DL Posted July 21, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 21, 2010 @Dranzer - Soon. I'd want to release them along with chapter 50, but I'll try to get them in sooner. @Demon - Ah. Also, new chapter added. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fusion X. Denver Posted July 21, 2010 Report Share Posted July 21, 2010 I guess Zeru will be fighting next chapterI thought Hayate was Naruto's son for a second, guess not though Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted July 21, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 21, 2010 Son... well, no. But maybe I'll add his son/daughter later. xD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
El Make Posted July 21, 2010 Report Share Posted July 21, 2010 Ok chap... nothing too great.... Meh. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted July 21, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 21, 2010 It was all I could do since I woke up this morning >,> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
El Make Posted July 21, 2010 Report Share Posted July 21, 2010 So, you're point? I expect better from you DL! BETTER! I best not see anymore chapters like this... Or I'll murder you! >:3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NeoDemonX Posted July 21, 2010 Report Share Posted July 21, 2010 So they found the cave that Naruto is in and Naruto's Guard has a shard, would you thing Naruto would have it, also it chapter 36 is was good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted July 21, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 21, 2010 @Demon - Well, you'll find out soon. @El - >_______> it was a good chapter nontherless. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
El Make Posted July 21, 2010 Report Share Posted July 21, 2010 It was a meh chapter DL, it wasn't bad, it wasn't all that good. MEH. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted July 21, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 21, 2010 If you saw what happens in the next few chapters, you would think it good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
El Make Posted July 21, 2010 Report Share Posted July 21, 2010 No, I wouldn't. This chapter is meh, and that's all there is to it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spirit of DMG Posted July 21, 2010 Report Share Posted July 21, 2010 ...so, wait, if this is good compaired to the next few chapters...well, it was decent. I want to see what Zeru does in the net chapter. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HitoKage Posted July 22, 2010 Report Share Posted July 22, 2010 So far on 30. Very nice. Though I think there is a typo on 29, isn't next supposed to be neck? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted July 22, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 22, 2010 I shall check on that. Also, thank you. @El - >_________________> @DMG - No, this chapter is good because of what happens in next few chapters. New chapter being added. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dranzer Posted July 22, 2010 Report Share Posted July 22, 2010 Damn Zeru got his ass kicked in taijutsu. But hey he has the uberly epic fire Kekegenkai.So is the fire wall "that" Fuuta was talking about. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted July 22, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 22, 2010 Yes, he got PWNed. Also, yes that's what Fuuta was talking about. Also, man, I got some AMAZING ideas for the future of this fic... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NeoDemonX Posted July 22, 2010 Report Share Posted July 22, 2010 Hmmm chapter 37 was very good and hahaha that a powerful taijutsu and I see now why Naruto don't have the shard. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
El Make Posted July 22, 2010 Report Share Posted July 22, 2010 A step up from the previous chapter. That's all I have to say. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted July 22, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 22, 2010 @Demon - Yep. =3 Thanks for likin the chapter. Also, I thought it was about time I introduced a taijutsu expert. @El - >:33333333333333333333333333 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted July 24, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 24, 2010 New chapter added. And character Bios added to 2nd post. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fusion X. Denver Posted July 24, 2010 Report Share Posted July 24, 2010 Should change the title to chapter 38And nice fight, it's like Tsuna vs LeeSortaEDIT: BIOS?Must look2nd EDIT:1st 3 all have water...Sayuki's total is 18?That's...not that good1 other thing: Kage level is around 35 (those are the stats of the Sannin anyway)Other than that, good bios DL Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted July 24, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 24, 2010 They ARE from the mist, so that;s their tendency. Also, Fusion, I'm not basing my stats off of that. Just consider 22 Kage-level. Also, don't just see the stats. Remember jutsu as well (or you are going to kill me for YOUR stats) And yes, kinda like a fire gaara vs. Lee. Next chapter is epic. And I will add it now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dranzer Posted July 24, 2010 Report Share Posted July 24, 2010 Damn Zeru is getting his ass kicked.And it is REALY Gaara vs Leeish. Wait does that mean Zeru can do a fire version of Gaara's Sand Funeral Technique.Because it would be epic. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fusion X. Denver Posted July 24, 2010 Report Share Posted July 24, 2010 Oh your stats are differentAlright then, so Sayuki isn't bad and Daisuke is pretty good Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted July 24, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 24, 2010 Actualy >,> I won't answer that. xD Any comments on the bios, Dranzer? EDIT: @Fusion - Although 22 is just a guess, yes, Daisuke is pretty good. At least, in his Water Demon Form. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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