Aero~ Posted March 16, 2010 Report Share Posted March 16, 2010 [align=center]Shadow of FateChapter one: My Sandwich Picnic Turns Into A Death Trap[/align] "Wait up, Jink!" thirteen-year-old-Fick said, gasping for breath. "Geez. We're not racing or anything." Fick caught up, then grabbed his knees, trying to catch his breath. Then, he uprighted himself. "What a good friend you are!" he smiled, giving his thirteen-year-old-friend-Jink a playful shove. He caught Jink by surprise, and he about fell down, his dirty-blonde hair covering his eyes. They were heading for the woods to have a picnic with their friend Rouge. The sun beat down on them as they walked the dirt path. Fick could hear the should of rocks skidding along the dirt where he'd kicked them. He was thinking about a book he'd been reading about swordplay. It'd always been one of his best interests. "Almost there." Jink said. The woods was coming into Fick's vision now. It was a long walk from his house to the woods, but it was one of his favorite places. The trees seemed to grow bigger as he neared them. They approached the woods. Tall grass covered Fick's legs from his view. He sun rays were less potent under this canopy of leaves. "Where is she?" Fick pondered. "Near." Jink replied, smiling goofily at Fick. The same smile he'd given him right before he sprayed that Coke in Fiicks face. The same smile he'd given him after releasing a family of bunnies in Ficks room. "Alright. What are you going to do this time?" he sayed, pronouncing the last two words the way he would say 'Dumpster'. "Oh, nothing." Jink whistled. "Just thought I'd......." he started. Fick was turned the other way, waiting for a response, but by the time he turned to ses why Jink quit talking, wich kinda scared him, since Jink was always talking, Jink was already half way up the tree. "What in the world are you doing?" "I thought it might give me a better view.", Jink said, looking down with a muleish smile. Jink made his way to the top of the tree, not falling once, and looked over the forest. "There she is!" Jink shoulted, jumping down. "Ouch! My leg!" Fick said something super intelligent, like "haha" or something. Jink got to his feet. "I'll guide the way." Fick followed Jink for about 50 feet then the saw Rouge. They walked forward, then took there seat. "I brought sandwiches." Fick said. "And I broke my leg!" Jink said with a humorous look on his face. Rouge laughed, her black hair bouncing up and down over her face. "Did you mean that?" Rouge questioned, flicking her hair back again. "Never more!" Jink mused. Fick opened his pack. Sure enough, he pulled out 3 wrapped bologna sandwiches. Now here's the bad part. He was only 1 bite into the sandwich when he heard a noise behind them. "Did you here that?" Fick asked. "I think. If you heard a close sound of rustling leaves and snapping twigs." anwsered Rouge. The color drained out of Fick's face. There it was again. Then, out of nowhere, this green, scaly creature appeared by Fick. Imagine a lizard. Now imagine a lizard with a third eye and huge yellow teeth. Finally, multiply it's size by eighty-two. You might have come somewhere near to the size of this thing. Fick froze with terror, and Jink and Rouge were already half way across the clearing. The thing flicked it's tongue out. Fick winced. Then, out of fear, he threw the sandwich at it. Stupid move, huh? Right? Right? Wrong. The creature was caught by surprise. Fick was still parylized. But the creature was flailing around, trying to get mayo out of it's eyes. Then, something flashed by Fick. The creature must have blinked out the mayo, because it bared it's teeth at him and lunged. But it missed. Fick was stunned. How? Then he realized he was quickly moving away from it. Being..... carried? What? He must not have felt it until then. He was being carried through the woods. By an unknown stranger. Then he felt the ground under his feet, and bolted off. Just your typical Sunday afternoon. Being attacked by a random monster. Just being carried to safety by a random stranger Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Dizzy~ Posted March 16, 2010 Report Share Posted March 16, 2010 lol its pretty good, this makes me wanna write a story.... brb Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jolta Posted March 17, 2010 Report Share Posted March 17, 2010 That's a good story... Can't wait for more. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aero~ Posted March 18, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 18, 2010 Thanks, you two. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Dizzy~ Posted March 22, 2010 Report Share Posted March 22, 2010 when are you gonna make chapter 2? im "waiting" for it! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aero~ Posted March 22, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 22, 2010 When I get bored. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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