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[align=center][spoiler=This Probably Is, Yes... My Best Card.]

 

I chose not to make the inside border gold because I don't agree with Konami about that. So, like it or not, that's how it is.

 

The Skorn

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1 "Ressurected" Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monsters

When this card is Synchro Summoned, place it on your opponent's side of the field in face-up Attack Position. This card cannot change its Battle Position. Once per turn, during your Battle Phase, if your opponent controls this card, you can attack yourself with this card. When you attack yourself with this card, select 4 names of monster, Spell, or Trap cards. Draw a random card in your Deck, and if one of the cards drawn was one of the names of a card you picked, place 1 Vengeance Counter on this card. Increase this card's ATK by 500 for each time this card attacks you directly. When there are 3 Vengeance Counters on this card, you win the Duel. You can attack your opponent with this card.

 

 

Please, I'd really like your opinions on this card, the effect as well as the gold rare & holo took a lot of time to plan out and actually do. I will rate any other cards posted here tommorow.[/align]

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Wow. Great card there. The art and the holo and the gold rare are epic (besides lack of inside border) and the effect is like nothing I have ever seen. Its a card that can win a duel single handedly that ISN'T broken! That takes some doing. OCG looks good as well, I appreciate that it is a completely unique card and OCG is difficult but it still looks fine to me.

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No it don't haha not in my onion haha just joking should be opinion ^_^ I'm funny today, not mad ^_^ I voted for crow If you don't belive me, check

 

What you think about these cards:?

 

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This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by Tributing 1 monster you control. This card gains the ATK and DEF equal to the Tributed monster. You can increase this cards Level equal to the Tributed monsters Level. This card cannot be destroyed by battle whit a monster whose Level is Higher than the monster used to Summon this card. Once per duel, you can chose 1 card in your Deck. This card gains the effect of the selected card.

 

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This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by Tributing 3 or more "Crystal Beast" monsters you control. Once per turn, you can place 1 "Crystal Beast" monster from your Deck to your Spell and Trap Card zone. If this card is destroyed when you have 3 or more "Crystal Beast" monsters on the field or in the Graveyard, Special Summon 1 "Rainbow Dragon" from your Deck, ignoring the Summoning condition.

 

Image are from Jazin Kay

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[spoiler=Aquamaster OCG and Rates]

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Lore:

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by Tributing 1 monster you control. This card gains the ATK and DEF equal to the Tributed monster. You can increase this cards Level equal to the Tributed monsters Level. This card cannot be destroyed by battle with a monster whose Level is higher than the monster used to Summon this card. Once during your duel' date=' you can chose 1 card in your Deck. This card gains the effect of the selected card.

 

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Lore:

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by Tributing 3 or more "Crystal Beast" monsters you control. Once per turn, you can place 1 "Crystal Beast" monster from your Deck to your Spell and Trap Card Zone. If this card is destroyed when you have 3 or more "Crystal Beast" monsters on the field or in the Graveyard, Special Summon 1 "Rainbow Dragon" from your Deck, ignoring the Summoning Conditions.

 

For the second one where it says if you have 3 or more CBs in your Deck it is basically saying 'if you Summoned this card', because it's impossible to Summon it any other way (except Summon Condition ignorment), and you have to send 3 CBs to the grave to Summon it. And it's fair to Summon a RD because of all the remove from play and destruction Summoning Conditions, etc... 8.7/10

 

The first one seems kinda OP, it gains the ATK and then you can gain effect, too. Say you have a DaD or JD or some Synchro in your Deck and you want that as an effect. That's kinda, you know... But it is interesting and a mediumly fresh idea. Good job. 8/10

 

 

So, can we have a contest here?

 

Also thanks so much everyone for rating my card ^.^

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This card is also treated as a Fiend-Type monster while face-up on the field. When this card is Summoned, decrease the ATK of 1 monster your opponent controls equal to it's Level x 300. This card gains ATK equal to the total Level of all WATER monsters in your Graveyard x 150. If this cards ATK is higher than your opponent's monsters, halve this cards ATK, until the End of the Damage Step only. If this cards Level is decreased, destroy this card at the End Phase.

 

Please point out the Ocg errors. Don't change the card effect. Just want help with ocg, but please come up with ideas how this card can be better.

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I do hope you know that this was what I meant, and not a sig.

 

[spoiler=Aquamaster Card Rate & OCG]

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This card is also treated as a Fiend-Type monster while face-up on the field. When this card is Summoned' date=' decrease the ATK of 1 monster your opponent controls equal to it[b']s[/b] Level x300. This card gains ATK equal to the total Level of all WATER monsters in your Graveyard x150. If this cards ATK is higher than (one of your, or the total ATK?) of your opponent's monsters, halve this cards ATK, until the End of the Damage Step only. If this cards Level is decreased, destroy this card at the End Phase.

 

IDK. The idea seems pretty neat and awesome. But did you intentionally misspell 'Fairy' and put 'Fiery', or was that the cool thing to do like 'Mist Wurm'?

 

If it was about one of your opponent's monsters, then I'd say it was kinda useless. If it was with all of them, it'd be okay. Pretty good card you have there. 9/10 getting better

 

 

Not much OCG.

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[spoiler=Aquamaster Card Rate & OCG]

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This card is also treated as a Fiend-Type monster while face-up on the field. When this card is Summoned' date=' decrease the ATK of 1 monster your opponent controls equal to it[b']s[/b] Level x300. This card gains ATK equal to the total Level of all WATER monsters in your Graveyard x150. If this cards ATK is higher than (one of your, or the total ATK?) of your opponent's monsters, halve this cards ATK, until the End of the Damage Step only. If this cards Level is decreased, destroy this card at the End Phase.

 

IDK. The idea seems pretty neat and awesome. But did you intentionally misspell 'Fairy' and put 'Fiery', or was that the cool thing to do like 'Mist Wurm'?

 

If it was about one of your opponent's monsters, then I'd say it was kinda useless. If it was with all of them, it'd be okay. Pretty good card you have there. 9/10 getting better

 

 

Not much OCG.

 

I misspeled with purpose since Fiery is a combined word of Fiend and Fairy

 

This card is also treated as a Fiend-Type monster while face-up on the field. When this card is Summoned, decrease the ATK of 1 monster your opponent controls equal to its Level x300. This card gains ATK equal to the total Level of all WATER monsters in your Graveyard x150. If this cards ATK is higher than (one of your, or the total ATK?) of your opponent's monsters, halve this cards ATK, until the End of the Damage Step only. If this cards Level is decreased, destroy this card at the End Phase.

Thanks for the ocg corrections and its only 1 of your opponent's monster

 

 

You think 150 ATK gain is little ATK gain?

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