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Ryan Hunter - An Original One-Off


Kaisu

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For now. And no, I have not given up on Two Perspectives, either.

 

As the title says, a ONE-OFF.. For now, at least. Might make it into a small story.

 

If I become a proper writer, well, at least you guys get a sneak-peak, or a complete online version of my book... Until I remove it, if I get 'round to it.

 

Anyways, here goes!

 

[spoiler=Part 1/5]

I couldn't help but laughing as Jack began to kick the door. We had been on a crazy adventure in this last week. It was a whirlwind of events.

 

My name is Ryan Hunter. I was an ordinary 17 year old guy. Until this happened. I should start from the beginning.

 

I was at school, goofing off with Jack. Jack's name is actually Jacob, but he called himself Jack, and the name stuck. He's a short guy with long golden-brown hair. He has dozy blue eyes, and a long chin. He looks a bit out of place, to be honest. I walked towards the carpark, and as always, my girlfriend was waiting for me.

 

Her name's Sarah, and she has short dyed black hair with yellow eyes. I don't know wether she wears contacts or not. I've never asked her about that. So we walked along, chatting, until we stopped at a cafe. Worst idea ever. I was nibbling on a small pie when she went to the bathroom. She didn't come out for a while, and I saw from outside that the back door was open.

 

There was a trail of blood leading from here. Dripping, like someone had a nosebleed. Curious, I followed the trail until it stopped suddenly. By a wall. I saw there were cut sections, so I began to scale. Another bad idea. When I was at the top of the wall, a gang was on the other side. I was spotted instantly. Jumping down from the wall, I landed on someone, snatching a machete they held. I was outnumbered, but... For some reason I took them on. I began to cut my way through, until I found Sarah. She had a black eye and her nose was bent, with blood caked around it.

 

Obviously, I ran up to her. Bad move. I was hit on the head and woke up in a room. I played enough games to find my way out. Only.. It was a bit crude. How did Jake get into this? He phoned me, and they hadn't noticed I used one of those new ones that you plug into your ear and speak into the mike. It was voice activated. I told him about what happened, but the gang traced the call. He was found, bonked, and brought here. And that's why I'm sitting here with a broken wrist while Jake is slamming the door.

 

Just my luck

 

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Yeah, that's why I decided to convert it into 5 parts.

 

I realised I hadn't used 'Ryan' as a character in my stories. Never. So I made one. I'm fond of the names Ryan and Damian, but I forgot to use Ryan. So yeah.

 

Should be more after I get back from school.

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