Catman25 Posted March 14, 2010 Report Share Posted March 14, 2010 Used a comic stock for the bg. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dissonance Posted March 14, 2010 Report Share Posted March 14, 2010 Dislike the yellow light, I love the concept. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Catman25 Posted March 14, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 14, 2010 Thanks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EHN. Posted March 14, 2010 Report Share Posted March 14, 2010 Yeah the yellow is slightly distratcing. From what I see the depth is good and lighting is great. Also like the concept. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
White Hollow Posted March 14, 2010 Report Share Posted March 14, 2010 Dislike the yellow light' date=' I love the concept.[/quote'] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Catman25 Posted March 14, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 14, 2010 Thanks. Another sig up. Didn't feel like making a new thread. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JG. Posted March 14, 2010 Report Share Posted March 14, 2010 Lighting is off on first, not as much on 2nd though, still a little though. Nice concept for 1st, 2nd is standard C4D usage =P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Snitch Posted March 14, 2010 Report Share Posted March 14, 2010 2nd seems slightly oversharp'd. nice concepts though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Niño Posted March 14, 2010 Report Share Posted March 14, 2010 Dislike the C4D(?) effect that cuts off in one of the comic book squares and continues in another, other than that, shexy. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
White Hollow Posted March 15, 2010 Report Share Posted March 15, 2010 the second one is better Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dissonance Posted March 15, 2010 Report Share Posted March 15, 2010 Dislike the yellow light' date=' I love the concept.[/quote'] the second one is better Gosh, you just post all sorts of helpful comments in this thread, don't you? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
White Hollow Posted March 15, 2010 Report Share Posted March 15, 2010 well I don't think that the second one needs something else Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Niño Posted March 15, 2010 Report Share Posted March 15, 2010 I can think of at least one, now you try and CnC properly. - Once I notice the lighting effect to the right of the focal on V1 my eyes get very distracted, perhaps make it more opaque? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dissonance Posted March 15, 2010 Report Share Posted March 15, 2010 Speaking of, I don't think I've critiqued the second one yet. The flow is very subtle, but definitely there. A big issue I have with it though, is that it all leads the eye up to the top of the tag...but then there is nothing to stop the eye/redirect it back to the tag. The eye wants to simply travel off the work. The c4d on the right of the helmet does a lot to stop the flow, although not necessarily in a good way. All the blue makes it very soothing and quiet, seems appropriate for an outer-space kind of theme. It also actually contrasts really well with your first tag, I don't know if that was intentional or not. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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