Pichu Posted February 24, 2010 Report Share Posted February 24, 2010 [spoiler=Info]When a boy named Dyl changes into a Pichu, the Distorted World opens outside of a small, quiet village called Junan Town. Dyl washes up on Bubble Beach and Mudkip finds him. They make a Rescue team named PokeMon FX. But a other team, Team Mads, wants to stop PokeMon FX from closing the Distorted World. With the help of their friends Dyl and Mudkip try to stop the Distorted form expanding to Junan Town, stop the evil Team Mads, and a creature thats lives in the Distorted World. Here are the Characters[spoiler=Characters] Dyl the Pichu Mudkip Shellder- Soon to be member of Pokemon FX Eevee- owner of Eevee's Storage Mangaton- Magnet Bank Pikachu- PikaMini Shop Raichu- Raichu's Shop Hitmonlee- Dojo Wise Old Whiscash- Whiscash Pond Houndoom- Houndoom's Bar Starly- Star Mail Staravia- Star Mail Staraptor- Star Mail Wigglytuff- PokeSchool Grotle- Friends-4-Ever Happiny- Pokemon Center Blissey- Pokemon Center Muk- Police Force Leader Grimer x8- Police Force Piplup- Passing Bystander in Junan Town Weedle- Passing Bystander in Junan Town Aipom- Passing Bystander in Junan Town Haunter- Team Mads Mismagius- Team Mads Arbox- Team Mads Gabite- PokeTrapper Xatu- Wise Psyhic Gardevoir- Pokemon in Dyl's Dreams Cresselia- Trapped by ______ Alakazam- Team A.C.T Charizard- Team A.C.T Tyranitar- Team A.C.T Giratina- Monster of the Distorted World The place in Junan Town[spoiler=Places]Eevee's StorageMagnet BankRaichu's ShopDojo Wishcash PondHoundoom's BarStar MailPokeSchoolFriends-4-EverPokemon CenterPolice Force Jail and OfficePikaMini Shop- in the Field, NOT in TownBubble Beach [spoiler=Field]Beach CaveDistorted Mt.Plains of No Returnmore to come Now here it is Chapter 1[spoiler=Ch 1: Beached Pichu]"HELP!""Hold on Dyl!""The storm is too strong!""Don't let go!""AHHHHHH!""DAD!""DYL!" ---------------------------------------------- "GET OUT!" Houndoom yelled while kicking Mudkip out of his bar."Come on! I only wanted a drink." Mudkip said to Houndoom."Yeah you did. But you ain't got no money." Houndoom said."I believe the proper grammar is I don't have any money.""Oh! Now you're being a smart......" Houndoom said before Mudkip interrupted him."No. I'm fixing your grammar.""Unless you have money, don't come in!" Houndoom yelled as he walked back in his bar. Mudkip walked away from Houndoom's Bar and walked to Bubble Beach."Oh well. Guess I'll walk around this beach." Mudkip said to himself. Then he saw a Pichu laying on the beach."Oh my gosh! It's a beached Pichu!" Mudkip walked over to the Pichu and started hitting it's face. The the Pichu jumped up in anger."WHAT THE HECK ARE YOU DOING!" The Pichu yelled."I was waking you up." Mudkip said quietly."Wait. Did you just talk?""Yes. Wow you're a weird Pichu.""You're a talking Mudkip!?!?""Yes I am. And you're a talking Pichu.""What do you mean talking..." Pichu said as it looked at his body."Do you need to go to the Pokemon Center?""No. I'm not a Pokemon. I'm a human. I'm Dyl the human." Dyl the Pichu said."HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! HUMAN! HAHAHA!" Mudkip burled out. Dyl looked at Mudkip with a serious look on his face."Wait. You were serious?""YES!""Maybe you are.""I am. Now I'm a Pokemon. No wait. I'm not! This is all a dream! And soon I will wake up on my dad's boat feeling great!""Come on. You're going to the Pokemon Center." Mudkip said looking at Dyl like he was psycho."So this isn't a dream? And this is real.""Yes! I won't say it again!""Well.... are we friends?" Dyl asked Mudkip."Sure. HEY! Want to form a Rescue Team?""A Rescue Team?""YEAH! They help Pokemon in need!""Sure I'll form a Rescue Team with you. I might be here awhile.""I have a PERFECT name! Pokemon FX!" Mudkip said while jumping up and down."Pokemon FX. I like it!" Dyl said. And so Dyl and Mukip formed Pokemon FX. ---------------------------------------------- "La, la, la!" Piplup sang while walking outside of Junan Town. Then a purple cirlce appeared."AHHHH!" Piplup screamed while running away. The portal opened. and two eyes appeared. "RAAAAAAAAA!" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pichu Posted February 25, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 25, 2010 Chapter 1 almost done Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kaisu Posted February 26, 2010 Report Share Posted February 26, 2010 Eh. I despise Char. Lists, but I like your idea. You should make a Wonder Map. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pichu Posted February 26, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 26, 2010 whats a Wonder Map? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kaisu Posted February 27, 2010 Report Share Posted February 27, 2010 A Wonder Map is a map that shows the reigon, dungeons, towns, important places, with clouds covering the unknown areas. The clouds part whenever an unknown area has been explored. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pichu Posted February 27, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 27, 2010 ohh those mapswell ch 1 is almost finished Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kaisu Posted February 28, 2010 Report Share Posted February 28, 2010 Ya those. They took it further in PMMD2/.5 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pichu Posted February 28, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 28, 2010 ya im posting C1 now Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kaisu Posted March 1, 2010 Report Share Posted March 1, 2010 Short, fast-paced, almost entirely dialouge with little description. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pichu Posted March 1, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 1, 2010 well thank you Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kaisu Posted March 2, 2010 Report Share Posted March 2, 2010 That wasn't a complement.. Not really. I was saying it was pretty bad. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spartan919 Posted March 2, 2010 Report Share Posted March 2, 2010 Looks good; great start to a story. I think you need something to explain a little more about Dyl's past, but otherwise, I can't wait to see where this is going. I like the dialogue, it's just like the similar shows and manga are. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pichu Posted March 2, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 2, 2010 Looks good; great start to a story. I think you need something to explain a little more about Dyl's past' date=' but otherwise, I can't wait to see where this is going. I like the dialogue, it's just like the similar shows and manga are.[/quote']ThanksDyl's past will be said in a future ch when Dyl and Mudkip talk to Xatu! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kaisu Posted March 3, 2010 Report Share Posted March 3, 2010 Sooiilller~ Anyways, I'm guessing it's gonna be a completely vauge explanation, broken by DA BAD GAIZ!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pichu Posted March 3, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 3, 2010 okweird Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kaisu Posted March 4, 2010 Report Share Posted March 4, 2010 Not really. THat's what they did in Blue/Red team. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pichu Posted March 4, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 4, 2010 i knowim putting Blue/Red and Time/Darkness together Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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