cmc1234 Posted March 1, 2010 Report Share Posted March 1, 2010 Eh, maybe its an archfiend maybe not, i dont really care XD. Hope you like. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kuro no Keiyakushu Posted March 2, 2010 Report Share Posted March 2, 2010 Looks sloppy and shading is not fully blackened in. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chairman ali Posted March 2, 2010 Report Share Posted March 2, 2010 Your style of shading isn't that good. Maybe try crosshatching. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mrfrosty Posted March 2, 2010 Report Share Posted March 2, 2010 Ohhi Bud-ahy : )! Good stuff:Very creative, the patterns ext. i like the forearms. And the porportions are well Other stuff: well, uh, theres quite a bit. to start, when your drawing a pattern, try as hard as you can to keep the lines from touching.since all of the lines where the skin is is thiker and darker, it throws the body off, try to use the same size lines throughout (personaly, i prefer a .5 lead mech pencil, It makes my artwork sweat and sexy!) the leg on the right looks out of wack at the part were the armor and skin meet. the armor MUST always overlap the skin to create the effect corecctly. the headl ooks ok, but the horn are mega weird. it looks like it thikens the farther out it goes. the trick is to do the same thing with the armour, only the skin overlaps the horns. lastly, please erase after you ink so, pretty nice. apply these tactics next time you draw, and you should see quite thi inprovement! for any more help, pm me, k? Keep it up man! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cmc1234 Posted March 2, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 2, 2010 Looks sloppy and shading is not fully blackened in. Whats sloppy?Your style of shading isn't that good. Maybe try crosshatching. Eh, ill edit the shading latr its not even done yet, iv never even attempted that XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest JoshIcy Posted March 2, 2010 Report Share Posted March 2, 2010 Not fleshy enough to be an archfiend =/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cmc1234 Posted March 2, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 2, 2010 Not fleshy enough to be an archfiend =/ thats why i wasnt sure what if it was or not, Also u can list some critique cause i know you have some Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kuro no Keiyakushu Posted March 2, 2010 Report Share Posted March 2, 2010 Looks sloppy and shading is not fully blackened in. Whats sloppy? Everything. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cmc1234 Posted March 2, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 2, 2010 Ya cause thats real helpful and evreything quire-bait Tell me exactly whats wrong so i can improve the next time, Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
§hadow §triker Posted March 2, 2010 Report Share Posted March 2, 2010 Looks sloppy and shading is not fully blackened in. Whats sloppy? Everything. What he says is true. Everything looks sloppy. That means shapes arent so great. Doesnt look symmetrical, and its just overall sloppy. Not much more to say.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest JoshIcy Posted March 2, 2010 Report Share Posted March 2, 2010 Not fleshy enough to be an archfiend =/ thats why i wasnt sure what if it was or not' date=' Also u can list some critique cause i know you have some[/quote'] Eh... Sorry. Yeah I do, but for some reason Im feeling really lazy. And due to the lack of shading (only bold lines for emphasis) and it being a sketch I'll ignore perspective. - Your foot/legs are off. The pose is fine but the lower leg doesn't come into view, nor is the overall pose menacing enough. Thus, the viewer cannot tell how that leg is standing or even if it's clawed like the other one. Granted that's more of a shape changer (due to the raw size of the creature), it's still pretty important. - The shoulder parts, it's a hard shape; so I can't tell if it's a flesh missile or fire. It's more annoying as it could be weapons too. The overall look of it is undefined ._." - Next part is that the face doesn't feel full enough. So you mess with that as you will. Nyah... You did alright I suppose. There's more and I'd probably show you myself (like Jappio does), but not exactly in the best state of mind right now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gizmo00999 Posted March 2, 2010 Report Share Posted March 2, 2010 Looks sloppy and shading is not fully blackened in. that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mrfrosty Posted March 2, 2010 Report Share Posted March 2, 2010 Ya cause thats real helpful and evreything quire-bait Tell me exactly whats wrong so i can improve the next time' date='[/quote'] tl;dr On my behaf then, cause i told you exactly what to do to inprove. Sadly, im not going to shorten it for you, your just going to have to read the hole thing were i point out what you did wrong: ) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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