DL Posted July 16, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 16, 2010 Kk, posted chater 32. Also, yes, Hikaru. He;s not a ninja :/ And he's more like Niizuma Eiji than L, but, both Eiji and L were created by the same 2 people, so, close enough xD Also, I picture Hikaru as Niizuma. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dranzer Posted July 16, 2010 Report Share Posted July 16, 2010 Dl I hate you.I hate you from the deeps of my soul. And wait so Naruto is dead...and how many years after Madara's Bijuu revival was the series taking place on? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted July 16, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 16, 2010 Why do you hate my soul? :/ Also, Naruto isn't dead. Didn't you get the hint from the blond guy with an orange and white cloak who gave Ami a shard, and the piece of orange and white cloth at the site of the 2nd shard? :/ Also, the next chapter will give you an idea of how long it's been. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
El Make Posted July 16, 2010 Report Share Posted July 16, 2010 >.><.< Even when Takako isn't meant to be part of the chapter, he still gets a line in.... >:3 And Futa (lolz) should be fighting next chap or something, right? While Zeru sits on the sidelines like always? >______> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dranzer Posted July 16, 2010 Report Share Posted July 16, 2010 This is why I hate DL.And also never noticed that.I pay attention mostly to the fighting scenes,and skip the background description. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted July 16, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 16, 2010 Bad Dranzer =x= You misses so MUCH. @El - Lolz. Hopefully YOU at least noticed it? :/ Now guess who the 9th Hokage is =3 (8th being Jin, 7th being Naruto) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dranzer Posted July 16, 2010 Report Share Posted July 16, 2010 Umm either someone with a shard or someone newly introduced. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted July 16, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 16, 2010 Come on, think someone from the original series ;D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
El Make Posted July 16, 2010 Report Share Posted July 16, 2010 Please tell me it's not Kono.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dranzer Posted July 16, 2010 Report Share Posted July 16, 2010 Hooly sheet.It's Konohamaru isn't it? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fusion X. Denver Posted July 17, 2010 Report Share Posted July 17, 2010 There's a discrepancy hereIf I recall correctly, you said this took place WAY after the incident with Madara (though that may have just been an incorrect assumption, or you may have said that in Akatsuki I think) “Have you been reading that book again? That’s all a bunch of fiction from who knows how many decades ago.” Kaori called to him.That was an excerpt from the first chapterPlus, you said Naruto was the 6th Hokage, but now you say he's the 7th“You mean the Leaf Village’s sixth Hokage? Yeah, I heard about him, but let’s face it, he’s leagues above you,” Kaori said with a small smirk.Excerpt from 2nd chapter Stick with your facts DL >.>Otherwise, it would be Frickin Awesome if I fought NarutoI'll definitely lose, but still Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NeoDemonX Posted July 17, 2010 Report Share Posted July 17, 2010 Hmmm the 31 chapter was great and good the end of the fight was good. 32 chapter was so awesome man because now they are going to try to find Naruto. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spirit of DMG Posted July 17, 2010 Report Share Posted July 17, 2010 Oh god.... What is wrong with you? A better question to ask Ecchi-Chan would be "what's right with you?"It's a much shorter list. Only a couple of things. Wait, that kid, at the Ramen Shop! He wouldn't happen to be Kiba Inuzuka, would he? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HitoKage Posted July 17, 2010 Report Share Posted July 17, 2010 Was able to read the first chapter, will read the rest later, good job Hirako. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted July 17, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 17, 2010 @Fusion - The first one, Kaori isn't sure, it was just a random estimate she made to try and get Daisuke to stop being an idiot :/As for the second one, I admit, that was a mistake which should have been corrected ages ago, since Danzo was the 6th >,> @LordDemonX - Thanks, I was counting on the fact people were gonna like that. @DMG - xD @HitoKage - Thank you, I try xD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fusion X. Denver Posted July 17, 2010 Report Share Posted July 17, 2010 Danzo was a fill-in, he was never officially inductedBut yeah, just tick with seventh for nowDranzer and I fighting Konohamaru...lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted July 17, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 17, 2010 So you figured it out it was Konohamaru even though I didn't state it? *phew* And I have some tricks in mind... Imagine someone creating two rasengans.... then slamming them together... (*-*) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dranzer Posted July 17, 2010 Report Share Posted July 17, 2010 So knew it was Kono. And also...Zeru gets to fight,yes!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted July 17, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 17, 2010 Perhaps, Dranzer, perhaps. xD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
El Make Posted July 18, 2010 Report Share Posted July 18, 2010 I knew it was Kono.... I swear, if he knows Sage Mode or Rasen-release, I'll murder you DL.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NeoDemonX Posted July 18, 2010 Report Share Posted July 18, 2010 I like the new chapter, it was well written. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spirit of DMG Posted July 18, 2010 Report Share Posted July 18, 2010 Awww, so now Fusion gets to fight Tenten? When am I gonna do something that fun... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted July 18, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 18, 2010 @DMG - ...Tenten? @El - Ranserelease? :/ @LordDemonX - Thank you, I try. xD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fusion X. Denver Posted July 18, 2010 Report Share Posted July 18, 2010 There a new chapter today or tomorrow? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spirit of DMG Posted July 19, 2010 Report Share Posted July 19, 2010 No new chapter. At least not today. not today. not today. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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