Pichu Posted February 21, 2010 Report Share Posted February 21, 2010 The Fight for Yu-Gi-Oh!I'm making a Yu-Gi-Oh! story [spoiler=Plot]This is about a teen named Jake Ullmum (All-tum). He is so happy because his friend Nick was dating the girl that will be Jake's girlfriend broke up with here and shes single. But now Nick likes Jake's sister, Alex. His BEST friend Renji just got out of an important surgery. And the girl thats obsessed with Jake is moving. But the evil Thunda plans to steal the legendary Ra card. And it turns out that card is in Jake's deck! So Maxwell, 2nd in command, gos to Jake's school and breaks into Renji's, Nick's, and Jake's fan-girl's lockers and takes the strongest card from their decks and breaks into Jake's Girlfriend locker and takes her necklace with a powerful gem. So Jake and his friend have to defeat Thunda or give him Ra. [spoiler=Characters]Jake Ullmum- Age 15- Hero Alexandria(Alex) Ullmum- Age 14- Jake's SisterAshely Seer- Age 14- Jake's GirlfriendRenji Takamano- Age 15- Jake's Best friend Nick- Age 16- Jake's Other Best Friend- Emo- likes AlexThunda- Age Unknown- Bad Guy BossMaxwell- Age 20- 2nd in Command for the Bad GuysHers- Age 1- Jake's DogJewel Skirata- Age 15- Jake's Fangirl- Hates Jake's Girlfriend- has a Jake doll that she sleeps with [spoiler=Chapter 1: Best Day Yet]Yes, I am Jake Ullmum. And my life sucks. Until today! Today is the BEST day ever! First my best friend Renji just got out of heart surgery! Now he's ok! Plus other friend Nick (AKA: Emo/Cutter) just broke up with my crush since first grade, Ashley Seer. Sadly, now Nick likes my little sister, Alex, and there is a two year age difference between them. But another good thing is that my "fangirl", Jewel Skirata, is moving across the state! Jewel is crazy for me and sleeps with a doll of me! It's creepy, really creepy. I'm going to ask out Ashely today so I hope she says yes! ------------- "Dude just ask her." Renji said as he was slurping his coke during lunch."It's not that easy man.""Yes it is! Jake you are just chicken!" Renji yelled jumping up in his seat."Renji stop! People are starring. Plus the doctor said to keep your heart rate down until the scar is fully healed." I said."Ask her now! Or I will.""Is that a threat or a promise?" I asked."Fine I will." Renji said as he was getting up from his seat."Ok, ok! I'll ask her." I said to Renji. Renji sat down as I got up. I walked over to Ashely. Nick came and sat where I was sitting."Yo, what's Jake doing?" Nick said to Renji."Asking out Ashely. And by the way, your a no good emo cheater." Renji said. Renji always hated Nick and Nick hates Renji. Back at Ashely's table, I walked up nervously."Hey Jake. Whats up?" Ashely asked me."Well.... uhhh.""Well what?""Do you want to go out with me?" I asked."Ohh Jake. I don't know what to say." Ashely quietly said. I move my fingers through my long brown hair."How about yes?""Yes Jake I will go out with you!" In my mind I was jumping and screaming."So want to go on a date on Saturday?" I asked her."Sure, pick me up at 7. Here's my number." she said while writing her phone number on my hand."What's happen over there?" Nick asked Renji."I don't know" Renji said. Then Nick and Renji saw Ashely and me walk away holding hands."Would you look at that. Little Jakie has a girlfriend." Nick said. ------------- I drove my mopad up to to Ashely's house. I got off and walked up to the door. After I rang the doorbell Ashely answered."Hey, Jakie""Jakie?""Yeah. It's my nickname for you""Ok, cool""Let's go!" We walked out to my mopad and rode away. Ashely hugged my sides as we were riding down the street. Then my mopad started making weird sounds."Aw crap." I said as the mopad broke down. I pulled the mopad to the side of the road and threw it on the ground. I sat down by it."I'm sorry" I said when Ashely sat down by me."It's ok Jake. I think this is better.""What do you mean?" Right as I said that, Ashely leaned in and kissed me. I pulled away. Then leaned back in for the kiss. Thanks to duel tester for making Jake's Best Friend, thanks to Maverik for making Jake's Fangirl, thanks to happygosplat for making Jake's Girlfriend, and thanks to XandiRae for making Jake's Sister! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sp1at Posted February 21, 2010 Report Share Posted February 21, 2010 Best friendName: ZackLast Name: YurachukLooks Like: you can chooseInersets: dueling, EatingDeck Type: Deck of ProtoTraps it a deck in progress http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/thread-188188.htmlFav Card: ProtoTrap - Monarch Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
duel tester Posted February 22, 2010 Report Share Posted February 22, 2010 Jake's Best Friend Name: Renji Last Name: TakamanoLooks Like:url=http://tektek.org/avatar/34956277][/url]Intersts: dueling Baseball skatebording and practical jokes and the ocaisonal babysitingDeck Type:Fire deck stratigy burn and beat down Volcanic deck with Flamvell monstersFav Card: Flamvell Uruquizas and Volcanic Doomfire Spirit Card: Ultimate Baseball KidPersonality: hot headed,determined,impatient,friendly,brotherly,and clumsy. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pichu Posted February 22, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 22, 2010 i will use duel testers Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
duel tester Posted February 23, 2010 Report Share Posted February 23, 2010 sweet!!!this seems like promsing fan-fic!!!may i edit my charicter app???i might want to add a few things.BTW whats the story about ??? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pichu Posted February 23, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 23, 2010 its about a teen named Jake Ullmum (All-tum). He is so happy because his friend Nick was dating the girl that will be Jake's girlfriend broke up with here and shes single. His BEST friend Renji just got out of an important surgery. And the girl thats obsessed with Jake is moving. But the evil Thunda plans to steal the legendary Ra card. And it turns out that card is in Jake's deck! So Maxwell, 2nd in command, gos to Jake's school and breaks into Renji's, Nick's, and Jake's fan-girl's lockers and takes the strongest card from their decks and breaks into Jake's Girlfriend locker and takes her necklace with a powerful gem. So Jake and his friend have to defeat Thunda or give him Ra. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sp1at Posted February 24, 2010 Report Share Posted February 24, 2010 Jake's fangirlName: AshleyLast Name: Farginson [spoiler=Looks Like:] Deck Type: Machines[spoiler=Deck List]Monsters (17): 2x X-Head Cannon2x Y-Dragon Head2x Z-Metal Tank3x Gear Golem, the Moving Fortress3x Cannon Soldier1x Drillago1x Reflect Bounder1x Sangan1x Jinzo 1x Jinzo - Lord3x Cyber KirinFusions (4): 1x XYZ-Dragon Cannon1x XY-Dragon Cannon1x XZ-Tank Cannon1x YZ-Tank Dragon Spells (15): 1x Limiter Removal1x Shield & Sword1x Mystical Space Typoon1x Brain Control1x Graceful Charity3x Lightning Vortex1x Scapegoat2x Smashing Ground2x Deck Lockdown2x Burden of the MightyTraps (5): 1x Mirror Force1x Call of the Haunted1x Torrential Tribute1x Negate Attack1x Magic Cylinder Fav Card: Jinzo Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Maverik Posted February 24, 2010 Report Share Posted February 24, 2010 Jake's Fangirl Name: JewelLast Name: SkirataLooks Like: [spoiler=] Deck Type: Spellcaster [spoiler=] Monsters x19 Mystical Elf x1Apprentice Magician x3Breaker the Magical Warrior x2SKilled Dark Magician x2Dark Magician x1Chaos Command Magician x1Crystal Seer x1Old Vindictive Magician x1Magician's Valkyria x1Magical Exemplar x1Gorz the Emissary of Darkness x1Defender, the Magical Knight x1Endymion, the Master Magician x1Dark Red Enchanter x1Summoner Monk x1 Spells x12 Black Pendant x1Malevolent Nuzzler x3Magical Dimension x2Mystical Space Typhoon x1Terraforming x1Mage Power x1Swords of Revealing Light x1Magic Citadel of Endymion x2 Traps x9 Magical Arm Shield x2Pitch Black Power Stone x1Negate Attack x1Karma Cut x1Magician's Circle x1Threatening Roar x1Magic Cylinder x1Scrap-Iron Scarecrow x1 Fav Card: Magician's Valkyria Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dialga501 Posted February 24, 2010 Report Share Posted February 24, 2010 Jake's FangirlName:KarieLast Name:DashingerLooks Like:you chooseDeck Type:amazonessFav Card:Amazoness PaladinJake's GirlfriendName:SakuraLast Name:HeanaLooks:http://media.photobucket.com/image/blonde%20anime%20girl/JoySakura/Blonde%20Girl/cuteblondeanimegirl.jpg?o=51Inersets:clothes,watching her boyfriend duel,and playing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pichu Posted February 24, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 24, 2010 Jake's Fangirl Name: JewelLast Name: SkirataLooks Like: [spoiler=] Deck Type: Spellcaster [spoiler=] Monsters x19 Mystical Elf x1Apprentice Magician x3Breaker the Magical Warrior x2SKilled Dark Magician x2Dark Magician x1Chaos Command Magician x1Crystal Seer x1Old Vindictive Magician x1Magician's Valkyria x1Magical Exemplar x1Gorz the Emissary of Darkness x1Defender' date=' the Magical Knight x1Endymion, the Master Magician x1Dark Red Enchanter x1Summoner Monk x1 Spells x12 Black Pendant x1Malevolent Nuzzler x3Magical Dimension x2Mystical Space Typhoon x1Terraforming x1Mage Power x1Swords of Revealing Light x1Magic Citadel of Endymion x2 Traps x9 Magical Arm Shield x2Pitch Black Power Stone x1Negate Attack x1Karma Cut x1Magician's Circle x1Threatening Roar x1Magic Cylinder x1Scrap-Iron Scarecrow x1 Fav Card: Magician's Valkyria[/quote']welcome Jewel Skirata Jake's Fangirl Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sp1at Posted February 24, 2010 Report Share Posted February 24, 2010 Name:AshleyLast Name: Seer[spoiler=Looks Like:] Inersets: Shopping, Watching Jake Duel, Volleyball Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pichu Posted February 25, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 25, 2010 Ashely Seer is here! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
XandiRae Posted February 25, 2010 Report Share Posted February 25, 2010 Jake Sister Name: AlexandriaLast Name: UllmumLooks Like: Intersts: Reading, duelingDeck Type: WaterFav card: Water Dragon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kaisu Posted February 25, 2010 Report Share Posted February 25, 2010 Ya erm...sweet!!!this seems like promsing fan-fic!!!may i edit my charicter app???i might want to add a few things.BTW whats the story about ??? Say what? How the heck does it seem promising. From then, at least. Plot seems... Bland. Might make a char. though. Gimme some time. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pichu Posted February 25, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 25, 2010 Jake Sister Name: AlexandriaLast Name: UllmumLooks Like: Intersts: Reading' date=' duelingDeck Type: WaterFav card: Water Dragon[/quote'] Heyy thanks! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sp1at Posted February 25, 2010 Report Share Posted February 25, 2010 when should we expect chapter or episode 1? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pichu Posted February 26, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 26, 2010 now chapter one is done! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pichu Posted February 27, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 27, 2010 post peolpe Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Maverik Posted February 27, 2010 Report Share Posted February 27, 2010 Jake's Fangirl Name: JewelLast Name: SkirataLooks Like: [spoiler=] Deck Type: Spellcaster [spoiler=] Monsters x19 Mystical Elf x1Apprentice Magician x3Breaker the Magical Warrior x2SKilled Dark Magician x2Dark Magician x1Chaos Command Magician x1Crystal Seer x1Old Vindictive Magician x1Magician's Valkyria x1Magical Exemplar x1Gorz the Emissary of Darkness x1Defender' date=' the Magical Knight x1Endymion, the Master Magician x1Dark Red Enchanter x1Summoner Monk x1 Spells x12 Black Pendant x1Malevolent Nuzzler x3Magical Dimension x2Mystical Space Typhoon x1Terraforming x1Mage Power x1Swords of Revealing Light x1Magic Citadel of Endymion x2 Traps x9 Magical Arm Shield x2Pitch Black Power Stone x1Negate Attack x1Karma Cut x1Magician's Circle x1Threatening Roar x1Magic Cylinder x1Scrap-Iron Scarecrow x1 Fav Card: Magician's Valkyria[/quote']welcome Jewel Skirata Jake's Fangirlyes!!! you used me idea!!!!! by the way Chapter 1 is awesome Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pichu Posted February 27, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 27, 2010 thanks! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
duel tester Posted February 28, 2010 Report Share Posted February 28, 2010 i kinda expected a bit more dueling....but you competly caught renjis additude!!!!good job!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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