White Hollow Posted March 11, 2010 Report Share Posted March 11, 2010 Free to comment if you read this Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Niño Posted March 11, 2010 Report Share Posted March 11, 2010 More then one render? I wouldnt. Text is horrible and random blue flares across his face distract you from the focal(s) pixely bit at the top left V shape bit. So, no, yeah. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
White Hollow Posted March 11, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 11, 2010 okay its an epic fail thanks for commenting ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Niño Posted March 11, 2010 Report Share Posted March 11, 2010 Not an epic fail, just needs work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dissonance Posted March 11, 2010 Report Share Posted March 11, 2010 Waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay too busy. My eye can't find the focal, and there's so much crap everywhere on it, that I can't follow a flow. Overwhelming, cut out most of that stuff, including the second render. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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