thecross Posted February 23, 2010 Report Share Posted February 23, 2010 Here's the characters (If they have a * before the name they're a main character)[spoiler=Character List]1:*Ben Crimson(Good)2:*Spike Magnum(Good)3:*Rocko Castle(Bad)4:Chronus Morine(Bad)5:Drake Maximus(Good)6:Sarah Maximus(Good)7:Melina Mercy(Bad)8:Star Maruss(Good)9:Dekenn Dunn(Bad)10:Kelly Beretta(Bad) [spoiler=Important]1.A fight outside a tournament is a street fight.2.A mass attack is a destructive attack.3.There's three types of tournaments: Bronze, Silver, and Gold. [spoiler=DF#1][spoiler=Chapter 1:The First Fight]"Welcome, everyone!" The announcer said into his microphone, "To the first Destiny Fighter bronze tournament." The fans in the stands were roaring. Meanwhile backstage, the fighters were getting ready. Ben said to Spike, "Are you ready?" Spike smiled, "Sure I am." Ben walked out to the arena, the crowd cheering for the first Destiny Fight ever. Spike walked out too, the fans still cheering. The announcer said in his microphone, "Are you ready for the most intense feeling in the world?" The fans screamed, "Yes, fight, fight, fight!" The announcer spoke, "Well you heard the fans, ready, fight!" Ben started off first by uppercutting Spike. Spike got back up and kicked Ben's leg, stunning Ben, Spike elbowed Ben in the head. Ben grabbed Spike's foot and tripped him. Ben and Spike jumped up at the same time. Ben and Spike started punching eachother, Ben tricked him and kicked him in the head. Spike fell to the ground and Ben got on top of him and punched him until he passed out. The announcer said in his mic, "Well you saw it here the first fight and a really intense one at that, the winner and one that advances is...Ben Crimson!"[spoiler=Ch.2:Who's the Winner?]Rocko Maximus and Chronus Morine were now fighting, two people who everyone hated. Rocko grabbed Chronus by the legs and threw him against the wall. Chronus got up and jump kicked Rocko, Chronus then jumped off his back, pushing his legs against the wall, the wind pierced the crowd. As Chronus jumped of the wall Rocko got up, but it was no use Chronus kicked Rocko in the chin, Rocko now bleed grabbed Chronus by the face, picked him up and slammed him down to the ground. Rocko yelled, "You had enough yet!" Chronus got up, bleeding as well, and punched Rocko, "Not just yet." Chronus started laughing and then circled his whole body around and kicked Rocko in the gut, almost killing him. The Announcer said in his mic, "There we have it folks, our second fight and the winner is...Rocko Castle.Meanwhile, Ben was getting ready to fight, "Don't think you're going to win, know you're going to win." Ben would always tell himself that before a fight. Ben was ready to fight, or was he, he wasn't sure, but he knew one thing, it was time to fight.[spoiler=Ch.3:The winner is...]The announcer said, "This is our last fight!" He continued, "Are you ready?" The fans started screaming, "Yes!" The announcer went on, "Well here it gos." Rocko started coming down and the fans just yelled, "Boo!" Ben knew this was going to be bloody and if he advances he has to travel all the way the Silver Destiny Fighter Tournament. Ben walked down to the arena. The announcer yelled, "Ready, Fight!" Ben went to kick Rocko, but Rocko blocked the kick, picked Ben up and slammed him down. Rocko smashed his foot down on Ben's chest. Ben lost his breath, but had enough energy to upper kick Rocko. Rocko was dizzy but still on his feet. Ben teleported from in front of Rocko to in back of him, and then punched Rocko 3 times in the head. Rocko fell, but tripped Ben, got up and kicked Ben in the head. Ben was on the ground, looking as though he was knocked out. The fans were quiet, but the while Rocko was showing of Ben got up holding his head. Ben yelled, "Show offs don't win." Ben kicked Rocko in the head so fast his foot looked as if it was on fire. Rocko stuggled a little but finally fell to the ground, knocked out. The announcer said, "The winner of the first Bronze Tournament is...Ben Crimson!" Ben was handed the prize money and title. Ben knew now he had a journey, a long one.[spoiler=Ch.4 The Journey]Ben Crimson just got out of the tournament bruised and battered. Spike caught up to him, "Are you alright?" Ben replied, "Ya i'm fine, don't worry." Spike looked at him, "Fine, cya there."Ben said, "Bye." Ben started walking along, but suddenly these street punks taunted, "You're that guy from the tournament let's get 'em guys." Ben was already injured and now he has no choice but to fight in a Street Fight. Two of the punks started trying to punch Ben, but Ben's too quick, Ben kicked one of them in the chest. Ben saw the punk go down, the other used a led pipe and almost hit Ben in the head, but Ben grabbed the pipe back handed the punk and destroyed him with the pipe.Ben taunted, "Now for the boss!" The boss upperkicked Ben and readied himself to bloody Ben, but Ben recooperated and leg swept the boss. The boss went down with a hard thud. Ben wiped his hands on the downed bosses jacket, "Now that's what I call a fight." Ben kept walking down the path.[spoiler=Ch.5:The Dock]Ben knew he wouldn't be able to travel on foot. So he decided to go to the dock and travel by sea. Ben changed paths to the one headed for the local dock "Sea Legs" was the name of the dock. He saw a man fighting another, in a plain second the knocked him out.Ben said in astonishment, "Woah, he must be a professional fighter." He heard on of the crowd say the man's name was Dekenn Dunn. Dekenn saw Ben hearing the crowd chant, "One more fight, one more fight!"Dekenn challeged, "Since you won the bronze tourny, you're gonna fight me or i'll kill you without you putting up a fight." Ben looked at him, "Fine I accept." Ben got in fighting position but Dekenn struck first. Dekenn swept around and kicked Ben in the back of the head. Ben fell but still aware, Ben kicked Dekenn in the shin and Dekenn fell too. Ben got up quick and kicked Dekenn in the side. Dekenn smashed his foot against Ben's chest, stunning him for the right amount of time. Dekenn gets up, but Ben is already able to fight again. Ben back-handed Dekenn and Dekenn punched Ben, they went on in this order until Ben ended Dekenn by raising his leg high and kicking him in the face with his heel. The crowd was quiet. Ben said, "Alright i gotta go." Ben started walking down the path until he reaches a sign that says "Sea Legs". Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
thecross Posted February 23, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 23, 2010 Is anyone going to comment Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Des HERO Posted February 23, 2010 Report Share Posted February 23, 2010 Well is this your first one? If yes then for advice you could check sucessful fan fic's to give you an answer. If no then quite a good style. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
thecross Posted February 23, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 23, 2010 thx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
thecross Posted February 24, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 24, 2010 I might make an RP of this Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bran2939 Posted February 24, 2010 Report Share Posted February 24, 2010 good so far...is it based on street fighter????how many chapters u headin for? enought to get through all the tournaments? or you gonna do more tthan that? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
thecross Posted February 24, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 24, 2010 more chapters and yes this is based but it isn't exactly street fighter. I don't know how much chapters I want yet but I'm going to make alot. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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