Luna Diviner Posted December 20, 2007 Report Share Posted December 20, 2007 CHARACTERS-Jin AkayamAAge:14Bio:A dark and cold child who loves to duel.Deck:Cheerful Memory-Alex EmeraldAge:14Bio:The younger brother of Axel ,Alex is a fun loving kid who thinks he is cool but is considered a bit weirdDeck:Six Samurai-Axel EmeraldAge:14Bio:Alex's older brother a repsected duelist and a very popular person.Deck:Mech Frenzy-Sara FukabiAge:14Bio:A cheerful and happy girl who is always with her friends.Deck:Light Fairies-Lizzie OzamakkieAge:14Bio:A girl who thinks bueaty and fashion is every thing.Deck:Elemental Heroine In a classroom ,all the main characters other then Alex are doing stuff. JIN:Hey everyone I can't wait till it's 4pm so then the Holidays begin !AXEL:Yeah me too but you know , you do sound a bit randomJIN:Sorry I was boredAXEL:Umm do you know where my brother is ?JIN:Him he is in the Heads office.AXEL: WHY ?JIN:Well he was in a kicking a kid .AXEL:Cool why is my bro so cool that kid probably deserved it though,that beating he got.JIN:The kid was Me.AXEL:I'm really ,really sorryJIN:Hum I don't care 'cause I'm leaving.AXEL:You can't we still have an hour.JIN: Do you think I care !!!!AXEL:No,but I won't let you.JIN:How are you gonna stop me ?AXEL:In a duel*Sara butts in the arguement.SARA:I can't wait for this duel ,please let me seeAXEL:Ok watch me claim the title as the school's best duelist.JIN:So that is what this is about .*Jin and Alex get out their duel disks and start.DUEL*They flip a coin ,Axel starts. Axel:I draw and ,I play 1 face-down monster and 2 spell or traps and.........now I end my turn.AXEL:Lifepoints:4000 , Hand:3Jin:Well I draw and kick this of by Summoning Cheerful Memory-Lust (lvl 1/300/200) and I play 1 face-down spell or trap.JIN:Lifepoints:4000,Hand:4AXEL:Fool I flip summon my face-down Mech Frenzy Soldier (lvl4/1300/1600) and I sacrifice it for Mech Frenzy Knight(lvl5/2200/800) I use its effect to send the card at the top of my deck to the graveyard [it is a Mech Frenzy Cannon] to increase this cards ATK by 400 until the end of the battlephase and now I attack you Lust .Jin:Not so fast I activate Cheerful Slash WHICH SWITCHS OUR MONSTER ORGINAL ATK so now my lust's ATK becomes 2200 and your card has 700 and you attack my stronger monster and you lose 1500 lifepoints and your monster is destroyed.AXEL:Oh DamnAXEL:LIFEPOINTS:2500, Hand:3Jin:Time to finishe this but because this effect can onlly be used once per duel it now wears of but I CAN still summon my The Cheerful Desdalda (lvl 4/1900/1100) so now I activate Cheerful Cyclone I pay 1000 lifepoints to destroy all you spell and trap cards so now you wide open,Lust and Desdald attack now so you lose 2200 lifepoints.JIN:HAND:4 LIFEPOINTS:3000AXEL:I draw and play Mech Frenzy Blaster (lvl 3/1000/1000) and i Equip it too Ultacharger which can increase my monsters atk by 500 , and now I attack your Lust and you lose 1200, and you my cards effect to switch it to defense mode.AXEL:LIFEPOINTS:300,Hand:2Jin:Its over now,I summon Cheerful Memory-Sadness and I use its effect to attack directly and now I win.Axel:NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!*Duel Ended*Jin:So now theirs only 3 minutes left ,I was supposed to be at home half an hour ago.Axel:Goodduel mate.Sara:OOOh so exciting I can't wait to see more duels.Alex:Hey everyone I'm back and sorry Jin.Jin:Its alright but never do that again.Alex:Cool , I heard you and big bro had a duel was it true ?Axel:Yes it was true but sadly I lostAlex :I realy missed out the 2 best duelist in our school dueling ,SO unlucky.Jin:We have to go home now.Sara:By Alex ,call me.Alex:Yeh ok [Thinking:Weirdo]Sara:Thanks.Jin:Well screw you losers I'm leaving*AND he leaves **In the north poll*Santa:I need to pack my deck and all the gifts cause I'm dueling the easter bunny on christmas eve,I'm sure all the duel spirits will love to watch.Darkness looms over the little house wich is the home of the jolly fat man. The start of the holiday and santa is getting ready all that and more next time on YU-GI-OH-Cheerful Times. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
university222 Posted December 20, 2007 Report Share Posted December 20, 2007 hey u put me in yay me !its a quite good fanficthe duel was very interesting but the bit before was a bit basicso 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luna Diviner Posted December 20, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 20, 2007 I made it longer when you come back from the heads and every is leaving and santa has a bit. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
damyton Posted December 20, 2007 Report Share Posted December 20, 2007 this is realy good rahim even though i have not read it merry christmas lol ha aha aha aha Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luna Diviner Posted December 20, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 20, 2007 Leon read it or I'm going EMO ON YOU at school and you won't like me when I'm EMO. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luna Diviner Posted December 23, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 23, 2007 Well here is episode 2*At local tourney John Swane vs.thunder kid *THE THUNDER KIDAnnouncer:Hey folks are you ready for the christmas tournament semi-final ?Crowd:YES!!!!!!Announcer:Well make some noise for the Thunder KID.Crowd:YeahAnnouncer:...and his opponent John SwaneCrowd:BoooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooAnnouncer:Let the duel .......BEGIN!*Thunder and Johh walk in to the dueling arena*John starts firstJohn:I start by drawing a card and playing 2 facedowns then I set and I end my turn.John's statisticsLFEPOINTS:8000Hand:3 cards Thunder Kid:Well lets end thisCrowd:Woohooo!Thunder Kid:I draw and play....John:No not your dreaded comboThunder Kid:Yes,that one.John:NooooThunder Kid:I play heavy storm sending all spell and traps to the grave.then I pay 500 lifepointsfor the effect of my Reveal The Beasy I am allowed to flip up your face-down into attack position.John:No my Wall of Darkness (lvl 4/0/2800)Thunder Kid:I summon my batteryman aa and the I activate Blazing Reckless Summon a boosted version of Inferno reckless summon if the monster has less then 1000 atk I get to special summon 2 more of him and they have an extra 500 Atk points and thanks to their effect they each have 3500 ATK points and if I add it up correctly I will deal to you 10,500 points of damage so I attack and WIN !!!!John:No my last chance ruined.Crowd:Hooray!!!!Anouncer:Next part of the semi final Alex Emerald VS Captain.Red-Eyes.Crowd:WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOH !!!!!!!!!!!!Next time on Cheerful Times where is everybody and will Alex win and is Santa ready as he only has 2 days. Please Subscribe to the fanficOnly 5 Points !All who subscribed will get a part in an episode. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luna Diviner Posted December 23, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 23, 2007 An hour and no posts ,please check this out everybody. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luna Diviner Posted December 23, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 23, 2007 Sorry for triple but bump bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cyber Altair Posted December 23, 2007 Report Share Posted December 23, 2007 cool fanfic but you can just post a link to the card other then posting it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luna Diviner Posted December 23, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 23, 2007 Sorry but atleast you reaad it.Please read it.P.s what is your fave episode. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cyber Altair Posted December 23, 2007 Report Share Posted December 23, 2007 i guess the second is shorter but better (my opinion) and i would like to subscribe. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luna Diviner Posted December 23, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 23, 2007 Subscribe any time but you pay when you are featured in an epsiode and its only 5 pts.NO BODY CAN PAY NOW BECAUSE THIS ISN'T PART OF THE PLOT THESE ARE GOING TO BE FILLER EPISODES UNTIL EPISODE 5 WHEN THE REAL ACTION STARTS. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cyber Altair Posted December 23, 2007 Report Share Posted December 23, 2007 great can't wait for it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luna Diviner Posted December 23, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 23, 2007 No way,No way it's Captain Red Eye's.*On the Arena *Anouncer:Here we have the number 4 duelist in town Alex Emerald.Crowd:Wooooooooooooooooooooooooooo !Alex:They love me .Axel: Don't get to cocky bro.Alex: Me to cocky,never.Anouncer:and here wait............No way.......No way it's Captain Red Eyes.*They activate dueldisks and start *The Captain Starts.Captain: First I draw then I summon Red Eyes black Chick http://images3.wikia.nocookie.net/yugioh/images/9/9b/Red-EyesBChickSD1-EN-C.jpgthen I use its effect to summon red eyes http://images3.wikia.nocookie.net/yugioh/images/0/0c/Red-EyesBDragonSD1-EN-C.jpgthen I tribute that for my red eyes darkness http://images1.wikia.nocookie.net/yugioh/images/1/19/Red-EyesDarknessDragonSD1-EN-UR.jpgso now my monster has 3000 atk and play A A FACE-DOWN. turn endCaptain Red-EyesLifepoints:8000 lifepoints.Hand:2 Alex:First I draw,the I play reasoning http://images2.wikia.nocookie.net/yugioh/images/b/be/ReasoningPGD-EN-C.jpgso declare a level.Captain:Well I choose level ssi..6*Alex draws again and again then on the 5 fith draw hey look what I drew cyber dragon http://images1.wikia.nocookie.net/yugioh/images/a/a1/CyberDragonDP04-EN-R.jpgthen I USE MONSTER GATE !!http://images4.wikia.nocookie.net/yugioh/images/1/1c/MonsterGateDR2-EN-C.jpgby tribute my cyber and i draw a card thats not a monster so i draw again yes A monster yaichi http://images4.wikia.nocookie.net/yugioh/images/f/f4/TheSixSamurai-YaichiSTON-EN-C.jpgthen I normal summon Nisashi http://images1.wikia.nocookie.net/yugioh/images/e/e1/TheSixSamurai-NisashiSTON-EN-C.jpgI use Yaichi's effect o your face-downCaptain:No not my dna surgery http://images2.wikia.nocookie.net/yugioh/images/d/d7/DNASurgeryPSV-EN-C.jpgAlex:Now I end with a face-down onteh field.AlexLifepoints:8000Hand:3Captain:Foolish child I activate Chain Retun I can pay 2000 lifepoints to return a trap to the field face-up so now my dna surgery is back and I choose Dragon type so all monsters are dragons.Alex:No.Captain:YesNow my dragon attack yaichi no i use the effect so you attack Nishasi instead.Captain:You lose 1600 lifepoints and becaise of the effect of dna surgery your monster is a dragon so my dragon now has 3300 atk points.CaptainLifepoints:6000Hand:2 Alex:My turn I draw....Next time on Cheerful Times:Who will win and when is the finals going to take place all that and more next time. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luna Diviner Posted December 23, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 23, 2007 Bump,bump,bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
God Kaiba™ Posted December 23, 2007 Report Share Posted December 23, 2007 Episode 1 was very exciting and also episode 2 9/10 good fan fic:-) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luna Diviner Posted December 23, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 23, 2007 Thanks dude ep 4 will be part of ep3 and ep 5 is going to be the finals or is it ? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luna Diviner Posted December 24, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 24, 2007 BUMP,BUMP,BUMP !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luna Diviner Posted December 24, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 24, 2007 Episode 4-Alex Emerald ,Gifted Duelist ?! Alex:I draw ,then I USE double summon http://images1.wikia.nocookie.net/yugioh/images/9/9b/DoubleSummonTAEV-EN-R.jpg I summon Kamon http://images1.wikia.nocookie.net/yugioh/images/6/63/TheSixSamurai-KamonSTON-EN-C.jpgthen I SUMMON Yariza http://images3.wikia.nocookie.net/yugioh/images/d/dd/TheSixSamurai-YarizaSTON-EN-C.jpgI use the effect of Kamon so dna surgery is destroyed so your dragon now only has 3000 atk points then my Yariza will attack you direclty inflicting 1000 points of damage.Captain:Kid I am the best a few lifepoints want make a difference.Alex:AAAAAAAAAAAH,dude you are really boring ....Get a life .....on EBAY !Captain:How dare you,little brat.Alex:Well I end my turn.AlexLifepoints:6400Hand:1 Captain:I draw then my dragon will attack your Yariz Alex:I use the effect so I take the points but Kamon is destroyed instead.Captain:Uhhh,Well I summon Captain Red-Eyes (lvl 3/1000/1000)Crowd:OooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooAlex:What a card of your self ?Captain:Yes and I use its effect my dragon gains 500 attack points.Alex:Why didn't you summon it before ?Captain:Because I wouldn't be able to do this I use its effect if it was summoned in Mainphase 2 you lose 500 lifepoints.Alex:Oh ,man that sucks.Captain:Hehehe ,END.CaptainLifepoints:6000Hand:2 Alex:My turn I draw,ooh look my fave.Revival of the Six Samurai I tribute Yariza and pay all my lifepoints till I only have 1000 and I summon my Shikkuden ,Warlord of the Six Samurai (lvl 9/?/?) its attack is equal to the attack of all the six samurais in the grave,minus 500.Captain:Thats super broken.Alex:I know it was made by Littledude95Crowd:HahhahahahahahahahahAlex:So my monster has [counts on fingers]......Crowd:BoooooooooringAlex:3900!! so now I attack your Captain and you lose 2900.and then i END.AlexLifepoints:1000Hand:0Captain:Aaah your are to hard I give up.Alex:You are such a n00b.*Duel End 8*Door opens and Jin is seen coming throught *Jin:Bad duel ,Alex and why did you use your Warlord now,why not when you duel ME ?Alex:What do you mean ?Jin:Your dueling me next ?Alex:Oh,I knew that.[Looking embaressed]Jin:Humm,you know its nearly Christmas.Alex:Yeh in like 6 hours.Jin:So get ready.*North Pole *Santa:Now wheres my side deck ...[looks around]....yeh found it.What next ?well you have to check the next issue folks. Q:What deck does santa use ?Prize:1 rep. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
StevenBray Posted December 24, 2007 Report Share Posted December 24, 2007 Not Bad. The duels and the story could be longer, and the writing style isn't to my liking (but by no means bad), other than that it's good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luna Diviner Posted December 24, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 24, 2007 Cool Ep 5 is going to be the best yet and also the christmas special Episode and Yeh does anybody know what deck Santa uses [1 REP PRIZE] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luna Diviner Posted December 26, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 26, 2007 No one guessed santas deck but watch this ep and the next ep to see.Episode 5At Christmas Time*At tournament.Anouncer:The duel you've all been waiting for today is.......cancelled.Crowd:BooooooooooooooooooooooooooAnouncer:Sorry but this is the Christmas Special.Crowd:Yeah*In town *Alex:Sara !Sara:What ?Alex:Did you get my text ?Jin:Alex,has a girlfriend !Alex:Shut up,atleast I have one.Jin:Why would I want one ?Alex: DunnoJin:SeeAlex:See what ?Jin:You are a really stupid.Alex:OiJin: Oh,I should leave you too lovers alone now.Alex:*About to punch Jin*Jin:*Blocks punch and kills Alex.Crowd:YeahhhhhhhVoice:Sorry everybody but Alex is alive.Crowd:Boooo.*Later that day *Axel:Can you be quite Lizzie.Lizzie:No I am singing.[it's ChristmastimeThere's no need to be afraidAt Christmastime, we let in light and we banish shadeAnd in our world of plenty we can spread a smile of joyThrow your arms around the world at Christmastime Axel: Uhhh.Lizzie:Come on please let me sing.Axel:No or you will be kissed by....Frunk.Lizzie:Oh,he is so dreamy [she faints]*Later again *Jin:Whats up with the time skips this episode ?Axel:It seems we can all break the 4th wall.Sara:Yeh it does.Alex:Hey I can't break no 4th wall....but I can break the 4kids wall.Sara:He is so dreamy [she faints]*Time passes*Jin:This is enough for us to go to the commercial break.*ADVERT TIME *Go shop at wal-martFresh goes better with Mentos Fresh Mint.Curry's we live elactricals*Back to the episode*Jin:Hey everyone lets go all go to Alexs house.Sara:Don't we need to ask his parents ?Alex:I don't have parents..none of us do.Sara: I tought I was Sean Connely's daughter.[Everyone stares at her]*At Alexs house.*Jin:Well I tought as this is the season to give ...lets give our screentime to others.Alex:NahAxel:NahSara and Lizzie:NahJin:Screw your decisions I am the main character so we will.*Santa is dueling the easter bunny*Santa:As this duel was sponsored by 4kids we only have 4000 lifepoints.Bunny:Thats not fair.Santa:Screw the fairness,I have illegal access to peoples homes.Bunny:I start because I said so.Santa:Hohoho.Bunny:I draw,oh I got a bad hand so I end.Santa:I summon Kaiser Sacrifice http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Kaiser_SacrificeI ise double summon http://images1.wikia.nocookie.net/yugioh/images/9/9b/DoubleSummonTAEV-EN-R.jpg and I use the effect to summon my monarch http://images2.wikia.nocookie.net/yugioh/images/4/4a/ThestalostheFirestormMonarchDR3-EN-SR.jpgBunny:You sent my tribute to the doomed to the grave.Santa:Well I attack.Bunny:AAHHH.Santa:Hohohohohohohohohohoho.SantaLifepoints:4000Hand:3Bunny:My turn,I send heavy storm to the grave to use tribute to the doomed. http://images4.wikia.nocookie.net/yugioh/images/8/8e/TributetoTheDoomedMRD-EN-SR.jpgSanta:NooooBunny:I summon Dark Effigy http://images3.wikia.nocookie.net/yugioh/images/4/40/DarkEffigyTAEV-EN-C.jpg and...find out next time on Yugioh Cheerful Times.Merry Christmas everyone. :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luna Diviner Posted December 26, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 26, 2007 Bump,bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Umbra Posted December 26, 2007 Report Share Posted December 26, 2007 Strange. Just strange. And too many references to the abridged series. (Says the guy who wrote Shadow Binds, but whatever.) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luna Diviner Posted December 26, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 26, 2007 This is the only ep like this as it was the christmas special. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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