Yugioh 5d's: Turbo city Prologue Up!

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Yugioh 5d's Turbo city: Prologue

 

A dark building out of sight by living being thing, 5 people, 3 boys and 2 girls, were inside. They were tied up against their will, by chains and were gagged by dirty old rags. Most of them tried to struggle but found no use to try to break free of the trap.

 

Out of the shadows 4 people dressed in a black and red mix robe appeared. They grabbed from their robe a black dagger. It gave off a red mist. They people in robes began to chant in unison. "Darkness covers the blinding light. Sacrificing blood to the black God. Our souls are his for the taking. Our essence in his for the taking. This WORLD OF SIN AND HATRED IS HIS".

 

During the chant the red mist grew thicker and a large figure grew from the mist. It had no specific shape or description except 5 red eyes -or at least appeared to be eyes- the "eyes" gathered in a straight row. The 5 people were panicking very much now. One of the men of the group passed out at the mere sight of the thing.

"It him the bl..." a woman said out of sheer excitement. Or at least tried to say before she was stopped by the tallest man of the robed people. "You cannot say his title. He will tear the living soul from your body. It will prevent you from being useful in "his" reincarnation because of the form and shape of the soul." he explained. She nodded her head and concentrated on the Black God.

 

The "eyes" of the monster became dark rays which pierced through the 5 people. The eyes of the innocent people went pitch black. The irises of the people's eyes turned into a dark shade of red. The black figure soon evaporated into a dark smoke. The people in robes placed the dagger back into their robes and they all smiled a devilish smile showing their Black eyes and Red iris's with perfect clarity.

 

They stared at what the black thing left. A tattoo that read the initials B.R. The 4 turned away with the same smile on their face. The tallest member of the 4 then said. "We have 9 now. The world will burn by the hand of Fire, Sins, darkness, and REVENGE!" The 4 walked into the shadows leaving the 5 newest members of their organization to rest, because the take-over of the world was about to begin.

[Stigma_Horrizone]

hey, spell the number , dont type them e.g. 5 people, 3 boys and 2 girls

corrected: five people, three boys, two girls.

 

2nd: put it on spoiler format:

[spoiler] text [/spoiler]

[Des ＨＥＲＯ]

When you put a spoiler make sure to show characters.How pathetic of me to say something that you already know.

 

Ill be interested in your fan fic.