DL Posted June 4, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 4, 2010 Seriousness can be showed without hurting the protagonists xD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
El Make Posted June 4, 2010 Report Share Posted June 4, 2010 Takako is so epic! And he insults people! This is awesomez!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ultimate Assassin Ninjew Posted June 5, 2010 Report Share Posted June 5, 2010 Seriousness can be showed without hurting the protagonists xD Well that's no fun. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted June 5, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 5, 2010 @El - Yep xD Thus Takako is my fav. character xP @Ninjew - The action will come later, don't worry xD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dranzer Posted June 5, 2010 Report Share Posted June 5, 2010 Takako is so epic! And he has no taste in fashion! This is awesomez!!!! Fixe'd Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ultimate Assassin Ninjew Posted June 5, 2010 Report Share Posted June 5, 2010 @El - Yep xD Thus Takako is my fav. character xP @Ninjew - The action will come later' date=' don't worry xD[/quote'] I think it should be sooner then later. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted June 10, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 10, 2010 @Dranzer - xD New chapter added. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Neo Fusion Posted June 10, 2010 Report Share Posted June 10, 2010 Kuchiku=extermination, expulsion, destructioncoolbut did u have to put last part in -__-I woulda just edited Kuchiku in place of Ikatsuki in the previous chapo great another eye power...sounds cool thomade me sound like a jerk tho -.- like Neji with Hinata :/ah well, my strategy workedlookin forward to the next one Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ultimate Assassin Ninjew Posted June 10, 2010 Report Share Posted June 10, 2010 Lol that's probably your funniest and well thought out chapters. I enjoyed it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted June 10, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 10, 2010 I LIKE the last part. It emphasizes that Fuuta really doesn't trust people with much information xD Also, did you think the Fuuta / Kaori thing believable? (as in, would she have been able to do this, when he said that?) I had fun making Fuuta say, that, though. I will admit And yes, more ocular jutsu. EDIT: Funny? How? o.o Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Neo Fusion Posted June 10, 2010 Report Share Posted June 10, 2010 o yeah, is the new guy Une? doesn't sound like it from his appearanceand u did develop my character some, that's goodlast part, meh aight Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ultimate Assassin Ninjew Posted June 10, 2010 Report Share Posted June 10, 2010 Its funny about how Fuuta easily manipulated her and almost spilled her secret. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted June 10, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 10, 2010 Yep, I developed him into an jabroni :D (joke) Anyway, Une was the guy at the very beginning who then dissapeared before the lights went on. The new guy... guess. I'll tell you, he's active in our club, sometimes. EDIT: No it's not xD It's sad, and dramatic xP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dranzer Posted June 10, 2010 Report Share Posted June 10, 2010 Matsuda?I'm sory I couldn't stop laughing when I saw the Death Note referance. Oh and edit the title it says chapter 16. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted June 10, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 10, 2010 xD Yes, now that I think about it, there WAS a guy named Matsuda, huh? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dranzer Posted June 14, 2010 Report Share Posted June 14, 2010 Yeah.And he killed Kira*sad face* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Megami Seika Posted June 18, 2010 Report Share Posted June 18, 2010 I wonder... I asked Deus' date=' but he was no help... Do you think I should I break up with Kailyn?[/quote'] Why! You, more than anyone, should find a few 'why's...But, I think it'd be better if me and Kailyn stay friends. Or, rather, I wonder if it would be... No why do you want to break up with her! Exactly. You should be able to find out why. But... I don't rightly know myself... I just have a feeling.... Also, the bold.Sigh.... You... Ugh... Right, I expected that... oh, and before you say "We agreed on the x-factor" I agreed to nothing.I dont care about the X-factor! You cant ever be happy can you? There has to be something rong to make you feal good right! Unless you give me a Valid reson why You want to Break up with her your just being Stupid.... HAHAHA! You REALLY want a valid reason? Then I'll give you the valid reason. All of this, all that I have done thus far, I did simply for one goal: To examine human reactions, and the emotions that go with those reactions. And I mean EVERYTHING. Anyway, that was my intention from the start, when I asked Kailyn to be my OGF; to examine human reactions on one of the two strongest emotions, Love. Kailyn proved to be... less emotional than I had thought. You, on the other hand, were perfect to examine. All the emotion you displayed was very beneficiary to my goal, thus, I must thank you. I have found another girl who has a wide range of emotions, and thus, am trying to convince her to be my OGF. Of course, I do this, too, for the sake of research. NWhihc, brings me to this: The opposite emotion of love, hate. Do you know why Deus wanted you to hate him? I don't know either, but I'm quite sure it's because the two strongest emotions are love and hate. If he couldn't reach one extreme, he tried the other. I must admit, a small part of me agrees with that. But... who am I to talk about emotions, hmm?...You might never even read this... But' date=' in case you do, I might as well put it out there. I'm not going to apologize, for I have already done that. I will, however, sincerely thank you. I feel, thanks to you, I was able to understand my own emotions better. Anyway, once again, thank you. ~Yours truly, Linky[/quote']I have to link...... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ultimate Assassin Ninjew Posted June 18, 2010 Report Share Posted June 18, 2010 Whyd you post this in at least two places? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaos Dralcax Posted June 18, 2010 Report Share Posted June 18, 2010 this is a YUGIOH forum! what is naruto doin' here? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ultimate Assassin Ninjew Posted June 18, 2010 Report Share Posted June 18, 2010 Are you on crack? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted June 18, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 18, 2010 @Dranzer - xD Dun worry, I was already spoilered with that. @Ninjew - Try every single one of my active threads, and then some. @Warriormage - ...Go read the rules -_____________- Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ultimate Assassin Ninjew Posted June 18, 2010 Report Share Posted June 18, 2010 Yeah she posted even on threads you werent apart of. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted July 7, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 7, 2010 New chapter added! >:D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
El Make Posted July 7, 2010 Report Share Posted July 7, 2010 D: That chapter was good... But you put me in one of those gay outfits Dra-man's character designed? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted July 7, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 7, 2010 xDDDDD It's par with the course. You want to be part of an evil organization, ya gotta make do with their fashion sense xD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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