Night Posted February 22, 2010 Report Share Posted February 22, 2010 [align=center] Well, I just made this tag today, and would like to know if im getting any better. thnx :3 CnC.[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Twenty-five Zero Oh-oh Posted February 22, 2010 Report Share Posted February 22, 2010 Love the text. What font?I'm not too sure about the scan lines but its not too bad. IMO the render should be moved slightly to the right (move the text with it). The only big problem though it the lighting. Otherwise, really good. IMO Flow is nice btw. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Night Posted February 22, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 22, 2010 Love the text. What font?I'm not too sure about the scan lines but its not too bad. IMO the render should be moved slightly to the right (move the text with it). The only big problem though it the lighting. Otherwise' date=' really good. IMO Flow is nice btw.[/quote'] Lol thnx. It's called "A Theme For Murder". And I just wanted to try Scanlines. Not gunanh make a habit of it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Lightning Posted February 22, 2010 Report Share Posted February 22, 2010 Looks good :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Night Posted February 22, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 22, 2010 Looks good :D Thnx man. But at this point I NEED, CnC. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Lightning Posted February 22, 2010 Report Share Posted February 22, 2010 Glow focuses on the render, which is very good. I've seen some where the Glow is just going everywhere. Text is in a good place, and it looks awesome when mixed with the colors. Sparkles in the Bg are also complimenting the render, very good. Scanlines are fine, they make the tag better in this case. In other words, good job. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest JoshIcy Posted February 22, 2010 Report Share Posted February 22, 2010 Glow is distracting, doesn't compensate for the jagged lines on the left side.Apparently you over sharpened or something, and the mood is all wrong. I really don't see a way to fix that at all, without reworking it and using a stock BG instead. Your choice of "texture" doesn't fit it either. Keep that to Smaller Graphics please, you're only killing it with that. My advice? Start over... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Lightning Posted February 22, 2010 Report Share Posted February 22, 2010 Glow is distracting' date=' doesn't compensate for the jagged lines on the left side.Apparently you over sharpened or something, and the mood is all wrong. I really don't see a way to fix that at all, without reworking it and using a stock BG instead. Your choice of "texture" doesn't fit it either. Keep that to Smaller Graphics please, you're only killing it with that. My advice? Start over...[/quote'] ^Ladies and Gentlemen, Icyblue ^ Thanks for making my advice look like crap next to yours T_T Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Night Posted February 23, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 23, 2010 Glow is distracting' date=' doesn't compensate for the jagged lines on the left side.Apparently you over sharpened or something, and the mood is all wrong. I really don't see a way to fix that at all, without reworking it and using a stock BG instead. Your choice of "texture" doesn't fit it either. Keep that to Smaller Graphics please, you're only killing it with that. My advice? Start over...[/quote']Yeah, I too felt the glow be a bit too much. I get what your saying though. Thanks I'll keep this in my mind for future tags. Glow is distracting' date=' doesn't compensate for the jagged lines on the left side.Apparently you over sharpened or something, and the mood is all wrong. I really don't see a way to fix that at all, without reworking it and using a stock BG instead. Your choice of "texture" doesn't fit it either. Keep that to Smaller Graphics please, you're only killing it with that. My advice? Start over...[/quote'] ^Ladies and Gentlemen, Icyblue ^ Thanks for making my advice look like crap next to yours T_T Lol, yeah thats icy for you. But even though i don't think he had anything good to say, at least its CnC. But still I just want to know if im improving, I know its not good, and there are flaws, but as long as im improving, it doesn't matter too much. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest JoshIcy Posted February 23, 2010 Report Share Posted February 23, 2010 Glow is distracting' date=' doesn't compensate for the jagged lines on the left side.Apparently you over sharpened or something, and the mood is all wrong. I really don't see a way to fix that at all, without reworking it and using a stock BG instead. Your choice of "texture" doesn't fit it either. Keep that to Smaller Graphics please, you're only killing it with that. My advice? Start over...[/quote'] ^Ladies and Gentlemen, Icyblue ^ Thanks for making my advice look like crap next to yours T_T Lol, yeah thats icy for you. But even though i don't think he had anything good to say, at least its CnC. But still I just want to know if im improving, I know its not good, and there are flaws, but as long as im improving, it doesn't matter too much. That's Icy for you? =/ What's that supposed to mean? And I can go into more detail if you want. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Night Posted February 23, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 23, 2010 Glow is distracting' date=' doesn't compensate for the jagged lines on the left side.Apparently you over sharpened or something, and the mood is all wrong. I really don't see a way to fix that at all, without reworking it and using a stock BG instead. Your choice of "texture" doesn't fit it either. Keep that to Smaller Graphics please, you're only killing it with that. My advice? Start over...[/quote'] ^Ladies and Gentlemen, Icyblue ^ Thanks for making my advice look like crap next to yours T_T Lol, yeah thats icy for you. But even though i don't think he had anything good to say, at least its CnC. But still I just want to know if im improving, I know its not good, and there are flaws, but as long as im improving, it doesn't matter too much. That's Icy for you? =/ What's that supposed to mean? And I can go into more detail if you want. Lol. Not a bad thing, In my opinion, thats how you are. And yes I would like you to go into detail, no because I think your trying to only point out the bad stuff, but because I need to know more, If I want to be successful at tag making. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest JoshIcy Posted February 23, 2010 Report Share Posted February 23, 2010 Kay... Let's talk Mood, since it's likely to expand the most of what you know. The color you chose is Magenta, which is a color that tells you "Waiting for Love". But you don't see that in Kakashi's Face, you seen distance of some sort. And the colors or lighting do not reflect that. You should have had it the mood of "Anticipation". But yeah... And the swirl in the background could be interpreted as a swirling flower. See the problem? This is only further emphasized by your border choice... Tsk. The textures you used,I can't pinpoint why but it appears to totally distort and destroy your efforts. Like you should have used TV Grain instead of that, as you would have had MUCH more places to expand and use with said texture. I havent seen the full render either, but I can tell you this... The atmosphere does not compensate for the effects itself, and the 3d Like Nature of everything else doesn't compliment the Render/focal itself. Resulting in something rather, disastrous. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Energy Posted February 23, 2010 Report Share Posted February 23, 2010 Scanlines kill it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EHN. Posted February 23, 2010 Report Share Posted February 23, 2010 [spoiler=Somehow when I say this I was like 'OMG I recognise those C4D's and Scanlines and then I was like....] Anyway, I think the glow is fine, very minor errors i can spot, so all in all, nice one xD, keep up the nice work! :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Night Posted February 23, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 23, 2010 [spoiler=Somehow when I say this I was like 'OMG I recognise those C4D's and Scanlines and then I was like....] Anyway' date=' I think the glow is fine, [b']very[/b] minor errors i can spot, so all in all, nice one xD, keep up the nice work! :D Lol, yeah. I used your psd thingy, actually my first, and wasn't really sure what to do with it. And Yeah i get what your saying Icy, never thought about art that way. Thanks, it really helped. Now I kinda see what your saying more clearly. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EHN. Posted February 23, 2010 Report Share Posted February 23, 2010 I'm glad you used my .xcf thingy :D I made it for just that :D And keep up the nice work xD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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