Kaisu Posted February 25, 2010 Report Share Posted February 25, 2010 For now. And no, I have not given up on Two Perspectives, either. As the title says, a ONE-OFF.. For now, at least. Might make it into a small story. If I become a proper writer, well, at least you guys get a sneak-peak, or a complete online version of my book... Until I remove it, if I get 'round to it. Anyways, here goes! [spoiler=Part 1/5]I couldn't help but laughing as Jack began to kick the door. We had been on a crazy adventure in this last week. It was a whirlwind of events. My name is Ryan Hunter. I was an ordinary 17 year old guy. Until this happened. I should start from the beginning. I was at school, goofing off with Jack. Jack's name is actually Jacob, but he called himself Jack, and the name stuck. He's a short guy with long golden-brown hair. He has dozy blue eyes, and a long chin. He looks a bit out of place, to be honest. I walked towards the carpark, and as always, my girlfriend was waiting for me. Her name's Sarah, and she has short dyed black hair with yellow eyes. I don't know wether she wears contacts or not. I've never asked her about that. So we walked along, chatting, until we stopped at a cafe. Worst idea ever. I was nibbling on a small pie when she went to the bathroom. She didn't come out for a while, and I saw from outside that the back door was open. There was a trail of blood leading from here. Dripping, like someone had a nosebleed. Curious, I followed the trail until it stopped suddenly. By a wall. I saw there were cut sections, so I began to scale. Another bad idea. When I was at the top of the wall, a gang was on the other side. I was spotted instantly. Jumping down from the wall, I landed on someone, snatching a machete they held. I was outnumbered, but... For some reason I took them on. I began to cut my way through, until I found Sarah. She had a black eye and her nose was bent, with blood caked around it. Obviously, I ran up to her. Bad move. I was hit on the head and woke up in a room. I played enough games to find my way out. Only.. It was a bit crude. How did Jake get into this? He phoned me, and they hadn't noticed I used one of those new ones that you plug into your ear and speak into the mike. It was voice activated. I told him about what happened, but the gang traced the call. He was found, bonked, and brought here. And that's why I'm sitting here with a broken wrist while Jake is slamming the door. Just my luck Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RyanAtlus Posted February 25, 2010 Report Share Posted February 25, 2010 My name is Ryan Jacobs.I'm delighted to see that my name was the basis for this fic. I'm not joking; it really is. Seems good, but too short. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kaisu Posted February 25, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 25, 2010 Yeah, that's why I decided to convert it into 5 parts. I realised I hadn't used 'Ryan' as a character in my stories. Never. So I made one. I'm fond of the names Ryan and Damian, but I forgot to use Ryan. So yeah. Should be more after I get back from school. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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