RoxasReaper Posted March 11, 2010 Report Share Posted March 11, 2010 I am going to make my own TV series complete with drama, horror, adventure, action, etc. It is going to be a zombie survival series about a post-appacalyptic world, i have already written the storyline and several books that i plan on publishing, i was just first posting this to see what other ppl thought of this idea. The show will be called "Zombie" nothing too special, a simple name but i promise veiwers will tune in every week to catch a new episode of there favorite characters surviving the impossible and more. So if you like my idea, let me know, if you dont like me idea, keep your comments to yourself unless there comments to help me. oh and i almost forgot, if you would like me to post a small portion of one of my books feel free to ask. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jazin Kay Posted March 12, 2010 Report Share Posted March 12, 2010 Don't. Even. Try. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
White Hollow Posted March 12, 2010 Report Share Posted March 12, 2010 Jazin don't be cruel. That sounds....impossible but I want to see your work Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RoxasReaper Posted March 12, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 12, 2010 Jazin don't be cruel. That sounds....impossible but I want to see your work by you saying "you want to see my work" does that mean youd like me to post some of my book? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
White Hollow Posted March 12, 2010 Report Share Posted March 12, 2010 yeah a chapter would be nice =) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RoxasReaper Posted March 12, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 12, 2010 yeah a chapter would be nice =) alright, want me to post it in here or a new thread? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
White Hollow Posted March 12, 2010 Report Share Posted March 12, 2010 I don't care Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Niño Posted March 12, 2010 Report Share Posted March 12, 2010 Here would be better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sander Posted March 12, 2010 Report Share Posted March 12, 2010 Another Zombie thing based on a Post-Apocalyptic era? Like there aren't dozens of those already out? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Enrise Posted March 12, 2010 Report Share Posted March 12, 2010 Another Zombie thing based on a Post-Apocalyptic era? Like there aren't dozens of those already out? At least he isn't doing a million-timed soap opera... And I think you need something, freshy, new, and...not-overused. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RoxasReaper Posted March 12, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 12, 2010 Here is my chapter, sorry it took so long to post, i was in school: Chapter 8“Here we go again” With a stern voice, Trevon yelled out “Hurry up already” as he called up towards Bryce and Nicole. Nicole and Bryce came back downstairs along with Trevon and everybody had already been down on the first floor waiting for them. “Took you guys long enough.” Trevon said as he looked at them. “What’s going on?” Bryce asked. “The house is surrounded.” Colt answered. Bryce looked out of the boarded up window and a hand came through a piece of plywood and attempted to grab Bryce. “sheet how did you not see them coming?” Bryce yelled as he avoided the grasp of the hand. “I was reading my magazine and I never even noticed them until just a few minutes ago, and I wouldn’t have even noticed them if I hadn’t heard them banging on the walls.” Colt replied. Josh then came from upstairs carrying three weapons; a wooden baseball bat, a shotgun, and a led pipe. He threw the shotgun to Jon who caught the weapon and then cocked it. The bat was thrown to Jed who caught it and began practicing his swinging. “We can hold our own, we can take them.” Josh yelled. “Are you crazy, there are at least a few hundred out there, we can’t take all of them it would be suicide.” Bryce argued. “Well man we got to do something before they knock down the door and are in our faces, I say we fight them off.” Colt yelled out. “Colt open that window and start shredding them down where they stand, don’t let them in, cut them down with the machine gun!” Trevon yelled. A grin grew on Colt’s face, he loved using the machine gun. “The rest of us will head upstairs to higher ground.” Trevon finished. Colt opened the window while everyone else headed towards the staircase, except for Mike. Mike ran to the door and began pressing buttons on a small metal pad. After pressing several buttons he then flipped a switch. A green light came on and a buzzing noise could be heard throughout the entire building. “What the hell are you doing Mike, what is that?” Jed asked. “It’s an electrical field that surrounds the house, it shocks and kills anything trying to get in.” Mike explained. Colt continued to mow down the field of zombies with his machine gun but it was still not enough. Finally the metal pad made a ding sound to let everyone know it was officially on. Mike let out a sigh and began moving towards the stair, he passed by another window were the wood covering the window broke and a flurry of hands grabbed Mike. “sheet, Mike no!” Colt let out a loud yell. Mike had been grabbed and had been bitten several times before Colt could even say goodbye, Mike was then pulled through the window and torn to shreds by the feasting ghouls. Blood dripped from the shards of glass on the window. Colt, now angry, lifted his machine gun and continued to mow down zombies. The window that Mike had been pulled through was now swarming with undead monsters, the entire first floor was swallowed within minutes. Colt packed up his gun and fled upstairs to the group. Colt then set up his gun at the top of the stairway on the second floor, a perfect place to protect the group. “Where is Mike?” Trevon asked. “He’s dead.” Colt replied. “We have no choice, your going to have to do “It”. Colt yelled out. Trevon suddenly had a saddened and surprised look on his face. “What’s “It”. Jon asked. “In case of emergencies we planted a bomb in the basement floor however we never actually expected to have to use it.” Trevon answered. Trevon then looked at Colt and nodded his head, Colt nodded back. “Alright listen to me Nicole, I need you to get these people out of here alive okay.” Trevon yelled as he cocked a pistol and shoved it into his back pocket. Trevon then began running down the stairs, once he got to the bottom floor Colt opened fire on the surrounding zombies. “What the hell is Trevon doing!?” Bryce yelled out. “He is going to detonate the bomb in the basement, we need to go now.” Nicole sadly said. “What!” Bryce replied. He looked at Trevon as he was smashing his way through the hoard of monsters and he began after him. Bryce began running down the stairs avoiding as many zombies as he could, Colt did not shoot while Bryce was on the stairs. Jack and Ghost followed closely behind Bryce. When the three reached the bottom floor that was flooded with zombies they began ripping and tearing there way through. Bryce caught a glimpse of Trevon as he opened a door and began downwards. “There” Bryce yelled and pointed to the now opened door. Jack pulled out his gun and began shooting zombies to make a path. After reaching the door to the basement, Ghost slammed the door closed after all three of them were through it. “Trevon?” Bryce yelled down the dark staircase. “Down here.” Someone replied. The three continued down the staircase and found Trevon on one knee tinkering with a small machine. “What is that?” Jack asked. “It’s a bomb we planted here when we first found this place, for emergencies, we never thought that we would actually have to use it.” Trevon continued to mess with the machine. “I can handle the bomb, you need to go.” Ghost announced. “What, I got this, don’t worry.” Trevon continued. “I am a trained professional, let me deal with the bomb.” Ghost asked again. Trevon then stood up and let Ghost go to work. “You guys might want to run.” Ghost told the three men. Trevon looked down the hall of the basement and noticed a big green door. “If we go back upstairs it will be suicide, we’ll have to escape through the basement somehow.” Bryce said. Trevon pointed to the green doors. “I think those are emergency fire doors, we can use them to escape.” Trevon told them. The group began towards the doors leaving Ghost to his work. “Where are they?” Nicole asked. “C’mon Jack you gotta make it out of there.” Bear said silently. Suddenly the huge building burst into flames, bricks and pieces of wood with fire on it lit up the night sky. “sheet” Bear yelled. The building began collapsing under its own weight due to the fire. Zombies could be seen on fire and dying. When the building fell to the ground the entire block shook, the monsters had been silenced. “Trevon, Bryce.” Nicole sadly said. She had a tear run down her eye when suddenly from the corner of her eye she noticed three men coming from around the other side. “Hey, were okay.” Jack yelled. Trevon got to the group first and Nicole hugged him. “I thought you were dead!” She exclaimed. “No, Ghost gave his life to save us, if it wasn’t for him id be the one burnt to a crisp right now.” Trevon admitted. “Ghost you were a good man, we will never forget the events of this day, thank you old friend.” Jack said goodbye to his long time friend Ghost who had obviously given his life to set off the bomb. The group was nearly a block away from the burning building and it was still smoldering brightly. “We need to hurry and get out of here, this fire and the explosion are going to attract a lot more zombies.” Jack said firmly. The group began walking towards West Valley, a small outskirt area of Anaconda. “West Valley is our pickup zone.” Jack thought to himself. “All I have to do is get these people to that area. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RoxasReaper Posted March 13, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 13, 2010 bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
White Hollow Posted March 13, 2010 Report Share Posted March 13, 2010 I would like to see chapter to 1 plz Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RoxasReaper Posted March 13, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 13, 2010 I have not typed Chapter 1 yet but i will post it as soon as i do i promisebut what did u think of the portion of chapter 8? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
White Hollow Posted March 13, 2010 Report Share Posted March 13, 2010 how can you make chapter 8 without chapter 1 made?and it looks kinda ok. post in fan fic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blamonchesix Posted March 13, 2010 Report Share Posted March 13, 2010 Nice. May you achieve your goal. You have my blessing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Windowlicker Posted March 13, 2010 Report Share Posted March 13, 2010 Sounds too much like Resident Evil to me. :/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RoxasReaper Posted March 14, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 14, 2010 well i wrote the entire book by hand, but when it came to typing i had lost my notebook containing chapters 1-6 so i had to type up chapters 7- the end so now that ive found the notebook i can type the other chapters, and it shouldnt sound like resident evil, there is only zombies, no super bio-weapon monsters Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Where are my COOKIES Posted March 14, 2010 Report Share Posted March 14, 2010 FYI. In chapter 8, "led pipe" is lead pipe. Also, I think "hoard of zombies" is "horde of zombies". Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RoxasReaper Posted March 14, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 14, 2010 FYI. In chapter 8' date=' "led pipe" is lead pipe. Also, I think "hoard of zombies" is "horde of zombies".[/quote'] ill look into it but im fairly sure its right Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RoxasReaper Posted March 18, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 18, 2010 mega bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Supreme Gamesmaster Posted March 18, 2010 Report Share Posted March 18, 2010 Right, well, let us know what your network of choice thinks of it, but in the meantime, reported. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
R3DN30N Posted March 18, 2010 Report Share Posted March 18, 2010 Here is my chapter' date=' sorry it took so long to post, i was in school: Chapter 8“Here we go again” With a stern voice, Trevon yelled out “Hurry up already” as he called up towards Bryce and Nicole. Nicole and Bryce came back downstairs along with Trevon and everybody had already been down on the first floor waiting for them. “Took you guys long enough.” Trevon said as he looked at them. “What’s going on?” Bryce asked. “The house is surrounded.” Colt answered. Bryce looked out of the boarded up window and a hand came through a piece of plywood and attempted to grab Bryce. “s*** how did you not see them coming?” Bryce yelled as he avoided the grasp of the hand. “I was reading my magazine and I never even noticed them until just a few minutes ago, and I wouldn’t have even noticed them if I hadn’t heard them banging on the walls.” Colt replied. Josh then came from upstairs carrying three weapons; a wooden baseball bat, a shotgun, and a led pipe. He threw the shotgun to Jon who caught the weapon and then cocked it. The bat was thrown to Jed who caught it and began practicing his swinging. “We can hold our own, we can take them.” Josh yelled. “Are you crazy, there are at least a few hundred out there, we can’t take all of them it would be suicide.” Bryce argued. “Well man we got to do something before they knock down the door and are in our faces, I say we fight them off.” Colt yelled out. “Colt open that window and start shredding them down where they stand, don’t let them in, cut them down with the machine gun!” Trevon yelled. A grin grew on Colt’s face, he loved using the machine gun. “The rest of us will head upstairs to higher ground.” Trevon finished. Colt opened the window while everyone else headed towards the staircase, except for Mike. Mike ran to the door and began pressing buttons on a small metal pad. After pressing several buttons he then flipped a switch. A green light came on and a buzzing noise could be heard throughout the entire building. “What the hell are you doing Mike, what is that?” Jed asked. “It’s an electrical field that surrounds the house, it shocks and kills anything trying to get in.” Mike explained. Colt continued to mow down the field of zombies with his machine gun but it was still not enough. Finally the metal pad made a ding sound to let everyone know it was officially on. Mike let out a sigh and began moving towards the stair, he passed by another window were the wood covering the window broke and a flurry of hands grabbed Mike. “s***, Mike no!” Colt let out a loud yell. Mike had been grabbed and had been bitten several times before Colt could even say goodbye, Mike was then pulled through the window and torn to shreds by the feasting ghouls. Blood dripped from the shards of glass on the window. Colt, now angry, lifted his machine gun and continued to mow down zombies. The window that Mike had been pulled through was now swarming with undead monsters, the entire first floor was swallowed within minutes. Colt packed up his gun and fled upstairs to the group. Colt then set up his gun at the top of the stairway on the second floor, a perfect place to protect the group. “Where is Mike?” Trevon asked. “He’s dead.” Colt replied. “We have no choice, your going to have to do “It”. Colt yelled out. Trevon suddenly had a saddened and surprised look on his face. “What’s “It”. Jon asked. “In case of emergencies we planted a bomb in the basement floor however we never actually expected to have to use it.” Trevon answered. Trevon then looked at Colt and nodded his head, Colt nodded back. “Alright listen to me Nicole, I need you to get these people out of here alive okay.” Trevon yelled as he cocked a pistol and shoved it into his back pocket. Trevon then began running down the stairs, once he got to the bottom floor Colt opened fire on the surrounding zombies. “What the hell is Trevon doing!?” Bryce yelled out. “He is going to detonate the bomb in the basement, we need to go now.” Nicole sadly said. “What!” Bryce replied. He looked at Trevon as he was smashing his way through the hoard of monsters and he began after him. Bryce began running down the stairs avoiding as many zombies as he could, Colt did not shoot while Bryce was on the stairs. Jack and Ghost followed closely behind Bryce. When the three reached the bottom floor that was flooded with zombies they began ripping and tearing there way through. Bryce caught a glimpse of Trevon as he opened a door and began downwards. “There” Bryce yelled and pointed to the now opened door. Jack pulled out his gun and began shooting zombies to make a path. After reaching the door to the basement, Ghost slammed the door closed after all three of them were through it. “Trevon?” Bryce yelled down the dark staircase. “Down here.” Someone replied. The three continued down the staircase and found Trevon on one knee tinkering with a small machine. “What is that?” Jack asked. “It’s a bomb we planted here when we first found this place, for emergencies, we never thought that we would actually have to use it.” Trevon continued to mess with the machine. “I can handle the bomb, you need to go.” Ghost announced. “What, I got this, don’t worry.” Trevon continued. “I am a trained professional, let me deal with the bomb.” Ghost asked again. Trevon then stood up and let Ghost go to work. “You guys might want to run.” Ghost told the three men. Trevon looked down the hall of the basement and noticed a big green door. “If we go back upstairs it will be suicide, we’ll have to escape through the basement somehow.” Bryce said. Trevon pointed to the green doors. “I think those are emergency fire doors, we can use them to escape.” Trevon told them. The group began towards the doors leaving Ghost to his work. “Where are they?” Nicole asked. “C’mon Jack you gotta make it out of there.” Bear said silently. Suddenly the huge building burst into flames, bricks and pieces of wood with fire on it lit up the night sky. “s***” Bear yelled. The building began collapsing under its own weight due to the fire. Zombies could be seen on fire and dying. When the building fell to the ground the entire block shook, the monsters had been silenced. “Trevon, Bryce.” Nicole sadly said. She had a tear run down her eye when suddenly from the corner of her eye she noticed three men coming from around the other side. “Hey, were okay.” Jack yelled. Trevon got to the group first and Nicole hugged him. “I thought you were dead!” She exclaimed. “No, Ghost gave his life to save us, if it wasn’t for him id be the one burnt to a crisp right now.” Trevon admitted. “Ghost you were a good man, we will never forget the events of this day, thank you old friend.” Jack said goodbye to his long time friend Ghost who had obviously given his life to set off the bomb. The group was nearly a block away from the burning building and it was still smoldering brightly. “We need to hurry and get out of here, this fire and the explosion are going to attract a lot more zombies.” Jack said firmly. The group began walking towards West Valley, a small outskirt area of Anaconda. “West Valley is our pickup zone.” Jack thought to himself. “All I have to do is get these people to that area.[/quote'] Wow, amazing kept me reading! Keep up the good work man! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FeralSnake Posted March 18, 2010 Report Share Posted March 18, 2010 FYI. In chapter 8' date=' "led pipe" is lead pipe. Also, I think "hoard of zombies" is "horde of zombies".[/quote'] ill look into it but im fairly sure its right No, "hoard" should be horde as Mr. Where are my Cookies pointed out. And led should be lead, I would know I'm majoring in English and have already written 3 Novels. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RoxasReaper Posted March 18, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 18, 2010 alright well no problems then ill just make some small changes and why supreme game master why may i ask am i reported, i havent done anything wrong except give my opinion and thoughts, last i checked im allowed to do that Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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