Des ＨＥＲＯ Posted March 23, 2010 Report Share Posted March 23, 2010 Yep it makes almost every writer a better writer since they see other peoples work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Psyshock Posted March 23, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 23, 2010 I have.When I made this fan fic I'd just hope it would be fun to other people but, I just don't have it in me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Des ＨＥＲＯ Posted March 24, 2010 Report Share Posted March 24, 2010 Well it is new since some copy things made on when watching Yugioh. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kaisu Posted March 25, 2010 Report Share Posted March 25, 2010 Of course it's not fun for other people. There's nothing.. -.- Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Psyshock Posted March 25, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 25, 2010 Really. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kaisu Posted March 26, 2010 Report Share Posted March 26, 2010 All I see is a bunch of lines saying this. Bob did this.Guy appeared.Juice flew out the window. -.- Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Psyshock Posted March 26, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 26, 2010 No one named Bob is in this story, juice didn't fly out the window.Can you at least be NICE! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Twig Posted March 26, 2010 Report Share Posted March 26, 2010 I'm going to say this as nicely as I can. Please write the damn fanfic already. You have enough damn characters. There's already 56 damn replies to this damn thread. Replies to what? Nothing. So again, please write the fanfic already. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Psyshock Posted March 26, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 26, 2010 It is written. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kaisu Posted March 26, 2010 Report Share Posted March 26, 2010 >. No it isn't. I'm not giong to be nice if you're going to be stubburn. There's nothing. THere's no proper writing. ANd it's called an 'Example'. Google it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Des ＨＥＲＯ Posted March 28, 2010 Report Share Posted March 28, 2010 I think you should have some information to show where your first chapter is for those who have just visited.I know where it is. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kaisu Posted March 30, 2010 Report Share Posted March 30, 2010 I know where it is FYI. There's still nothing. Honestly, this is pretty much Script Format.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Psyshock Posted March 30, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 30, 2010 What do you think I should add KaiNine Kaisu? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kaisu Posted March 31, 2010 Report Share Posted March 31, 2010 LIke.. A proper story. Like most of the ones you see on YCM. See mine. See most. They're in proper format. Didn't you go to school? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sanderman Posted April 1, 2010 Report Share Posted April 1, 2010 Well i think the story is pretty good!!you should also a female character if you ask me...but thats just my advise!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kaisu Posted April 2, 2010 Report Share Posted April 2, 2010 Honestly. I told you before, but at this rate, it's pretty much script format. Too many paragraphs, and you negged me for reminding you how to write properly? Honestly. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stigma_Horrizone Posted April 5, 2010 Report Share Posted April 5, 2010 nyeh, let Kainine, let him learn himself Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kaisu Posted April 5, 2010 Report Share Posted April 5, 2010 I know. He's too stubborn to learn by himself. At least, that's what he's showing.. I'll take this back if he actually listens to me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Psyshock Posted April 7, 2010 Author Report Share Posted April 7, 2010 I wont listen too you. I dont like the tone your using with me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kaisu Posted April 7, 2010 Report Share Posted April 7, 2010 Oh wow, I'm being rude now am I? Look, I gave you some critism, and then you end up going beserk. Seriously.(Funniest part is, you don't even know what tone I"m using right now) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Des ＨＥＲＯ Posted April 8, 2010 Report Share Posted April 8, 2010 Sorry I wasn't on I had problems with my internet. Anyway, I understand. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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