just need some ocg help

[jack kenna]

not very good with ocg would love some help will happly give a rep away

 

 

your opponent must discard 1 card from his/her hand to attack this card

if this card is face up on your side of the field during your draw fase and you draw a trap card by showing the card to your opponent you my draw 1 more card from your deck

[Des ＨＥＲＯ]

Ok heres a fix.

 

your Opponant must discard 1 card from his/her hand to attack this card , if this card is face up on your side of the Field during your Draw Phase and you draw a Trap card.Show the Trap to your Opponant to draw 1 card.

 

Anyone could improve that.

[Uchiha Sasuke XII]

I'm back! :P

 

Your opponent must discard 1 card from his/her hand to attack this card. If this card is face up on your side of the field during your draw phase and you draw a Trap card, show it to your opponent and draw 1 more card from your deck.