bakupenguin Posted March 1, 2010 Report Share Posted March 1, 2010 yeah.what was your post about? (sorry for the double post XD) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
◇ Void ◇ Posted March 1, 2010 Report Share Posted March 1, 2010 Sorry guys, i Pmed a Plot and said my One was Accepted. I'l send you a Copy of the message via Pm if you need everdence. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Magnet Soldier Posted March 1, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 1, 2010 Actually Kao I said you need to edit it slightly. It was just revolving around shadow to much. That's the problem really. I dont want that much connection to characters and plots from the show and such. And Kao, Jc, keto and both of Baku's are accepted, everyone elses have either too little in it and one is completely god modding and disobeys the rules. Also, Yes, when I came on I was close to killing something and second; WTF is Keyblade doing posting after I've rejected him? Oh and right now I am torn between Kao's and Ketodama's plots. Once Kao sorts his out and Pm's me it I will decide. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Lightning Posted March 1, 2010 Report Share Posted March 1, 2010 So, MS, What should I change in my app? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Azure Flame Kite Posted March 1, 2010 Report Share Posted March 1, 2010 For the love of whatever religious figure you believe in, Magnet, PLEASE make it the comic world! There's so much more to do there!If you don't mind, MS, I'll tell them what they can improve.[spoiler=Keybladespartan] Your bio needs to be a few sentences(or lines) longer, and your personality needs to go into more depth, like, say Keto's, Magnet's, Kao's and mine. Don't make any connections to any of the Sonic characters until we get the plot up. Also, your power? That's for Espio and chameleons only, dude. @Fire Dud: You need to get the improved app, then I'll tell you [spoiler=Dark Lightning] I think that what MS is saying is that if you can control an element, you can't have absolute control for an indefinite amount of time. It needs to be a bit like Blaze with her pyrokinesis. [spoiler=-Pichu-] Everything of yours is WAAAY too short, try to lengthen it out. A lot. Try making your personality at least 2 lines, and be more descriptive with his appearance. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Asriel Dreemurr Posted March 3, 2010 Report Share Posted March 3, 2010 I have decided to say one thing. I honestly do not care much which plot is chosen, I would be appreciative if it was mine, but whichever you think will work best for the RP I think anyone will be alright with. Now that that's out of the way, I'd like to say that I think your apps are very good, baku. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fire dud Posted March 3, 2010 Report Share Posted March 3, 2010 Hey can I refill out the app or not? was mine the worst one? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Asriel Dreemurr Posted March 3, 2010 Report Share Posted March 3, 2010 I Imagine that you could go back and redo your app. As far as being the worst one I can't say. No offense meant to anyone. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fire dud Posted March 3, 2010 Report Share Posted March 3, 2010 was mine rejected because too short or because no picture? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Azure Flame Kite Posted March 3, 2010 Report Share Posted March 3, 2010 Look at the app now, he's changed the format. Do that one, then we'll tell you what you did wrong. And I'm okay with whatever he chooses, I just highly recommend the comic world, since there's so much more story there. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fire dud Posted March 3, 2010 Report Share Posted March 3, 2010 I edited mine but if u dont want to go back and read it here it is: Name:speeder Race:The land of dark and light Gender:Male(character) Skill:Can fuse dark and light to make the ultimate Creation of all time,is fast,Very strong,intelligent Appearance:Hedgehog always super form mostly angrey or confused (almost never sad. accept when told about parrents)Black fur (dark) sometimes turns white. hands have blue rings around them. hair sticking up Bio:Speeder was born as an orphan who was unwanted because of his power it scared people so they threw him into a lake of snakes speeder as a young child didn't know what to do so he beat up the snakes.Speeder then fell down a waterfall and hit his head on a rock some people found him and raised him like there own and Speeder forgot his powers and forgot about the snakes and him being an orpahan Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Asriel Dreemurr Posted March 3, 2010 Report Share Posted March 3, 2010 No dude, go back to the post of the thread and fill out the Application form there. It's different than the one you're using buddy. As is, you're not even filling out the entire app. @ M.S. We starting as soon as you decide on a plot? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bakupenguin Posted March 4, 2010 Report Share Posted March 4, 2010 why didnt anyone say anything about mine? was it rejected? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bleeding Tears Posted March 4, 2010 Report Share Posted March 4, 2010 if i can still join...Name: MaverickRace: WerewolfAge: 20(human years)Gender: Male[spoiler=Appearence] Skill: 5 sec futuresight, 3 sec invisibility and a purple-ish energy power, which he can fire at his enimies.Bio: Maverick is a wolf warrior bred for one purpose, combat, he has gained skills beyond the other warriors in his tribe, now he has risin through the ranks to lead the werewolf father pack. This he did not like, he wanted to fight not stay behind his pack for protection, he fled the pack, and finally arrived in another village, filled with wolves he had never seen before. There he met his friend Yugo, who calmed his fighting spirit, when his former pack attacked the wolf tribe he had come to call his family, Yugo was killed. After the death of his friend Yugo, Maverick vowed to seek revenge on the new werewolf king, so he returned to the village of the werewolves, fought his way to the king and, after two years, killed him. Near the boreder of both villages, as he was walking back, a flash of light beamed him to a city, after 5 and a 1/2 months there he has made new friends, and now lives in this city.Personality: Loner, violent, kind towards his friends, will fight and die for them, belives if you must die, die with honer.Other: Former king of the werewolves. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Magnet Soldier Posted March 4, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 4, 2010 Baku, I said both of yours were accepted. Dark I'm sorry I missed yours, Accepted. Firedud, your app is very oped, does not follow the actual app and race means what creature. Also I am putting up a poll so that you all can vote for which plot you like best(If I find out how, if not just Pm me and i'll count). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bakupenguin Posted March 4, 2010 Report Share Posted March 4, 2010 Thanks! when do we start? 11 members maybe? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bleeding Tears Posted March 4, 2010 Report Share Posted March 4, 2010 am I accepted???i kinda wanna know... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Magnet Soldier Posted March 4, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 4, 2010 Oh yeah, forgot about you then Destiny. Sorry but no. I'd prefere it if you didn't have mythical beings as your race. Wolf is fine though. The main problem is that you disobeyed the rules. You have put three powers/skills. I said two at most. And the future sight is Oped. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bleeding Tears Posted March 4, 2010 Report Share Posted March 4, 2010 sorry, will change it...if i can still join...Name: MaverickRace: WolfAge: 20(human years)Gender: Male[spoiler=Appearence] Skill: Strength and a purple-ish energy power, which he can fire at his enimies.(only problem is it drains him of energy)Bio: Maverick is a wolf warrior bred for one purpose, combat, he has gained skills beyond the other warriors in his tribe, now he has risin through the ranks to lead the wolf father pack. This he did not like, he wanted to fight not stay behind his pack for protection, he fled the pack, and finally arrived in another village, filled with wolves he had never seen before. There he met his friend Yugo, who calmed his fighting spirit, when his former pack attacked the wolf tribe he had come to call his family, Yugo was killed. After the death of his friend Yugo, Maverick vowed to seek revenge on the new wolf king, so he returned to his home village, fought his way to the king and, after two years, killed him. Near the boreder of both villages, as he was walking back, a flash of light beamed him to a city, after 5 and a 1/2 months there he has made new friends, and now lives in this city.Personality: Loner, violent, kind towards his friends, will fight and die for them, belives if you must die, die with honer.Other: Former king of the wolves.Please say this is good enough, i want to join the RP. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Magnet Soldier Posted March 5, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 5, 2010 Sure, though not exactly what I was looking for. Nevermind, your in. And I cant put a poll up so Pm me to vote. I will put the results in the plot spoiler, aswell as Ketodama's and Kao's plots. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Lightning Posted March 5, 2010 Report Share Posted March 5, 2010 K. So when shall this start? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Magnet Soldier Posted March 5, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 5, 2010 When we get a plot. Vote if you want. Either Pm me or post who you vote for. Plots on first page. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest KeyBladeSpartan Posted March 5, 2010 Report Share Posted March 5, 2010 am i acepted?,i edited my app Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Magnet Soldier Posted March 5, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 5, 2010 Fine if you'll stop annoying me. Just fix up your grammer, I dont want this thread being locked because of poor grammer. I see more than two posts with poor grammer in it and your booted out, with little chance of returning. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bleeding Tears Posted March 6, 2010 Report Share Posted March 6, 2010 anyone know when the plots will be finished? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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