until two years after his expulsion Isamu’s brother hadn’t step foot in the village, now as he stood at the front gate he awaited his brother’s arrival from a foreign land.

 

-To Be Continued-

 

 

 

[spoiler=Chapter 1]

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~In the years past many great wars took place, the Sekounen Empire looked to take over the world. For the past two hundred years the Sekounen Empire has taken over most of the world, enslaving everyone under their rules. Now two unkown shinobi will fight for the existance of their freedom. This is the story of their adventures, "Forbidden Glory".~[/size][/b]

 

It was a beautiful morning, the sun high in the sky with the trees blowing with the eatern breeze. I awoke jumping out of bed as my alarm clock struck me on my head. As I pulled off the covers I slowly sat up as I brushed my left arm acroos my forehead where the clock had just struck me. I stood up out of bed and grabbed my pants which lay on my chair. Once I pulled the pants on I began to lace up both of my boots before lastly placing a shirt over my head. As I stood up off the bed I walked to the door a loud screeching noise came from the door as I pulled it open hard, the screech which could be heard throughout the house.

 

"Going out to meet Kenji again today Hayate," I heard my mom ask from the kitchen. I slowly ran my hand through my spiky black hair as I walked down the hall turning left at the kitchen.

 

As I looked into the kitchen seeing my mom, a beautiful women in her early thirties I answered her question, "Yeah, where heading out to began our training with Sensai Asamu today." I reach on the table grabbing a piece of toast off the center of the table, my mom just turned around glancing at me with a huge smile on her face. "We will be home before lunch," I said walking toward the opposite side of the room to head out. I grabbed a bag full of tools and training equipment before opening the door and head out of the gate and onto the streets of the village.

 

I began as I walked through the village of Sekoye. , I am a well trained ninja but fail in comparison to my brother. I had just walked past two houses on the right of the road, as I headed toward a narrow path that headed away from the village. I entered the path heading to the outskirts of the village where Kanji lived when I heard a noise from behind me. Turning to see, I noticed my best friend Kenji Shinobu. A bit older then myself, Kenji stood five foot with black hair. Kenji also being a student of Asamu's had learned the art of ninjitsu.

 

"Kenji," I exclaimed as turning to see him "Where are we suppose to meet Sensai for training today?"

 

Kenji looked up at me as he stopped walking a few feet from where I was standing, "Yes I can't wait to test out our abilities." He said before he began walking again as he stepped past me he pushed on my shoulder to encourage me to keep up. I new Kenji was always in a hurry to get to his destinations, Kenji being the very inpatient kind of person just continued through the path.

 

"Fine lets go, I can't wait either," I said following close behind him. We walked a while talking about our skills and training routines, until we reached the end of the path. Their where legends of Samurai that roamed the outskirts of the village, so we took caution before we would risk walking out in the open. Kenji stopped before reaching the edge of the field. Holding up his right fist, "Wait." Kenji began to peer out in the field, he looked intently on the surroundings make sure the area was clear of people in order to give us safe passage. Stopping a few feet away from Kenji, I peered into the opening of the field as I too look around the surroundings.

 

"It looks clear Hayate," Kenji said as he stepped slowly out from the path. Right behind him I looked beyond the field to the forest on the opposite side.

 

"Wait; I hear something," I announced as I grabbed Kenji's arm stopping him before he was spotted. We both ducked down to knee level as Kenji peered around a tree and saw two men covered in heavy armor and both carrying sheath swords. Kenji turned back quick so he wouldn't be spotted for he didn't feel like raising suspicion on their current position. With knowledge of communicating without words Keji looked at me and shook his head, raising his hand he put up two fingers indicating two men. I looked surprised at first, but then peeking my head out to confirm Kenji's words I was shocked at what I saw. The two men where nearly five feet from them and getting closer. I turned in a flash, grabbing Kenji's arm, "Hurry we need to get out of here," we took off sprinting at full speed away from the area.

 

The two armed men turned just as fast as they could upon hearing the commotion from nearly a few feet from them. As the two armed Samurai caught a glimpse of the two of us in the distance the Samurai decided to give chase.

 

"After them," one guy said. The two men started running toward the Sekoye village down the path after the Kenji and I.

 

Turning his head, Kenji noticed that the two men where chasing them, "Hurry Hayate their after us!" We began to run as fast as we could dodging trees left and right the Village a few thousand yards from our current positions.

 

The two Samurai where catching up to the us as we neared the village, "You cannot out run us," the taller one said as they where only five feet behind us.

 

Nearly a hundred feet from the Village we where becoming tired. We didn't have the strength to fight against two armed Sekounen Soilders. I had all he could do to keep up with Kenji as he was five feet out infront of me. "Please wait up Kenji. I'm to tired."

 

As Kenji looked over his shoulder he saw me, the two Samurai had nearly caught up with me and where ready to pounce at any second. "Run faster Hayate," Kenji yelled not knowing what to do in the situation he turned back and just as he began to run again I let out a loud scream.

 

Hearing a scream from his best friend, Kenji stopped turning to see me in the grasp of these two Sekounen soldiers. "Hahaha, you really thought you could out run us....boy." Then the Samurai looked up at Kenji seeing him starring back at them.

 

Becoming frantic Kenji dropped his bag he was carrying full of training tools, "Leave my friend alone!!!!" He then began to run toward the two samurai and myself, "Let him go you freaks!!!"

 

Kenji charged at the two samurai that held me hostage, trying to catch his breath he yelled once more. "Let Hayate go." I could feel the samurai that held me loosen his grip enough allowing me to move my legs, as i lifted my foot about a foot or so up I stomped down with all my might on the samurai's foot. At that moment I looked up to see Kenji landing a spinning right kick to the samurai's face.

 

We watched as the samurai fell to the ground knocking his body on the hard ground. The samurai was now infuriated as he reached for his sword yelling at the top of his lungs. The other samurai rushed to aid the one on the ground. As the two stood up they readied themselves for the death blow that would soon be brought down upon the boys.

 

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[Twig]

It's not bad at all. I think it needs more description of the characters.

 

Also, samurais just walk around killing people?

[PrimalFear]

The Samurai are a secret organization ruled by the Sekounen Empire. Their an organization which is well known in the story but as of right now their is limited knowledge to the reader about them. Within the next episode and a few others will shed more light into these strange but fearsome Samurai.

 

As for the prologue it's more of a history lesson on a few characters that will come into play very soon and have a major part in molding the two main character's destiny.

[PrimalFear]

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