Breeze City Monster Hunters

[Dizzy~]

This is a story that I randomly wanted to write. If you have any comments or suggestions, post it or PM me. If you have an idea for a new character, or need some help writing your own story/fan-fic, PM it to me and it be glad to help you.

 

[spoiler=Chapter 1]

I ran across the empty street, circling the Kankamo. The last time I had battled a Kankamo was the night I discovered my powers. He was bringing back some extremey bad memories. The giant Kankamo stomped the ground, causing me to fall on my butt. "Oh no... guys run away!", I called out to the other two in my squad. They had no clue of the danger they were in. "RUN!", I yelled. They just stood there with blan expressions on their face.

Wait, wait-wait-wait-wait-wait. Let's backtrack a bit, to a year earlier. Just to better understand whats going on.

I woke up with a yawn on Monday morning. I closed my eyes to remember the sweet setting of a place I like to call: MY DREAMLAND! And that's when it hit me, no

I mean it literally hit me. 'It' is my alarm clock. Being hit in the face caused me to jump out of my bed and land in front of the closet. Ok that was weird. I opened the closet door and picked out a Bright red T-shirt and some shorts, you know like the kind from American Eagle with the plaid desigh on them? Yeah those are the ones. I got dressed, then wondered what time is it anyway? I went back to my bed and picked up the alarm clock and read the time. 9:00... 9:00?! I'm late for school! I'm usually late anyway, but mom always gets mad when I'm late. I ran down the stairs, picked up a pancake of the stove (it's weird, heat never really effected me), slipped on my shoes and ran out the door. Once I was bolting down the sidewalk my mom asked,"Don't you want me to drive you to school, Dax?". "No it's ok mom, I'll probably get there faster running anyway.", I called back. It's weird, whenever I run, it's always extremely fast.

When I got close to the school I slowed down and looked at the sign out front. It read: Breeze City Elemantary School.

 

 

 

 

[spoiler=Chapter 2]

I walked into the school's office. "Hey, Kathy.", I greeted the secratary. "Hi, Dax. Sign in." She was referring to a form all late students signed telling who they were, what reason they were late, what time they came to school, and if they were packing or buying for lunch. I filled it out and the secratary gave me a late slip to give to the teacher. Most of the classroom doors were closed so I ran through the halls. Once I wasat the backdoor of the school I slipped out. OK I know it sounds like I'm skipping school but keep reading. I walked up the wood ramp that lead to the outside classrooms. My teacher opended the door so I could get my stuff to head off to Social Studies. As 45 miniutes of boring passed by we were learning about The Constitution, I couldn't wait to get to Science. The bell rang, and I was relieved. Social Studies was ok when we were learning about Native Americans, but now Social Studies is filled with powdered wigs and coattails. In Science we learned about the pl--

Ok I'm going to skip to after school.

I walked out the front door with my friends Brian and Sydney. Brian and Sydney weren't good friends, but they still hung out with me. They had wierd friendship, if I can call it that. Brian had asked me if i wanted to come over to his house. "Hold on lemme ask." I walked over to my mom's car and asked her if I could go to Brian's. she said, "Yes you can go over, but have his mom bring you home by 6:00." As we were riding to Brian's house, a cat was running toward us between Brian's car and Sydney's house, well it looked like a cat but umm--- how can I put this, LIKE 20 FEET TALL! Me and Brian jumped out of the car and were thinking what is this? It wasn't really runing, but more like bucking. It crouched down like it was going to pounce at us, that's when we realized Sydney was riding it. "Well don't just stand there, HELP!", yelled Sydney. Since this was a "cat" Sydney was thinking of a cat's enemies, dogs. As soon as she thought dogs a whole buch of dogs were runing up the road. The dogs started to bite the cat, which hardly did anything. Then I got an idea. I ran for a stop sigh on the corner of the 4-way intrsection, so when the "cat" slashed at me I would jump out of the way and have a weapon, and that's what happened. I took the stop sign club and whacked it in the head, it didn't do much, so I tried to take the stop sign off, I failed. So I thought if Sydney had a "power" I might have one too. I already knew it wasn't super strength so I tried the second best thing I could think of: Telekenisis.

 

 

The characters Brian and Sydney in Chapter 2 are inspired by my real life friends. Brian is also on Yu-Gi-Oh card maker. He's Xion

[Twig]

I'll probably do a Twig Breaking News on this. And no, that's not a good thing. This will be reviewed when I come back.

[Dizzy~]

I don't think this is any good either. D: I added a little more so it might be somewhat better. Usually adventure/action story isn't good until there's adventure/ action =P