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Origin of Awakening (chapter 9 added!)


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new chapter added ^_^

 

oh, and if you saw that as merely yuri and pointless, then let me tell you:

 

It's not about the yuri

 

This chapter was not pointless

 

you missed the message Cree-bozu...

 

Kailyn didn't.

 

Kailyn gets a cookie.

 

You get none.

 

learn to read beyond the surface, and maybe you'll see that it WASN'T about the yuri, hmm?

 

I wouldn't even consider ch 2 yuri...

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thanks for reading/rating.

 

As for why Kailyn went so easily...

 

do you really think she went easily?

 

She actually hesiatted, adn she's quite ignorant, from having grown up in the streets, with no one to teach her anything but herself...

 

And time contraints affect me too, which is why took your fanfic in my flash fdrive, torm ead at home, when I have alot of free time.

 

Ch 4 is being added...

 

now.

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thanks for reading/rating.

 

As for why Kailyn went so easily...

 

do you really think she went easily?

 

She actually hesiatted' date=' adn she's quite ignorant, from having grown up in the streets, with no one to teach her anything but herself...

 

And time contraints affect me too, which is why took your fanfic in my flash fdrive, torm ead at home, when I have alot of free time.

 

Ch 4 is being added...

 

now.

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It wasn't a big deal, it's just a little something I picked up on that say, could have been a rush in the plot, but with the explanation there it makes perfect sense. :D

 

It's really good though, I'll get around to reading & grading the other episodes today.

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lol yamadagotpwnd

 

an interesting chapter...and i think you've managed to capture the current me into a small child...which doesnt quite sound bad...but even though i had tendencies to be slightly more mature than the rest a a young age...i didn't really get that quality till recent years xP then again thats what a fanfic is for.

 

One thing ive never understood myself...which is odd given the circumstances...is that here its explained that i was picked up to become a swordsman...but originally i had no idea why I was picked up...

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@Kailyn - as always ^_^

 

@Creator - Can't you tell by what happened before then that soldier 1 is the duller of the two?

Of course he'd be a simple greedy thug. He'd want to capture nobles if there were any.

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