Need help improving combo

[JadenxAtemYAOI]

I'm trying to make a burn combo that deals as most damage as I can. Here's what I have so far. The second I need help with because I don't now any deck thinners that can help me find the cards quicker.

 

Nightmare archfiend-1

fatal abacus(2)

revival gift-1

flash of the forbidden spell

barrel behind the door

 

Altogether it deals only 4100 life point damage

 

I have this one too. It's more of a process combo but it's average

 

morphing jar

magical thorn(2)

book of taiyou(3)

book of moon(3)

card destruction

swords of revealing light

 

Altogether this one only deals 15,000 life point damage. I think

It goes like this set morphing jar face down. Set 2 magical thorns, 1 book of taiyou, and 1 book of moon face down. then activate SORL to stop your opponent from attacking. They may have used up their hand potentially. Anyway flip morphing jar face up (possibly no damage) Then activate book of moon to flip it face down. Then activate book of taiyou to flip morphing jar face up. You've just dealt 5000 points of damage. You might have card destruction in your hand so set it. If you have book of moon and taiyou then set down book of moon. Activate book of moon now morphing jar is face down. Then play book of taiyou to flip morphing jar face up. you've dealt another 5000 points of damage. Repeat if possible. then use card destruction. You've dealt 5000 points of damage again.

[Fraz]

3 Gift Card or 2 Gift Card and 1 Pathsd of destiny + Bad Reaction to Simochi/Nurse Reficule = 8000+

 

Magical Explosion/Blasting the Ruins + Wall of Revealing Light + Life Equalizer = Win Condition

 

Mass Driver + Tuner + Quillbolt Hedgehog + Imperial Iron Wall = Infinite burn loop

 

 

Those are all infinitely better burn combos.

[JadenxAtemYAOI]

3 Gift Card or 2 Gift Card and 1 Pathsd of destiny + Bad Reaction to Simochi/Nurse Reficule = 8000+

 

Magical Explosion/Blasting the Ruins + Wall of Revealing Light + Life Equalizer = Win Condition

 

Mass Driver + Tuner + Quillbolt Hedgehog + Imperial Iron Wall = Infinite burn loop

 

 

Those are all infinitely better burn combos.

Thank you and would these have a high probability of working on SA 09? My boyfriend and I made the bet that whoever won had to come to other's house for summer and stay there for the whole summer.