bury the year Posted March 5, 2010 Report Share Posted March 5, 2010 [spoiler=Plot {Everything else is inside nested spoilers.}]It is the year 2021. A new disease has entered the world, but it isn’t like any known before. Its true medical name is too long to be easily recited, so people have nicknamed it “Spiral.” There are no precluding symptoms, nothing to warn of the onset. The only sign is a sudden unconsciousness and lapse into an irreversible coma. However, that isn’t the oddest part. Reports of bizarre beasts have filtered in throughout police networks and online forums, tales of beasts that have supernatural powers and abilities. Nobody knows where they came from or what purpose and goals they may have, but there’s a definite silent assumption that the beasts and Spiral are related. Their assumptions are truer than what they think, though… In truth, the beasts are actually the subconscious id of the comatose Spiral victims, boiling under the surface and let loose by the lack of conscious control of those infected. There is some good news, though. By using a new system known as Nerve Diver, one can project their consciousness into that of the victim and root out the disease from their slumbering state. This must be coordinated with the destruction of the matching beast, however; the two are integrated into each other, and must be destroyed at the same time. The heroes do have an ace up their sleeve, however. They were all once infected with Spiral, and after recovery have gained parts of the abilities of their BB, manifesting itself as bizarre pieces of armor that possess a version of that monster's power. Welcome to Kanagawa, Japan. You’re either an investigator or a doctor, paired up with the other as a unit to fight off the Brain Beasts, or BBs as they’ve been termed. As you take and undergo case files, the mystery of just where Spiral and the BBs originated will unwind like thread on a spool. Welcome to SPIRALysis. We hope you’ll make it out alive. [spoiler=Rules]1) 2 paragraphs per post, 5 good sentences each. I don't care if you're lazy; just do it. This isn't supposed to go very fast.2) No OOC-only posts. Handle that over PM.3) Don't post incredibly fast and frequently. That leaves the slower lot of us floundering about with nothing to do.4) You will be paired up with another RP character. Hunter if you're a doctor, doctor if you're a hunter. The two of you will usually converse with each other the most, although that doesn't mean you can't do so with others. I will assign your partner.5) This is an intensive RP, and I intend for it to last. If you don't think you can handle it, don't sign up.6) If you're confused by anything, PM me for help. [spoiler=Terms]Spiral - A neurological disease that appeared about 3 months before the current timeline. There are no symptoms, and it is only noted by lapsing into unconsciousness and coma. Links between Spiral victims and the generation of BBs have been noted. Victims who have recovered from the disease may manifest parts of their BB self, and those that do are recruited into the Watch.BB - Short for "Brain Beast," these freakish twists on earthly animals have a variety of supernatural abilities at their disposal, and are created by the ids of Spiral victims. They must be killed in tandem with the root of the Spiral in the victim's consciousness.Watch - The organization created to keep an eye on those victims of Spiral and the BBs they create. Members are usually grouped into pairs to work together.Nerve Dive - Consisting of an electrode helmet that goes on the patient and a visual/mental uplink for the user, this interface allows one to project their consciousness into the "inner world" of another. Members of the Watch use it to coordinatedly destroy BBs and Spiral. [spoiler=Character App]Omit everything in {curly brackets.} Post only; changes will be PMed. [b]Name:[/b] {This is set in Japan, so Japanese names are requested. If you need one, PM me for help.} [b]Age:[/b] {No teens.} [b]Gender:[/b] [b]Type:[/b] {Hunter or doctor. There's not a real big difference; hunters go after the BBs in real life, while doctors Nerve Dive into the patient to attack the Spiral from within.} [b]Appearance:[/b] {At least 2 paragraphs. No pictures.} [b]Personality:[/b] {At least 2 paragraphs. No pictures.} [b]Short Bio:[/b] {1 paragraph max.} [b]BB Weapon:[/b] {What the weapon takes the form of. A gauntlet, a pair of armored boots, a helmet, etc. Note that they cannot be seperate from the user's body, but must have a corporal counterpart. 1 paragraph minimum.} [b]BB Powers:[/b] {Pyrokinesis, gravity control, etc. Be somewhat creative in how it's implemented. 1 paragraph minimum.} [b]Inner World:[/b] {If your character was to be Nerve Dived into, what would their world look like? 1 paragraph max.} [b]Have I Read the Rules?:[/b] {Answer honestly.} [spoiler=Accepted Characters][spoiler=Otaku-Sama]Here's my app. Name: Yoshiki Kusakabe Age: 24 Gender: Male Type: Hunter Appearance: 5' 6, fair skin, athletic frame. He has bright red hair that reaches his shoulders which is clumsily pulled into a topknot. His large eyes are a golden yellow and curious, shining with intrigue and childish fascination. He has a slight cleft lip in the centre of his top lip, giving him a permanent cat-like expression. His nose is small but well pronounced. His regular attire is quite striking. He usually wears a bright red leather jacket that has "Akibahara" emblazoned in gold across the back. He wears various t-shirts under his jacket that have varying messages and images, from "Choose Life" to a picture of a bunny with a pancake on it's head. His slacks are also red and have vertical yellow stripes down the sides. He also wears a white cloth headband that is braided into a intricate knot pattern similar to a Celtic knot pattern. Personality: He is very vibrant and energetic, sometimes annoyingly so. When he has nothing to do, he will often start fidgeting and making annoying sounds with his teeth. He is very curious about many things, especially when it involves people he doesn't know. This inquisitive nature often leads him into restricted areas, which he has a knack for finding. He can also be very stubborn when he sets his mind to something. Usually though, the only thing that will get him to set his mind on something is a challenge or dare. As most would guess, he isn't great at his studies as he is too easily distracted, no matter where he is. Despite first impression he often makes as a childish, hyper, and hard headed university student, when he is left to his thoughts too long, he becomes very introverted and philosophical. He often self-critisizes himself on his recklessness and wonders how he will survive without passing university. This makes isolation his greatest enemy, so he always goes out onto the streets at least twice a day to prevent his thoughts from surfacing. Short Bio: Yoshiki was born to a middle class family who lived the suburbs around Tokyo, specifically in Saitama. He has a little brother, who he has a rather normal relationship with. He never was good at his studies, but was good at athletics which eventually earned him a scholarship at a university near Akibahara. He was partial to anime as it was full of action and intrigue, but nearly at the level as most of his neighbours in the apartments hin Akibahara. His natural curiousity and some help from his university studies made him become an amateur investigator, working up from finding lost possessions to finding lost people who have been missing for up to three years. This got him in the attention of the Japanese Spiral authority. BB Weapon: A buckler with a regular diameter of his forearm that is attached to his right arm. It appears to be made of a teal metal that seems to be iridescent when exposed to strong light. It is rounded outwards and can easily shrug off direct shots from projectiles and melee strikes. It can expand in size, but becomes thinner and more flexible the larger it gets, reducing it's effectiveness. BB Powers: Yoshiki has superhuman strength, speed and agility that scales with the amount of moisture in his body systems. His abilities make his body consume much more water than an average person, consuming up to three times the amount of the average person, especially when fighting. He compensates for this by bringing two large bottles of water around with him where ever he goes. This means he can become very powerful when around bodies of water and can become on the verge of death without a good drink for a day. He also has a limited ability of hydrokinesis. He is able to draw moisture from the air and objects with moisture directly into his body through his skin. His ability to draw in water from available sources is limited to a range of four meters. Inner World: His inner world is a bustling metropolis full of animated billboards displaying his current thoughts. There is no one there, but somehow it feels as if there are many people there. When he becomes isolated, black sludge oozes from the sewer grates, bursting them and releasing his 'inner demons' of doubt and self critizism, which manifest themselves as vaguely humanoid beasts that destroy the city.Have I Read the Rules?: Yes[spoiler=Magnet - {reserved}][spoiler=KaiNine Kaisu - {reserved}] [spoiler=Missions][spoiler=001: Rollin' on the River]Victim Name: Ikeda Chiwako (池田千輪子)Victim Age: 7Circumstances: The victim was at her school's playground during lunch break about four days ago and was climbing on monkey bars when she blanked out and collapsed, falling approximately three feet and landing on her back. Thankfully, no major damage to the spine or head was inflicted, and those physical injuries have been treated. However, she has not woken up since, and backlogging a Nerve Dive shows a BB has been generated, making her an obvious victim of Spiral. She is currently being kept at Kanagawa Children's Treatment Center.Victim Appearance: The victim has short brown hair and is of average weight and height for her age. She has a rather sad look, and was known for not opening up. Preliminary Nerve Dives have revealed that her inner self isn't much different, except for her wearing a simple white shift dress. Objectives:1) All members will report to Hirano Shigemichi (NPC) for mission briefing.2) Hunters will go to the Sagami River and locate the BB, while Doctors will go to Kanagawa Children's Treatment Center and begin the Nerve Dive.3) Hunters will launch their assault on the BB, while Doctors will go and treat the victim's mental state and world.4) If successful, report back to Kanagawa Children's Treatment Center to await awakening. If failed on either end, regather and retreat.Notes: Doctors must take great care in treating the mental state of the victim, as her young age makes her more susceptible to the psyche-damaging effects of Spiral. Hunters must keep property damage to a minimum, like always. (We haven't been that successful with that in the past...) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Otaku-sama Posted March 5, 2010 Report Share Posted March 5, 2010 I see nested spoilers have caught onto you. -w-Reserve please. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bury the year Posted March 5, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 5, 2010 I see nested spoilers have caught onto you. -w-Reserve please. (((Reservation noted. And yes, they have. >_>))) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Naimo Posted March 5, 2010 Report Share Posted March 5, 2010 Oooo seems very interestingReserve please :3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kaisu Posted March 5, 2010 Report Share Posted March 5, 2010 Same here, reserve for now. Also, is there going to be an app, or if I have to make it myself, terms? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bury the year Posted March 5, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 5, 2010 (((All reservations accepted.))) Same here' date=' reserve for now. Also, is there going to be an app, or if I have to make it myself, terms?[/quote'] (((Try opening all the spoilers. :3))) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Otaku-sama Posted March 5, 2010 Report Share Posted March 5, 2010 Here's my app. Name: Yoshiki Kusakabe Age: 24 Gender: Male Type: Hunter Appearance: 5' 6, fair skin, athletic frame. He has bright red hair that reaches his shoulders which is clumsily pulled into a topknot. His large eyes are a golden yellow and curious, shining with intrigue and childish fascination. He has a slight cleft lip in the centre of his top lip, giving him a permanent cat-like expression. His nose is small but well pronounced. His regular attire is quite striking. He usually wears a bright red leather jacket that has "Akibahara" emblazoned in gold across the back. He wears various t-shirts under his jacket that have varying messages and images, from "Choose Life" to a picture of a bunny with a pancake on it's head. His slacks are also red and have vertical yellow stripes down the sides. He also wears a white cloth headband that is braided into a intricate knot pattern similar to a Celtic knot pattern. Personality: He is very vibrant and energetic, sometimes annoyingly so. When he has nothing to do, he will often start fidgeting and making annoying sounds with his teeth. He is very curious about many things, especially when it involves people he doesn't know. This inquisitive nature often leads him into restricted areas, which he has a knack for finding. He can also be very stubborn when he sets his mind to something. Usually though, the only thing that will get him to set his mind on something is a challenge or dare. As most would guess, he isn't great at his studies as he is too easily distracted, no matter where he is. Despite first impression he often makes as a childish, hyper, and hard headed university student, when he is left to his thoughts too long, he becomes very introverted and philosophical. He often self-critisizes himself on his recklessness and wonders how he will survive without passing university. This makes isolation his greatest enemy, so he always goes out onto the streets at least twice a day to prevent his thoughts from surfacing. Short Bio: Yoshiki was born to a middle class family who lived the suburbs around Tokyo, specifically in Saitama. He has a little brother, who he has a rather normal relationship with. He never was good at his studies, but was good at athletics which eventually earned him a scholarship at a university near Akibahara. He was partial to anime as it was full of action and intrigue, but nearly at the level as most of his neighbours in the apartments hin Akibahara. His natural curiousity and some help from his university studies made him become an amateur investigator, working up from finding lost possessions to finding lost people who have been missing for up to three years. This got him in the attention of the Japanese Spiral authority. BB Weapon: A buckler with a regular diameter of his forearm that is attached to his right arm. It appears to be made of a teal metal that seems to be iridescent when exposed to strong light. It is rounded outwards and can easily shrug off direct shots from projectiles and melee strikes. It can expand in size, but becomes thinner and more flexible the larger it gets, reducing it's effectiveness. BB Powers: Yoshiki has superhuman strength, speed and agility that scales with the amount of moisture in his body systems. His abilities make his body consume much more water than an average person, consuming up to three times the amount of the average person, especially when fighting. He compensates for this by bringing two large bottles of water around with him where ever he goes. This means he can become very powerful when around bodies of water and can become on the verge of death without a good drink for a day. He also has a limited ability of hydrokinesis. He is able to draw moisture from the air and objects with moisture directly into his body through his skin. His ability to draw in water from available sources is limited to a range of four meters. Inner World: His inner world is a bustling metropolis full of animated billboards displaying his current thoughts. There is no one there, but somehow it feels as if there are many people there. When he becomes isolated, black sludge oozes from the sewer grates, bursting them and releasing his 'inner demons' of doubt and self critizism, which manifest themselves as vaguely humanoid beasts that destroy the city.Have I Read the Rules?: Yes Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fenrir Posted March 6, 2010 Report Share Posted March 6, 2010 Seeing as I'm a friend of yours and if I don't join I'll probably get my soul stolen.... Reserve. :S Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kaisu Posted March 6, 2010 Report Share Posted March 6, 2010 0_o That's a lot of spoilers, and it's harder to find them with YCModern Name: Light HomuryaAge: 23Gender:MaleType: HunterAppearance: Light has dyed brown hair with a small fringe, though his hair covers his ears and covers the back of his head. Every now and then his black hair shows again, making him look rather strange. He has a small face with brown eyes and a large mouth. He has dark skin and is ussually seen with a white long-tailed coat, a black top and red trousers with dark sunglasses, making him look somewhat sinister. He has a set of three rings on his left hand, one copper, one silver and one gold, fitted with a ruby, a saphire and a diamond.Personality: Light is of the silent type in public, though when with his friends or well known people he tends to be loud and rowdy, the opposite of what most people see. He is somewhat reckless and extremely confident, with a sharp mind he is clumsy, making him an odd mix. He is split into two, a friendly, cheery and careless type and a calculating, cold, serious type.Short Bio: Light had been raised from an orphanage, knowing neglect and child abuse from a young age, making him want to forget his early years. He ran away from the orphanage at the age of 16, losing touch with his friends and living off the slums. He eventually found he had a talent for art, so he began to a make a living off it, eventually moving onto other occupations, though his house is filled with sketches and paintings. He later joined the Watch as one of his closest friends had caught Spiral.BB Weapon: Light's weapon takes the form of his gold diamond ring. That ring has been etched with tiny symbols, and is the smallest of his three rings, and the diamond has been known to grow.BB Powers: The current size of his diamond changes the effectiveness of his Telekinesis, which can manipulate gravity and make invisible boundaries, and if his ring is almost entirely diamond, he ran defy the laws of gravity subconsiously, and his boundaries are inpenetratable, though it is rare to get that form, and it never lasts for long. The size of his diamond is changed depending on his willpower, thus changing depending on his comrades, supporters and personal need.Inner World: During his cheery state, it would become a slim world filled with sleek colors that make it up, and his world his flooded with light. The colors are always flashing and changing, forming to make his thoughts and feeling of that current moment. Depending on his current level of happiness, the light fades or becomes brighter, and the colors become inverted. If switching from the cheery to the serious, the colors fly out to the sides, rising up and forming the mountains. If from the serious to the cheery, the mountains erupt into the many different colors, landing around the Nerve Diver and light radiating from the colors. During his serious state, it is in the middle of a ring of mountains, a cloudy and dark area, a warzone that only one person is in, with blood spurting out of random places, forming words, letters and symbols showing his thoughts and feelings. Depending on his current willpower, the blood stays for longer, some seemingly permenantly, suspened in mid-air as it slowly falls, appearing to be frozen in time.Have I Read the Rules?: Yup. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CarlinFan Posted March 6, 2010 Report Share Posted March 6, 2010 Name: Makoto Yoshida Age: 28 Gender: Male Type: Hunter Appearance: Makoto stands at 6'3", an impressive height for a Japanese man. His jet-black hair cuts off just below his ears. Makoto's eyes are a striking grey, which lend him an intimidating appearance when combined with his steely gaze and the short scar he has just above his right eye. This scar descends diagonally downwards, ending just as it reaches his right temple. He has a relatively impressive musculature, though his narrow shoulders and wiry frame bely his strength. Makoto's casual attire always incorporates blue or black jeans and a black or grey sleeveless vest. He only possesses 6 t-shirts, all of which incorporate a red sun design and/or a Samurai. At work, Makoto wears black slacks, a black suit jacket, a white shirt, and a plain blue tie. While 'hunting', Makoto wears pants with an urban camouflage design, a black leather jacket, and a black t-shirt that's slightly too large. Inside his jacket reside a pair of combat knives and a pair of shoulder holsters containing a silenced GSh-18 pistol and a Desert Eagle. Personality: Before the outbreak of Spiral, Makoto was relatively cheerful and eager to please. He pursued whatever he wanted with indomitable vigor and never took "No" for an answer. As a teenager, Makoto wanted to become an investigative journalist; however, at age 15, Makoto's class took a field trip to a courthouse. Makoto witnessed a politician's son being let off the hook for murder, despite all evidence pointing towards his guilt. From then on, Makoto's vigor for justice led him to attend law school, but upon graduation, the job's tedium led him to join the NPA. Makoto's enthusiasm for justice has only increased as time passes. Upon his sister's death and parents' incapacitation, Makoto's cheery demeanor turned dark and brooding. His commitment to his desires turned to a borderline obsession with hunting down BBs. Makoto's distaste for the real world leads him to immerse himself in the imaginary, and virtually all of his free time is spent either reading books or playing videogames. The energetic, sunny sort of person Makoto once considered a close friend now grates on him to no end, and he has little, if any, tolerance for the cheerful and optimistic. Makoto's passion for his work belies the mental crisis he faces, as he is suffering from clinical depression. Short Bio: Four months ago, Makoto was an NPA agent. The NPA's rising new star, Makoto was on the fast track to becoming the Chief of the Kanto Regional Police Bureau when Spiral broke out. Due to complications involving osteoporosis, Makoto's sister died after falling unconscious and tumbling down a flight of stairs. His parents were also afflicted with the disease, though only his sister died. After recovering from Spiral, Makoto leveraged his position in the NPA into joining Watch and began hunting BBs with a fervor bordering on obsession. BB Weapon: Traditional Shukou are depicted above. They are Shinobi gauntlets with four parallel claws jutting out from the palm.Makoto's BB Weapon takes the form of what could best be described as reverse Shukou. Four hooked, inch-long claws jut out from the back of each hand. However, unlike those in the picture above, Makoto's Shukou are not connected to his arm by a simple ring of metal. Instead, Makoto's weapon manifests a pair of forearm plates that adhere to his arms. The armplates are connected to the hand-plates by chainmail.The armor plates are superior in strength to Interceptor body armor, and nothing short of 500 pounds of concentrated pressure can break through the ringmail.These weapons may seem completely unrelated to his power; however, the special 'metal' of Makoto's modified Shukou is a reflective surface. which makes use of his power more convenient. More on the importance of reflection below. BB Powers: Makoto's central power is light manipulation; he has the potential to bend light to form illusions, burn through solid objects with concentrated beams of light, etc. However, the majority of these abilities have yet to manifest themselves in Makoto; his primary technique involves something he calls 'Reflective Teleportation'. Through a process science has yet to comprehend, Makoto reflects himself off of any reflective surface and resolidifies at a point of his choosing; however, this point must be someplace that is visible from the reflective surface. If Makoto were looking into a mirror, he could teleport to any location he could see reflected in the mirror. Due to the reflective properties of his Shukou, Makoto can simply glance down at the weapons and use their reflective surfaces to teleport. Inner World: Makoto's inner world resembles a massive, translucent palace of diamond and crystal. The palace's design changes depending on the story Makoto is currently immersed in, but his subconscious' favored design is somewhere between the conch-like design of Final Fantasy VII's Forgotten Capital and the Las Noches towers of Bleach. At the very center of the palace resides Makoto's conscious mind, represented as Makoto in a meditative trance. When Makoto is in a positive mood, the palace abounds with revelers, nobles, and merchants, all of whom change appearance according to Makoto's interests. When Makoto's mind is perfectly calm, the palace is completely empty, with sunlight forming beautiful patterns through the translucent walls.When Makoto is angered or saddened, a solar eclipse occurs and demons of shadow encroach upon the meditating Makoto. Have I Read the Rules?: Yes. I will write good paragraphs and avoid posting too frequently. I am willing to meet the requirements of an intensive RP. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skarlet Posted March 6, 2010 Report Share Posted March 6, 2010 Please reserve, this one looks good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bury the year Posted March 6, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 6, 2010 (((NOTE: To all reservees who haven't given their application yet, the first mission has a limit of 4 people including me to go on it. Therefore, you guys will have to get your applications in in order to be considered and accepted for the first one, which will have the benefit of me leading your characters and guiding them. Other than that, all reservations noted.))) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Naimo Posted March 6, 2010 Report Share Posted March 6, 2010 Name: Komiko Nakashima Age: 30 Gender: Female Type: Doctor Appearance: Komiko measures just over 6 feet, and has a physically fit figure. Like her personality, she looks extremely smart and has a no-messing-about vibe to her appearance. She ties her waist-length black hair into either a ponytail (she tends to tie it higher than the normal ponytail, but it cannot be counted as a high ponytail either) or a smart bun (the bun is often tied up only when she's working). Her dark brown eyes are naturally quite large, but Komiko often applies her make up in a way to make them look smaller, as she prefers to have smaller eyes. However, Komiko wears a pair of glasses, which makes her eyes look even smaller. Komiko wears a cashmere black suit; while the pants are slightly looser around the leg, the jacket is quite a body-hugging figure. Underneath the jacket is a smart white blouse, and on Komiko's feet are a pair of stilettos - either black or auburn - and the heels give Komiko an extra 3 inches in height. She does wear jewellery; she is often seen with a pair of small Swarovski earrings in her ears, and although she doesn't mention anything about having a husband, she can be seen wearing a white gold ring, encrusted with a small pearl, on the fourth finger of her right hand. Personality: Like her appearance, Komiko has a serious character. She dislikes messing about, and subsequently has little patience for people who do not take their work seriously. She is the type of person who likes to keep herself busy, as she treats her work like it's her leisure time, and is scarcely seen going to the cinema, going bowling, etc. She is very intelligent, as proven by the long list of achievements she's had over the past ten years she's been a doctor, and she knows how to act in certain situations. She is also quite responsible, and dislikes having to pay off outstanding debts. Komiko also has a sense of pride about her, which is sometimes her downfall. She will often refuse help, and if she believes she is doing the right thing, she will refuse to listen to anyone who is telling she's not doing it correctly. If anybody tries to get in her way, she will fight them, and forcefully try and win if they put up a strong resistance against her. If she is proven wrong, she does struggle to admit it, and sometimes she will try to get out of saying sorry, but instead imply she's sorry. Short Bio: Komiko comes from a wealthy family background, and has been given the best education possible. While she was at school, she discovered her love for Psychology; having found it easy, she quickly decided she would persue a career as a psychologist. Komiko was, at first, unsure as to what type of psychologist she would be; however, she soon decided to be a psychiatrist, having been fascinated by Sigmund Freud and his case study of Little Hans. However, there was a deeper meaning to this; Komiko's mother - who she was close to - had been affected by the Spiral, and having been through the experience of this, Komiko decided she would help cure others of the Spiral, as well as her mother. When she graduated from university, she quickly found a placement at a psychiatrist clinic, and for the next two years she worked there, but when she found out about the Spiral organisation, she decided to work for the organisation instead. Although Komiko doesn't talk about this, while she was still working in the psychiatrist clinic, several of her ex-colleagues had seen her getting close to a fellow psychiatrist, and just before she resigned, they noticed she was wearing the ring, which lead them to believe Komiko married the psychiatrist. BB Weapon: Komiko's weapon is a rope dart, which measures 15 inches long. The rope looks like a very long black scorpion's tail; the only non-scorpion feature of the rope dart is the handle - which stands out quite obviously - and the tip of the tail, where spikes have sprouted. The weapon is quite flexible and lightweight, which means it can fly through the air and get pulled back faster. However, the spikes are adapted to spike people rather than being used as a grapple. BB Powers: Komiko acquires a new physical state which is similar to a legendary kung fu style where the user's body becomes as light as a feather, therefore allowing them to move extremely stealthily, and increases their reflexes, agility and stanima, as well as being able to jump higher, and run so much faster they can glide or even fly for a brief distance. A set back of this is that the kung fu is not designed for fighting, therefore Komiko must be careful to avoid fighting. Inner World: Komiko's inner world is like a labyrinth set inside a library. It is difficult for people to navigate their way around, as there are no signs whatsoever, meaning navigation relies entirely on memory. The vast majority of the books on the shelves are psychology-related; the only other books that can be found are novels that are considered "classics", and various reference and non-fiction books. Have I Read the Rules?: Of course Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skarlet Posted March 7, 2010 Report Share Posted March 7, 2010 Name: Hoshi AmayaAge: 22Gender: FemaleType: DoctorAppearance: Hoshi stands very short, at only 4'11, her skin is very pale and this hides her Japanese genetics to an extent, this is as result of albinism (see bio). Her body is that of a gymnast, slender and lithe, she is not particularly curvacious, and has next to no body fat, or real muscle. Hoshi has several subtle, tricky to locate scars that are usually visible, including a long, fine white line down her leg from a severe cut in her childhood, and burn marks on her palms from more recent accidents. Hoshi's only Asian-looking feature is her eyes, although their pink color due to her albinism down plays those as well. her eyes are large and set relatively close together on her face. She wears her hair short, and it almost seems like a Western masculine hair-cut, an "Emo flop" or "frullet" For the most part her hair is white, however the fringe has been dyed pink, it reaches down to her chin and covers her right eye. Her nose is very small, a typical 'button nose' although it's slightly crooked, leaning to the left, owing to a previous break. Looking at Hoshi's attire, one would not identify the girl as a doctor. She wears, starting at the feet, long boots, knee-high black leather boots, complete with pink laces. She also sports a matching short pleated skirt of pink and black 'tartan' with small metal studs around the bottom. She wears a black, studded leather belt. Moving up to her torso, she wears a strapless black top featuring the outlines of two winged figures, one on either side of her slender body. In the center is another figure, this one is horned, and it's wings are bat like as opposed to the other figures who wings appear more like those belonging to birds. Around her neck is a black leather choker with a probably fake pink diamond stud. Personality: Hoshi is typically very reckless and impulsive, and although she is very intelligent, If she can reason something out in the spur of the moment, then follow through and do it, expect it to be done. She is generally very relaxed, the kind of person who likes to put her feet up. A lot of people say she's never fully grown up. And from an emotional perspective this might be true, she is prone to emotional episodes similar to those of the average girl in her teenage years. Although she doesn't like to show it, Hoshi is usually very depressed, the eternal, pessimist, she always expects the worst of a situation, but she'll act optimistic, so she isn't seen as a "downer." Hoshi is a very trusting, loyal, friendly person, and despite her depressive, pessimistic outlook on life. she is genuinely much, much more vibrant around her friends then she is alone. She is the kind of person who is easily comforted by a long term friend or a love interest, but their comfort isn't likely to last long before she descends back into her typical depression. Short Bio: Hoshi was born on July 13th 1999, she was two months premature, and was born with albinism. Growing up, her pale skin and white hair caused her to be the subject of much mockery, however the trade off of vivid pink eyes also saw her being regarded as beautiful in her teenage years. Hoshi's family always had a slightly rocky relationship. Both of her parents were wealthy business executives. They worked for separate companies, who over time became rivals, this caused a large amount of arguing at home, which, courtesy of Hoshi's father escalated to physical violence. Hoshi, at that time left home to live with her grandmother. a few years later, when Hoshi was 19, she heard about the death of both of her parents in a plane crash as they were both traveling, albeit separately, on the same plane to a conversion. Until SPIRAL's outbreak, nothing else really important had happened in Hoshi's life. BB Weapon: Hoshi's BB weapon is basically the rings of a blue-ringed octopus, they form on her body, however, they glow pink. and carry a deeply poisonous venom which is injected on contact with a target. Hoshi's rings glow far brighter then usual when she is angered or stressed while they are active.BB Powers: "Silhouettic Step"The name Hoshi gave to the power that allows her body to become nothing more then a pink outline, complete with glowing pink rings, composed nothing more then energy. while in this ethereal state, Hoshi can pass through solid objects, however, she can not physically grasp anything, meaning that this power is best used to avoid damage, or to scout out an area ahead. Through concentration, Hoshi can assert this power over others, but it can only ever effect a single 'target' at a time, herself included.Inner World: Hoshi's inner world appears basically to be a towering sky-scraper, for the most part a typical business building, however there are a few noted differences. for example, it appears to be supported on several levels by thin metal poles, similar to those used in pole dancing. Another such difference is that there are no buttons in any of the elevators, and they seem to move at random. on some floors everything seems in order. On others however there are papers scattered everywhere, some of which are stained with blood. On closer inspection, these papers appear to be pictures of Hoshi, and memorable quotes from her past. Finally, and perhaps the most strangely is the that the top floor of the building appears to be a deserted hospital ward. Have I Read the Rules?: Indeed sir. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bury the year Posted March 7, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 7, 2010 (((I've been incredibly busy today, so I won't be able to PM any corrections until tomorrow. Apologies to all applicants.))) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Infinitus Posted March 7, 2010 Report Share Posted March 7, 2010 Name: Reitaro HongoAge: 27Gender: MType: HunterAppearance: He stands at a short 5' 6", and never cared about his height or appearance. His eyes are a dark brownish color, and because of an affair his father had with an American woman, his Asian genetics are mostly covered, including his eyes. He has a red, circular birthmark on his upper forearm on his left arm. His hair is a deep black color, hangs completely down, and doesn't go past his eyebrows. His build is scrawny, and apparently weak, with large hands and skinny fingers. He is normally seen wearing a black fleece, often open, with no hood. Underneath the fleece, is a white dress shirt, with a necklace in the shape of a celtic cross, and an amethyst in the center. He wears a pair of black, casual jeans, and a navy blue buckle belt, hidden by the length of the dress shirt. He wears a pair of black tennis shoes, with a chinese dragon-themed wristwatch on his left wrist. Personality: He is always passive, and if you and him would have different ideas on something, he would simply say "Okay." and let you have your way. He tries to remain calm, and never has any hostile emotions to express. He will express happiness and sometimes sadness, but never anger or hostility. He enjoys philosophical conversation, and enjoys expressing his views, but never lets that conflict with his passive nature. He never has never been a very social person, and tries to not be. Regardless of what people think of him, he never retaliates. Any insults are deflected with his usually passive "Okay." phrase, an indifferent shrug, or simply not paying attention. When he's happy, he can be quite pleasant, and is often a little more social than usual. Short Bio: As a child, he was always picked on. Even those who were picked on more picked on him, too. He used to retaliate all the time, no matter how many times he was smacked down. He always dreamed of rising to the top, being the best at everything, being known as talented, and being the best he can become. However, he slowly began to become more passive, and chose to retaliate less and less, before he decided to become totally passive, and became who he is now. He was raised as a middle class, suburban child, interested in strange items and artifacts. He was training to be an archeoligist when the disease hit.BB Weapon: His weapon is a sword with blade in a zig zag shape, with a snake's head as the hand guard, as if the blade were coming out of it's mouth. The handle shows what is apparently a serpent's body coiling around the handle, leading up to the serpent's head hand guard. It is mostly a silver color, with a beatiful luster. A very high quality blade.BB Powers: Has the ability to drain the life of another being, but only when making contact. He often thrusts his blade throught he opponent, and then begins draining, in case the opponent is large, and might survive the blow. The draining life only adds a small sting, and is only truly effective on it's own when there is only one opponent, giving him plenty of time to drain. Often times, when he drains enough life of the opponent, he can heal his wounds some what. The healing effect would also take time to have a substantial effect on any wounds. It is not a lethal power, unless he has only one opponent, giving him time to do kill the opponent. Most effective when contact is made with the head and temples. Inner World: A Library. When you would come in, you would see 3 rooms ahead of you, the two on the sides hold his passiveness, which used to be his passion, and his pleasantness, and the middle contains a very large library, where his intelligence and knowledge resides. The two side rooms contain a small personal study room, and a small room containing strange artifacts.Have I Read the Rules?: Yes, but I finished this a day after I read them, so I will probably have to look them over again. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bury the year Posted March 8, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 8, 2010 (((Infinitus, you will receive your changes sometime tomorrow. Everyone else, your changes have been sent.))) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Otaku-sama Posted March 8, 2010 Report Share Posted March 8, 2010 App edited, power changed to Hydraulic Strength. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skarlet Posted March 8, 2010 Report Share Posted March 8, 2010 Edited my app too. I hope it's acceptable now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CarlinFan Posted March 9, 2010 Report Share Posted March 9, 2010 App modified. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bury the year Posted March 9, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 9, 2010 (((Otaku and Carlin, accepted. :3))) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kaisu Posted March 9, 2010 Report Share Posted March 9, 2010 The name is a mix of a Korean name(Probably Jap. as well) and a proper Japanesse name. But this is a proper japannesse name.. [spoiler=App]Name: Homurya Tatsuya(Tatsuya Homurya) Age: 23 Gender:Male Type: Hunter Appearance: Light has dyed brown hair with a small fringe, though his hair covers his ears and covers the back of his head. Every now and then his black hair shows again, making him look rather strange. He has a small face with brown eyes and a large mouth. He has dark skin and is ussually seen with a black top and jeans. He has a gauntlet on his left hand which is the same tone as his skin, concealed. Personality: Tatsuya is of the silent type in public, though when with his friends or well known people he tends to be loud and rowdy, the opposite of what most people see. He is somewhat reckless and extremely confident, with a sharp mind he is clumsy, making him an odd mix. He is split into two, a friendly, cheery and careless type and a calculating, cold, serious type. Short Bio:Tatsuya grew up in an apartment, and he barely went out during his childhood, and he lived a life of Child Abuse, until his parents got into a fight, ending up with his father being thrown off the balcony. By then he was sixteen, and he ran off to a classmate's house, living there while he was deemed missing, and eventually he went to college. After the friend caught Spiral, Tatsuya went to join the Watch. BB Weapon: His gauntlet is his weapon, with it turning into a copper colour whenever he uses it. The gauntlet is an elbow-length peice of armour with a fat hand and fingers, with rombus knuckle peices and connected armour for his finger peices. The gauntlet is very flexible, so his fingers can move freely. The most notable feature is the diamond embedded onto the back of his hand, which filled with a red crystal shard. BB Powers: When using his weapon, it unleashed lengths of fire, causing whip-like strands of fire to burst from rubies on the tips of his fingers, which Tatsuya can manipulate to wrap around enemies, burning them as they can pull like a physical rope. Depending on the filled part of the diamond, the ropes thicken and they heat up, making the fire hotter and they inflict more damage when used. Inner World:Like his personality, his Inner World has two forms, reflecting upon him. When his world is changing, the surrounding areas break down or form new areas. His cheery state is a large white expanse, with beams of reflective colors shooting across the area. In the reflections in the beams, memories or what Tatsuya is seeing currently can be seen. Occasionally the beams will shoot across, bending as they form words or symbols showing Tatsuya's current thoughts. His serious state is in a giant cloudly world, with a rugged ground and rocky mountains in the distance. The Nerve Diver will find themself in a large battlefeild-like area, with blood spurting out of thin air, forming pictures, words or symbols that again show his memories, thoughts or his current vision. While changing, many beams of colour will gather in the area before shooting out, then they rise up, leaving in their trail the rocky mountain areas, and once they form the mountains, they shoot out of the peak before landing in the center of the area, sinking into the ground as the rugged ground floods out of the center. When changing to his cheery state, the mountains crumble and burst into faint beams, absorbing the ground as they grow larger, leaving behind the white world of his cheery state. Have I Read the Rules?: Yup. Is this good? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Naimo Posted March 9, 2010 Report Share Posted March 9, 2010 App edited :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bury the year Posted March 10, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 10, 2010 (((Magnet and Yae, accepted. Everyone else, changes are being sent. We'll start up once I finish my app.))) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Infinitus Posted March 10, 2010 Report Share Posted March 10, 2010 App editted. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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