Yugioh!Attack of the Darkness Chapter1 NEED CHARACTERS NOW!

[Psyshock]

Since nobody posted on my last fan fic, I made a new one.

 

[spoiler=Storyline-]

3 years after the Daedalus Bridge was built, 3 meteors crashed on Earth.One hit the Satellite, one hit New Domino, and one hit the Daedalus Bridge.

The meteors turned to blackish, purplish mist.Wierd people apperd.

They rebuilt the Ener-D reactor but this one didn't make just any energy,it made dark energy.

The dark energy let them summon monsters called "Shadow Creatures".

There was a tiny amount of possitive energy left.It seperated into 3 cards.The cards turned into the creatures that were on them;Aydius, the Fire Titan, Kimith, the Stone Titan and Herdee, the Water Titan.They had the intellegance of humans;They could move, they could talk, and they could duel.

Only their power was strong enough to stop the darkness.

Each titan was located on on a different island.Gamma island, Beta island an Alpha island.

A kid named Alan had a vision.The vision showed him what to do.His friends and him searched for each of the titans.

END OF STORYLINE

 

 

[spoiler=format]

Now heres the format:

Name:

Age:

Gender:

Apperance:

Deck:

Decklist:(optinal)

Ace card or Shadow Creature:

Bio:

Alan's friend, Shadow member or Other.

 

 

[Stigma_Horrizone]

Okay, i'll have a go

Name: Ian

Age: 14 or so

Gender: male

Apperance:Black hair with a white streak by the left side, blue eyes, he is a left handed duelist

Deck:Crimson lord

Decklist:I'll only post the more important cards

[spoiler=cards]

 

 

 

Ace card or Shadow Creature: Ace Card

Bio:

[Psyshock]

Thanks.I like how you used your made-up cards.And heres chapter1 storyline I forgot to post

 

Alan and his friends stayed on a cruise boat for 3 days.Finally, they arrived at Gamma island.

It was a volcanic island full of duelist.

But they didn't look right.They wore masks and acted bewitched.

Then the surprize came.Aydius, the fire titan arrived on his duel runner.Alan's duel runner appered.He got on it.

They activated the Speed World field card.The duel has began.

But just before they could start, these wierd people in black robes appered.They said the they were part of a group called Shadow Clan.

Aydius & Alan's duel runner dissapeared from sight.But, there was a card that took the duel runners place.Alan picked it up.He couldn't belive what he saw.

It was a Shadow Creature.Everyone gasped in fear.There was a long pause.Then rumbling noises broke the silence.A huge, black, sauropod creature appered.A member of the Shadow Clan appered too.

"Once I defet you, Shadow Clan will rule the world!HaHaHa!" the man said while preparing his deck for a duel.Alan did the same.

But then Aydius stopped Alan from dueling.He knew he was to weak.But Alan refused."Let's duel!" Alan & the Shadow member shouted.The Shadow Clan members name was soon revealed.His name was Ghalad."I take the first move I draw!" said Alan.Then everything went silent.Absolutly silent.

[Stigma_Horrizone]

dude it's speed world 2

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almost forgot, I can make those cardsx for u,

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[Psyshock]

I had a different idea but those will work.And how do you post pictures.

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And please tell me if hes Alans friend or what and what his ace card is.

[Kaisu]

Yo, this sucks.

 

Theser aren't even proper chapters, and It's pretty much Script Format..

[Stigma_Horrizone]

to KaiNine Kaisu

 

dude, he is asking for a character before the full chapter gets up

 

to Ymaster145

 

click on your created card and paste the url below into your post

 

for real life ones type

 

the 'Forever crimson lord' is it, and he is Alan's friend

 

ps: the chapters should at least be 3 and a half pages long

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the final work

lore:

Aydius, the Fire Titan,+Kimith, the Stone Titan + Herdee, the Water Titan

When this Monster declares an attack, play rock-paper-scissors with your opponent. If you win, put the top card of your deck into your Graveyard, draw 1 card, destroy 1 face-up card your opponent controls, choose one card in your opponent's side of the field and put it in its owner's Graveyard, and put the top card of your deck into your graveyard, of it's a monster card, gain lifepoints equal to that Monster's level x 300.

[Guest Supreme Gamesmaster]

A little warm-up before I tackle "Crossing the Border" and "This Time Imperfect:" "Yugioh!Attack of the Darkness Chapter1 [sic]."

 

[spoiler=Mystery Science Ripoff 3893 Episode 0201: Yugioh!Attack of the DarknessChapter1]

Our Team:

Hakurei Reimu — To quote IOSYS, "rakuen no suteki na miko yo." Made cynical by a few years of teasing by the surprisingly well-intentioned Kirisame Marisa and her various youkai enemies, the shrine maiden is currently the most powerful being in existence — she can float into and out of reality at will, making her immune even to the absurdly powerful Yakumo Yukari and Flandre Scarlet, not to mention her invention of the rules by which all magical combat in Gensokyo is fought. This doesn't make her much money, though.

Kirisame Marisa — A resentful witch who envies the naturally powerful Reimu deeply. Having learned magic from two hideously dangerous youkai, she now keeps the peace and studies magic from her home in the Forest of Magic. She's not quite as good as Reimu at danmakuing, but that's to be expected — Reimu invented danmaku, after all.

Yakumo Yukari — It's a blessing from the gods that Yukari has a good sense of humor and a heart of gold; her power to manipulate boundaries — any kind of boundary, mind you — means that she could destroy the pocket dimension of Gensokyo at a whim. As things stand, though, she spends her time keeping the peace and making fun of people.

 

[6][5][4][3][2][1]

 

Storyline-

Yukari: Yes, that's what we're here for.

 

3 years after the Daedalus Bridge was built, 3 meteors crashed on Earth.

Marisa: Which bridge is this, again?

 

One hit the Satellite, one hit New Domino, and one hit the Daedalus Bridge.

Reimu: I'd hate to be the bridge-builders.

Marisa: Which dominoes are these? I'm completely lost here.

Yukari: The Daedalus Bridge was later found to bear the inscription, "SUCK IT LUNARIANS WERE BETTER THAN U."

 

The meteors turned to blackish, purplish mist.

Marisa: And this is relevant... why?

 

Wierd people apperd.

Marisa: ...I give up.

Reimu: "Wierd [sic] people." Real descriptive.

 

They rebuilt the Ener-D reactor

Reimu: Now I'm lost, too. What the hell is Ener-D?

Marisa: Forget Ener-D, who're 'they?'

Yukari: Pretend it's Utsuho.

 

but this one didn't make just any energy,it made dark energy.

Yukari: The ensuing disruption of gravity began pushing the moon towards Venus, which would have been an effective counterattack towards the Lunarians if it didn't also remove Earth from its own orbit.

Reimu: So is this Yugioh! or the Third Lunar War?

 

The dark energy let them summon monsters called "Shadow Creatures".

Marisa: Exploiting anti-gravity can summon monsters?

Yukari: Who knows? It'd be fun it it could.

Marisa: Well, you know. But I'm gonna find out as soon as we're done.

 

There was a tiny amount of possitive energy left.

Reimu: Oh, God, no. He's drowning us in incomprehensible physics.

Yukari: Thankfully, the universe assumed the dominant energy condition in time to save this precious little energy. However, in a perfect example of the four terms fallacy, the frequency of electric shocks rose irredeemably.

Marisa: Get any more obtuse and she'll be spouting complex proofs.

 

It seperated into 3 cards.

Marisa: Yugioh! cards or Spell Cards? After this Lunar War, I'm ready to expect anything.

Yukari: They aren't mutually exclusive.

 

The cards turned into the creatures that were on them;Aydius, the Fire Titan, Kimith, the Stone Titan and Herdee, the Water Titan.

Marisa: ...so, which?

 

They had the intellegance of humans;They could move, they could talk, and they could duel.

Reimu: So this is a Yugioh! story.

Yukari: Again, they aren't mutually exclusive.

 

Only their power was strong enough to stop the darkness.

Yukari: As a godlike entity myself, I must ask why they didn't do that to begin with, then.

Reimu: They were selfish and had no shrine maidens.

Yukari: Heh?

Reimu: Gods are like that. Though they usually just stop at destroying shrines...

 

Each titan was located on on a different island.

Marisa: Alright, I'm seeing a quest forming! That's promising.

 

Gamma island, Beta island an Alpha island.

Reimu: ...not more physics...

Marisa: Betcha ten bucks Beta Island is actually two.

Yukari: We should invite Utsuho next chapter.

 

A kid named Alan had a vision.

All: ...

Reimu: That was random.

 

The vision showed him what to do.

All: ...

Marisa: ...so... mind telling us what this vision was?

 

His friends and him searched for each of the titans.

Marisa: Uh. Guess so.

Reimu: Too much advanced physics leaves little room for the plot.

Yukari: Actually, in retrospect, I think that was just our reading into it.

Reimu: But they had that whole war-with-the-moon storyline...

 

END OF STORYLINE

All: ...

Marisa: ...that's it? Seriously?

Reimu: That was short.

Yukari: Pity. I liked making those references to obscure sciences.

Reimu: You're on your own there, I'm afraid.

Marisa: Still, it was kinda disappointing. I wanted to see the moon counterattack.

Reimu: Or, y'know, anything happening for more than two sentences.

Yukari: Wait, keep reading.

 

Now heres the format:

Yukari: But wait — there's more!

Marisa: THAT'S IMPOSSIBLE!

Reimu: ...manipulated the border between story and post?

Yukari: Quite.

Marisa: So what is this a format for?

Yukari: Who knows?

 

Name:

Reimu: Hakurei Reimu.

Marisa: Kirisame Marisa.

Yukari: Yakumo Yukari.

 

Age:

Reimu: Not out of college yet.

Marisa: Same as her.

Yukari: Some amount over 1300. I've forgotten exactly what.

 

Gender:

All: Female. Duh.

Marisa: Is there a point to this?

Yukari: Who knows? There's no relevant information in the post.

 

Apperance:

Reimu: Dark red eyes, black hair, wears large red ribbon in hair, often carries a rod (gohei) with many paper seals attached in streamers. Wears a red and white dress remotely similar to a shrine maiden's outfit with detached sleeves leaving her shoulders uncovered, and a red neckerchief.

Marisa: How do you pronounce those parentheses? ...and that sic-thingy earlier? Whatever... Golden eyes, blond hair, a braid on only one side of her face, carries a bamboo and straw broom. Wears a navy blue witch's hat with a large pink ribbon, and a navy blue and light pink outfit with a white petticoat, and with a light blue shawl over her shoulders.

Yukari: Purple eyes, long blond hair, carries a pink lace parasol and a paper fan, rides on a red boundary to unknown destination. Wears a deep purple dress, a pink mop hat, and red ribbon tied liberally on her accessories.

 

Deck:

Reimu: Super Duplex Boundary, Fantasy Seal -Fader-, Omnidirectional Dragon Slaying Circle, Fantasy Seal -Dark-, Hakurei Danmaku Bounded Field, Fantasy Seal -Blink-, and Fantasy Heaven.

Marisa: Asteroid Belt, Event Horizon, Starlight Typhoon, Double Spark, Shoot the Moon, Magicannon Final Master Spark, and Blazing Star.

Yukari: Given the Lunar War overtones of this story, "Shoot the Moon" is pretty appropriate. Anyway, I have Curse of Dreams and Reality, Balance of Motion and Stillness, Mesh of Light and Darkness, Xanadu of Straight and Curve, Yakumo Yukari's Spiriting Away, Bewitching Butterfly in the Zen Temple, Double Black Death Butterfly, Yakumo Ran, Boundary of Humans and Youkai, Boundary of Life and Death, Danmaku Bounded Field, and Profound Danmaku Bounded Field -Phantasm, Foam and Shadow-.

Reimu: Took you long enough.

Decklist:(optinal)

All: ...WE JUST SAID THAT.

Yukari: Took us forever, too.

Marisa: I wonder why.

Ace card or Shadow Creature:

Reimu: Fantasy Heaven.

Marisa: Blazer Star.

Yukari: Yakumo Ran, for the latter; Phantasm, Foam, and Shadow for the former.

Bio:

Reimu: ...let's skip this one.

Marisa, Yukari: Seconded.

Alan's friend, Shadow member or Other.

All: Other.

Reimu: ...so, what was the point of that form?

Yukari: I'm not quite sure. This is the whole post.

Marisa: Well, that was a huge waste of time...

 

 

Clarifying links for the layperson reader:

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Dark_energy

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Positive_energy_theorem

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Radioactive_decay

 

Epitoma: Dei immortales, we need background info! I've seen all three YGO series and I haven't the foggiest idea what you're talking about, but the fic should be accessible to anyone, whether they've seen the show or not. Also, better grammar would be appreciated. And make sure you have enough storyline to establish the characters and setting before soliciting characters; as it is, the form took waaaay longer than the plot to establish.

[Psyshock]

Please no complantes and dont insault it.

[Guest Supreme Gamesmaster]

No complaints? Er... "no complaints" basically translates to "I refuse to improve" in literature, as I can say from experience.

[Kaisu]

Agreed. And don't worry, I wont 'insault' it. I might insult it, but I won't 'insault' it.

 

Anyways, if he's looking for a character, then why doesn't he make an app.

 

He's obviously a stubborn guy with no will to LEARN.

[Psyshock]

Please dont post unless you have a character or your charac ter is accepted.

[Kaisu]

Yup, I was right. I am officially counting you as a bad writer. No offence, but that's what your saying right now. I'll be back if you make a proper chapter.. With my dogs[/hint]

[Psyshock]

*Ahem*

Can youu read.

[Twig]

A little warm-up before I tackle "Crossing the Border" and "This Time Imperfect:" "Yugioh!Attack of the Darkness Chapter1 [sic]."

 

[spoiler=Mystery Science Ripoff 3893 Episode 0201: Yugioh!Attack of the DarknessChapter1]

Our Team:

Hakurei Reimu — To quote IOSYS' date=' "rakuen no suteki na miko yo." Made cynical by a few years of teasing by the surprisingly well-intentioned Kirisame Marisa and her various youkai enemies, the shrine maiden is currently the most powerful being in existence — she can float into and out of reality at will, making her immune even to the absurdly powerful Yakumo Yukari and Flandre Scarlet, not to mention her invention of the rules by which all magical combat in Gensokyo is fought. This doesn't make her much money, though.

Kirisame Marisa — A resentful witch who envies the naturally powerful Reimu deeply. Having learned magic from two hideously dangerous youkai, she now keeps the peace and studies magic from her home in the Forest of Magic. She's not quite as good as Reimu at danmakuing, but that's to be expected — Reimu invented danmaku, after all.

Yakumo Yukari — It's a blessing from the gods that Yukari has a good sense of humor and a heart of gold; her power to manipulate boundaries — any kind of boundary, mind you — means that she could destroy the pocket dimension of Gensokyo at a whim. As things stand, though, she spends her time keeping the peace and making fun of people.

[/i']

 

[6][5][4][3][2][1]

 

Storyline-

Yukari: Yes, that's what we're here for.

 

3 years after the Daedalus Bridge was built, 3 meteors crashed on Earth.

Marisa: Which bridge is this, again?

 

One hit the Satellite, one hit New Domino, and one hit the Daedalus Bridge.

Reimu: I'd hate to be the bridge-builders.

Marisa: Which dominoes are these? I'm completely lost here.

Yukari: The Daedalus Bridge was later found to bear the inscription, "SUCK IT LUNARIANS WERE BETTER THAN U."

 

The meteors turned to blackish, purplish mist.

Marisa: And this is relevant... why?

 

Wierd people apperd.

Marisa: ...I give up.

Reimu: "Wierd [sic] people." Real descriptive.

 

They rebuilt the Ener-D reactor

Reimu: Now I'm lost, too. What the hell is Ener-D?

Marisa: Forget Ener-D, who're 'they?'

Yukari: Pretend it's Utsuho.

 

but this one didn't make just any energy,it made dark energy.

Yukari: The ensuing disruption of gravity began pushing the moon towards Venus, which would have been an effective counterattack towards the Lunarians if it didn't also remove Earth from its own orbit.

Reimu: So is this Yugioh! or the Third Lunar War?

 

The dark energy let them summon monsters called "Shadow Creatures".

Marisa: Exploiting anti-gravity can summon monsters?

Yukari: Who knows? It'd be fun it it could.

Marisa: Well, you know. But I'm gonna find out as soon as we're done.

 

There was a tiny amount of possitive energy left.

Reimu: Oh, God, no. He's drowning us in incomprehensible physics.

Yukari: Thankfully, the universe assumed the dominant energy condition in time to save this precious little energy. However, in a perfect example of the four terms fallacy, the frequency of electric shocks rose irredeemably.

Marisa: Get any more obtuse and she'll be spouting complex proofs.

 

It seperated into 3 cards.

Marisa: Yugioh! cards or Spell Cards? After this Lunar War, I'm ready to expect anything.

Yukari: They aren't mutually exclusive.

 

The cards turned into the creatures that were on them;Aydius, the Fire Titan, Kimith, the Stone Titan and Herdee, the Water Titan.

Marisa: ...so, which?

 

They had the intellegance of humans;They could move, they could talk, and they could duel.

Reimu: So this is a Yugioh! story.

Yukari: Again, they aren't mutually exclusive.

 

Only their power was strong enough to stop the darkness.

Yukari: As a godlike entity myself, I must ask why they didn't do that to begin with, then.

Reimu: They were selfish and had no shrine maidens.

Yukari: Heh?

Reimu: Gods are like that. Though they usually just stop at destroying shrines...

 

Each titan was located on on a different island.

Marisa: Alright, I'm seeing a quest forming! That's promising.

 

Gamma island, Beta island an Alpha island.

Reimu: ...not more physics...

Marisa: Betcha ten bucks Beta Island is actually two.

Yukari: We should invite Utsuho next chapter.

 

A kid named Alan had a vision.

All: ...

Reimu: That was random.

 

The vision showed him what to do.

All: ...

Marisa: ...so... mind telling us what this vision was?

 

His friends and him searched for each of the titans.

Marisa: Uh. Guess so.

Reimu: Too much advanced physics leaves little room for the plot.

Yukari: Actually, in retrospect, I think that was just our reading into it.

Reimu: But they had that whole war-with-the-moon storyline...

 

END OF STORYLINE

All: ...

Marisa: ...that's it? Seriously?

Reimu: That was short.

Yukari: Pity. I liked making those references to obscure sciences.

Reimu: You're on your own there, I'm afraid.

Marisa: Still, it was kinda disappointing. I wanted to see the moon counterattack.

Reimu: Or, y'know, anything happening for more than two sentences.

Yukari: Wait, keep reading.

 

Now heres the format:

Yukari: But wait — there's more!

Marisa: THAT'S IMPOSSIBLE!

Reimu: ...manipulated the border between story and post?

Yukari: Quite.

Marisa: So what is this a format for?

Yukari: Who knows?

 

Name:

Reimu: Hakurei Reimu.

Marisa: Kirisame Marisa.

Yukari: Yakumo Yukari.

 

Age:

Reimu: Not out of college yet.

Marisa: Same as her.

Yukari: Some amount over 1300. I've forgotten exactly what.

 

Gender:

All: Female. Duh.

Marisa: Is there a point to this?

Yukari: Who knows? There's no relevant information in the post.

 

Apperance:

Reimu: Dark red eyes, black hair, wears large red ribbon in hair, often carries a rod (gohei) with many paper seals attached in streamers. Wears a red and white dress remotely similar to a shrine maiden's outfit with detached sleeves leaving her shoulders uncovered, and a red neckerchief.

Marisa: How do you pronounce those parentheses? ...and that sic-thingy earlier? Whatever... Golden eyes, blond hair, a braid on only one side of her face, carries a bamboo and straw broom. Wears a navy blue witch's hat with a large pink ribbon, and a navy blue and light pink outfit with a white petticoat, and with a light blue shawl over her shoulders.

Yukari: Purple eyes, long blond hair, carries a pink lace parasol and a paper fan, rides on a red boundary to unknown destination. Wears a deep purple dress, a pink mop hat, and red ribbon tied liberally on her accessories.

 

Deck:

Reimu: Super Duplex Boundary, Fantasy Seal -Fader-, Omnidirectional Dragon Slaying Circle, Fantasy Seal -Dark-, Hakurei Danmaku Bounded Field, Fantasy Seal -Blink-, and Fantasy Heaven.

Marisa: Asteroid Belt, Event Horizon, Starlight Typhoon, Double Spark, Shoot the Moon, Magicannon Final Master Spark, and Blazing Star.

Yukari: Given the Lunar War overtones of this story, "Shoot the Moon" is pretty appropriate. Anyway, I have Curse of Dreams and Reality, Balance of Motion and Stillness, Mesh of Light and Darkness, Xanadu of Straight and Curve, Yakumo Yukari's Spiriting Away, Bewitching Butterfly in the Zen Temple, Double Black Death Butterfly, Yakumo Ran, Boundary of Humans and Youkai, Boundary of Life and Death, Danmaku Bounded Field, and Profound Danmaku Bounded Field -Phantasm, Foam and Shadow-.

Reimu: Took you long enough.

Decklist:(optinal)

All: ...WE JUST SAID THAT.

Yukari: Took us forever, too.

Marisa: I wonder why.

Ace card or Shadow Creature:

Reimu: Fantasy Heaven.

Marisa: Blazer Star.

Yukari: Yakumo Ran, for the latter; Phantasm, Foam, and Shadow for the former.

Bio:

Reimu: ...let's skip this one.

Marisa, Yukari: Seconded.

Alan's friend, Shadow member or Other.

All: Other.

Reimu: ...so, what was the point of that form?

Yukari: I'm not quite sure. This is the whole post.

Marisa: Well, that was a huge waste of time...

 

 

Clarifying links for the layperson reader:

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Dark_energy

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Positive_energy_theorem

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Radioactive_decay

 

Epitoma: Dei immortales, we need background info! I've seen all three YGO series and I haven't the foggiest idea what you're talking about, but the fic should be accessible to anyone, whether they've seen the show or not. Also, better grammar would be appreciated. And make sure you have enough storyline to establish the characters and setting before soliciting characters; as it is, the form took waaaay longer than the plot to establish.

 

I lol'd.

 

*Ahem*

Can youu read.

 

*Ahem*

Can YOU read?

[Psyshock]

Do you know what

"Dont post unless you have a character or your characters accepted."

means.

[Kaisu]

I was just speaking my opinion. Jeez, what the heck happened to YCM? Overun.

[Psyshock]

Well I'm new to YCM so I don't know what most of this stuff means so I would put a character app but I don't know what I means or how to do it.And I'm just looking for people to do my story with me cus it's never fun by yourself.

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[Kaisu]

But that's a little something called a roleplay, methinks. With fanfiction, you control everything.

 

Anyway, keep your head up high and don't be ripped up by critism. Improve, we'll run out of ammunitions eventually.

[Psyshock]

I'll add more to the stoyline for chapter 1 to make it exciting.Anyways, do you have a deck.We could duel.

[Stigma_Horrizone]

I'll add more to the stoyline for chapter 1 to make it exciting.Anyways' date=' do you have a deck.We could duel.

[/quote']

 

Oh yeah, you should post one whole chapter at once

[Psyshock]

I'm only gonna post more because people told me to.

[Des ＨＥＲＯ]

I don't know whats going on but heres my character.

 

[spoiler=my character]

Name: Destruct

 

Age: 70

 

Gender: Male

 

Apperance: Wears a dark coat with dark shoes and dark trousers.He holds a grey staff looking stick in his left hand also in his right is a legendary dark and white duel disk with the writing "Legend Guardian" on it.He never gets old he is always young.

 

Deck: Destiny Heroes includes the Neo Destiny Heroes(Im working on)

 

Ace card or Shadow Creature: Ace card "Destiny End Dragoon"

 

Bio: He is the guardian of the Alpha island, he has never lost a duel and has won 1,000,000 duels.He protects Alpha island from darkness and he is immortal so he lives forever.However, he is cursed to never leave Alpha island unless he fails.

 

Alan's friend, Shadow member or Other: other as I have said hes the guardian of the Alpha Islands.

 

 

 

Ill pm you the decklist soon.

[Psyshock]

Nice but don't you think he's a little old.But he's accepted.

[Psyshock]

More added.