Spirit of DMG Posted May 12, 2010 Report Share Posted May 12, 2010 Chapter 12 reminded me of Uryu, for some reason. Oh, and Ecchi, I thought we'd agreed that Dark Chakra would be my character's Keke Genkai. Anyway, good work, Jimmy, I like it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted May 12, 2010 Author Report Share Posted May 12, 2010 Really? Anyway, you can control dark energy like you can your chakra. But for jutsu, it's KG time. And yes, A-kun is the guy in the middle, and leader. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dranzer Posted May 13, 2010 Report Share Posted May 13, 2010 I new me and fusion were releated somehow.But are the past legends(BT,Madara and Niashi) be in the series. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted May 14, 2010 Author Report Share Posted May 14, 2010 Well, not related as in cousins, but you ARE both from the same organization. Also, maybe they will be. probably. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ultimate Assassin Ninjew Posted May 14, 2010 Report Share Posted May 14, 2010 Good chapter. Which one am I? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted May 15, 2010 Author Report Share Posted May 15, 2010 Ryujo. Ryu = Dragon. jo ~jew And that's the story behind YOUR name. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ultimate Assassin Ninjew Posted May 15, 2010 Report Share Posted May 15, 2010 Sweetness. Can't wait to see what i do. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted May 16, 2010 Author Report Share Posted May 16, 2010 Oh, I have a feeling you and El make will like the next chapter. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ultimate Assassin Ninjew Posted May 16, 2010 Report Share Posted May 16, 2010 Oh I can't wait. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted May 20, 2010 Author Report Share Posted May 20, 2010 New chapter added. =3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Neo Fusion Posted May 20, 2010 Report Share Posted May 20, 2010 whoa coolel make vs ninjew ftwin 3rd to last para tho, u said Ryuji and not Ryujofelt kinda short, but w.e Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted May 20, 2010 Author Report Share Posted May 20, 2010 It was around 400something words. Also, gotta fix XD I've been watching Toradora too much. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ultimate Assassin Ninjew Posted May 20, 2010 Report Share Posted May 20, 2010 I like the new chapter. However I feel you didn't have to have bandage son my face, but its fine. Then next off I would have done more damage and had more surprises then that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dranzer Posted May 21, 2010 Report Share Posted May 21, 2010 Epic new chap.But why do I awlays sound like I'm about to rape my enemy. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted May 21, 2010 Author Report Share Posted May 21, 2010 O.o How so? @Ninjew - The bandages are special >.> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ultimate Assassin Ninjew Posted May 21, 2010 Report Share Posted May 21, 2010 Uh huh, if they turn out bad. I'm just gonna start killing characters. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
El Make Posted May 21, 2010 Report Share Posted May 21, 2010 :D I'm not a loser! But since when do I have a sword...... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted May 21, 2010 Author Report Share Posted May 21, 2010 Since you held it the first time you appeared, that's when. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
El Make Posted May 21, 2010 Report Share Posted May 21, 2010 O.o I need to start paying attention some more....... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted May 21, 2010 Author Report Share Posted May 21, 2010 Heheh... I know, subtle details are hard to catch, but they're there. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spirit of DMG Posted May 22, 2010 Report Share Posted May 22, 2010 So, I was mentioned, and then forgotten...I feel so loved... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted May 28, 2010 Author Report Share Posted May 28, 2010 Yes, isn't that awesome? Also, new chapter added. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Neo Fusion Posted May 28, 2010 Report Share Posted May 28, 2010 some minor mistakes, not a lot Ryuji=Ryujonice chap, but is Takako's jutsu like Gaara's but with a sword thrown in the mix?figures youd make urself and el make the level of a kage -.- Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dranzer Posted May 28, 2010 Report Share Posted May 28, 2010 Oh yeah I DID expect him to run stright forward yelling the name of his attack. As for the record how can you restore most than half of your chakra in 5 minutes or something. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted May 28, 2010 Author Report Share Posted May 28, 2010 Most Akatsuki members are Kage-level. ;3 Also, darn it, that mistake AGAIN DX Also, you'll learn about Takako more in the next couple of chapters. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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