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Naruto: Legend of the Kyubi Shards (chapter 116 added!)


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Yes...and perhaps....altho I'm starting to think it might reach 200 @_@

 

Maybe not, but somewhere along those lines.

 

I'll get working on the new chapter today XP

 

 

And I'm NOT as evil as Fusion, thus there was none of my famous fillers.

 

 

Oh yeah, I should totally make KS one-shots from time to time to show Fusion my epic filler skills.

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Damn you...

DMG vs Black was supposed to be EPIC.

Sure, that totally fit the two of them, but I wanted something cooler >__>

Otherwise, Madara vs Keiko was unexpected, but a good fight. Got a good idea of Keiko's abilities and now the plot's moving forward with Madara's jig revealed.

Although, I can't imagine Naruto would let Madara keep competing in the tournament. He'll probably pick a fight with him right then and there.

Guess I'll have to wait and see, good chapter.

One thing though, during the DMG and Black "fight", there were some times I couldn't tell who was doing what for a bit because the "he's" were a bit ambiguous.

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If I've learned anything from Dragonball is that not all fights need to be epic, nor do fights have to be epic all the way through, to make a tournament good.

 

And it was fitting, so... ;DDDD

 

 

And well, think about it, don't you think Naruto's changed?

 

In his youth he was so full of spirit but in his current age, he's actually opted peace, safety, and a stable life over everything. I'll touch that point later, but the current Naruto would be OOC if he decided to fight Madara then and there.

 

I do look forward to the rest of this tournament tho, can't wait to finally show Mikuo at his full power xD

 

 

Also, I'll look at it, tho I know you're right, I remember using quite a few "he"s in the very short fight with a lame ending.

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Think about it. What reasons do you think Naruto would have not to try and fight Madara?

 

Keep in account Narruto is more mature and thinks before acting now.

 

He wouldn't get into a fight unless he was sure he could win, or there was no other way. He knew the contestants were strong enough not to get killed by Madara, but he does intend to step in in the end, when Madara would hopefully be worn out from the fighting.

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Huh.

Didn't realize the matches were progressive.

 

Funny. I didn't either :D

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*is fantasizing Fuuta vs Zeru*

 

Haha, that WOULD be an epic match........and probable, considering Zeru's motivation to win this. o.O

 

Takako vs Mikuo --> Epic off the wall shizz

 

Inorite? :333 Best character vs. Character who no one has seen the true potential of

 

Matsuda vs Shisuke -->Shisuke getting his butt handed to him should be fun :3

 

Oh really? ;D Notice how Shisuke beat Kaori WITHOUT removing his guardian seal~ <3

 

So wait...the remaining 4 are

Daisuke

 

Yup

 

Jin

 

Find that a little hard, considering he's unconcious in a forest due to Kai.

 

Kaori

 

...she lost to Shisuke, remember? .-.

 

Hayate

 

Yup :3

 

Right?

You're missin Kira and Ami.

 

So Kira, Daisuke, Ami, and Hayate.

 

Basically, 2 people from the New Akatsuki WILL have to face off ;D

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Well, Daisuke vs Ami is painfully obvious.

So Kira vs Hayate should be interesting to see.

Ah yes, Jin and Kai duked it out...forgot Jin didn't make it.

Right, skimming the bracket had me miss that v.v

Oh iiiiis it? :3

 

hehehehehehe

 

And since when do I resort to the obvious?~

 

Dohohohoh~ <3

 

And lolskim.

 

 

Also, dood

 

Re-reading KS. On chapter 11.

 

I'm actually surprised. The quality of my writing may have improved, but...the actual content has always been solid, even back then o.o

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Yup, I can agree with you there.

The content of the writing has been consistent for the entire time I've known you.

And believe me, consistency is good.

I know you don't resort to obviousness much, but then again, there are times when you do with an added twist to them.

...So basically, no matter what happens, I won't be surprised .-.

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Yup, I can agree with you there.

The content of the writing has been consistent for the entire time I've known you.

And believe me, consistency is good.

I know you don't resort to obviousness much, but then again, there are times when you do with an added twist to them.

...So basically, no matter what happens, I won't be surprised .-.

Cept if Daisuke loses

 

Lolol

 

Like that'll happen.

 

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*whistles*

 

And hooray for consistency :3

 

 

Kinda different from DEF, which went from okay (content-wise) to omgwtfbbq

 

XD

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hahaha

 

you're funny Fuse :3

 

 

And I sucked at writing before XD But Creative Writing class helped a LOT :3

 

I actually want to try somethin with you later, I will PM you an idea, to see what you'll think of it.

 

 

 

And.....re-reading KS....has gotten my flame for it to burn a bit brighter :)

 

I might (no promises) write that last arc I wanted.

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