The Sun [Finished]

[supersonic4ever]

Yeah.

Basically, this is a card-making contest that the cards have to be something related to the sun. I need an OCG Judge, because I'm not that good at it.

 

Prizes:

1st Place: 1 rep + 20 points

2nd Place: 1 rep + 10 points

3rd Place: 10 points

 

Entry Fee: 20 points

 

Judging:

OCG: 30/100

Pic: 15/100

Title: 15/100

Relationship: 40/100

 

Positions:

OCG Judges: jk233_ultimatemaster and Versatility

1st Place: Numquam Periit Amor

2nd Place: Deranged Yoda

3rd Place: RoxasReaper

 

Start Date: March 7th, 2010

 

Card Deadline: March 5th, 2010

[Flash Flyer - Sakura]

If you want, supersonic, I'll help judge OCG for the contest ;-).

[supersonic4ever]

Okay, then. You are now the OCG Judge.

[supersonic4ever]

BUMP

[Flash Flyer - Sakura]

Once people start posting their cards, let me know, okay?

[supersonic4ever]

OK. If they do.

[Scatty]

Hey, why don't you have 2 judges? I'm good at OCG judging myself.

[supersonic4ever]

OK, sure.

[Scatty]

So like, me and jk will only judge the OCG, and you will judge the rest of the card?

 

Meh, fine by me, frankly, I use to always forgive people for having bad images on their cards.

[supersonic4ever]

Yeah, I normally don't rank people's cards, because I don't really know my way around OCG.

[supersonic4ever]

BUMP

[◎Kaleidoscope]

1st card made in a month:

[spoiler=Solar Phalanx - Nomalkriard]

This card can only be Ritual Summoned with the Ritual Spell Card, "Solar Combustion". You must also offer monster whose total Level Stars equal 8 or more as a Tribute from your field or your hand. While this card is on your field, your opponent cannot Summon any FIRE monsters. For each turn you activate 2 or more Spell or Trap Cards, Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower "Solar" monster from your Graveyard. If this card is attacked when your Life Points are 1000 or less, you take no damage this turn.

 

If you want to see the cards referred to in the effect, just ask. {Img. Credit to HP Doom}

[RoxasReaper]

count me in, ill give it a shot

[Azra The Soulslayer]

Sure, i've been away for awhile, i need a good contest to get reved up again, count me in to!

[RoxasReaper]

ive already sent you my points, and here is my card:

 

 

Effect:

 

When this card is succesfully summoned to the field all face-down monsters are flipped into face-up ATK position, if the face-down monsters have flip effects they are not activated. As long as this card remains face-up in ATK position, every turn during your standby phase you gain 1000 Life Points.

[supersonic4ever]

OK, I've already judged both of your cards. Now I'm just waiting for the OCG Judges to judge.

[Flash Flyer - Sakura]

I'll get to judging them now.

 

This card can only be Ritual Summoned with the Ritual Spell Card' date=' "Solar Combustion". You must also offer monster whose total Level Stars equal 8 or more as a Tribute from your field or your hand. While this card is on your field, your opponent cannot Summon any FIRE monsters. For each turn you activate 2 or more Spell or Trap Cards, Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower "Solar" monster from your Graveyard. If this card is attacked when your Life Points are 1000 or less, you take no damage this turn.

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I see no OCG errors, so a 30/30.

 

When this card is succesfully summoned to the field all face-down monsters are flipped into face-up ATK position' date=' if the face-down monsters have flip effects they are not activated. As long as this card remains face-up in ATK position, every turn during your standby phase you gain 1000 Life Points.

[/quote']

 

Some OCG/spelling errors, the corrections are below:

 

When this card is successfully Summoned to the field, all face-down monsters are flipped into face-up Attack Position. Flip Effects are not activated at this time. If this card is in face-up Attack Position during your Standby Phase, gain 1000 Life Points.

 

There were a few OCG/spelling errors, so deductions for those, so I'd have to say 15/30

[Scatty]

First card: there is 1 real error and 1 wording I don't like because of my style of wording. But to be fair, I will reduce your score only for the first 26/30.

 

Second Card:

When this card is successfully Summoned to the field, all face-down monsters are flipped into face-up Attack Position (Flip Effects are not activated). If you control this face-up Attack Position card, gain 1000 Life Points during each Standby Phase. (correct effect).

 

Long story told short, the OCG on this card is pretty screwed. 10/30.

 

And watch with capitalising, it's one of the most important things in effects.

[RoxasReaper]

First card: there is 1 real error and 1 wording I don't like because of my style of wording. But to be fair' date=' I will reduce your score only for the first 26/30.

 

Second Card:

[i']When this card is successfully Summoned to the field, all face-down monsters are flipped into face-up Attack Position (Flip Effects are not activated). If you control this face-up Attack Position card, gain 1000 Life Points during each Standby Phase.[/i] (correct effect).

 

Long story told short, the OCG on this card is pretty screwed. 10/30.

 

And watch with capitalising, it's one of the most important things in effects.

 

dude thats messed up especially since its one of my first cards made lol but oh well i lost, no biggy, ill get the next one, but no need to be so harsh man

[Scatty]

First card: there is 1 real error and 1 wording I don't like because of my style of wording. But to be fair' date=' I will reduce your score only for the first 26/30.

 

Second Card:

[i']When this card is successfully Summoned to the field, all face-down monsters are flipped into face-up Attack Position (Flip Effects are not activated). If you control this face-up Attack Position card, gain 1000 Life Points during each Standby Phase.[/i] (correct effect).

 

Long story told short, the OCG on this card is pretty screwed. 10/30.

 

And watch with capitalising, it's one of the most important things in effects.

 

dude thats messed up especially since its one of my first cards made lol but oh well i lost, no biggy, ill get the next one, but no need to be so harsh man

 

I was not harsh. I simply said you were screwed. But I also screwed the rewording. (after successfully Summoned you don't need "to the field")

[supersonic4ever]

OK, I've averaged them. Here is the score. BTW, I am giving Azra the Soulslayer a couple more days.

Deranged Yoda: 98/100

RoxasReaper: 82.5/100

[RoxasReaper]

ok so i still have a chance of atleast getting 2nd lol

[supersonic4ever]

Yes, yes you do.

[Flash Flyer - Sakura]

Once Azra puts his card up, the rating will come

[Numquam Periit Amor]

Here's my entry. It's another one of the planet cards (well, the Sun's not a planet, but you get the idea...)