★ Club Espeon - We have mastery over Shooting Star Dragon★

[Atomic Nebula]

Oh god. I got a X-Box 360 yesterday with Kinect(Came out here in NZ on Thursday) and it is pro. Well, kinda. You need space, and I don't have much, so I got SvR 2011.

[Flash Flyer - Sakura]

I got a new PS2 (yeah it's old already) but anyway we're going off topic

[Master White]

They finally got it subbed and now waiting on next friday to watch it, but I won't be here next friday b/c I am going home to thanksgiving.

 

So, this coming tuesday: be home

next tuesday: Be back in havre.

[Zextra]

That new Machine Emperor just ruined the whole point of their dragons evoving, since it can simply negate their effects...

 

Anyways, on another note...(sorry for spamming), I got 8 Starstrike Blasts and got some nice pulls. I got a Super Rare Delg, the Dark Monarch, an Ultimate Rare Supreme Arcanite Magician, and an Ultra Rare Red Nova Dragon (my 2nd Red Nova Dragon :))

[Flash Flyer - Sakura]

^Agreed^

I hope Konami won't release it or I'll probably be swearing for a couple hours.

This has to be the most OP'ed card so far

 

(About Starstrike Blast: I still have to buy some in English. Bought 2 JP packs [the dealer's not that far and yeah they sell Japanese cards] but only managed to pull Chain Dog/Gravity Breakdown)

[Alexis Rhodes]

Gonna start watching 5D's again now, episode 106 I'm at.

 

When I catch up i'm gonna watch GX season 4.

[Flash Flyer - Sakura]

You're on the episode with the barrage of Ghosts, aren't ya?

Around 109-110, you'll like it

[Alexis Rhodes]

Yep.

 

Yusei V loads of ghosts.

 

Of corse he'll win.

[Flash Flyer - Sakura]

I already know what happens, so I'm not gonna spoil it for ya

[Alexis Rhodes]

Placido V Yusei. :)

 

Ep.108

[Flash Flyer - Sakura]

I kinda forgot when they start fighting but yeah you'll like it

[Alexis Rhodes]

IDK Whats happeing tbh.

 

All the lights have gone out and there are purple lightning strikes happening over the duel.

 

5D's is strange.

[Flash Flyer - Sakura]

Blame it on Placido for trying to use Ghost for his revenge on Yusei

Anyway, now it's the dub discussion since it's Saturday

[Bassa]

I have seen a vidio at how much 4KidsTV change the proper words.

[Alexis Rhodes]

What episode it the dub on now SK?

[Kaisu]

I need to watch 135.

 

Get with the times, Kaisu!!

 

D;

[Master White]

I forgot to ask you kaisu...This is about the Fan-Fic writing.

 

 

I am great at writing in english, its the problem of forum writing, how to know what people want, when to want it, and all that and most importantly, is it pretty much the same as telling a story or can you use abbreviations at times? I'm just wondering, b/c I have a Fan-Fic to write, but I don't want to get flamed for any of these.

 

Stupid Story

Story Line is bad.

Grammar-I am good, but not the greatest.

Fan-Fic Basis: Is it better to write as a script or to write it as a story.

Should I use Spoilers to dedicate chapters.

How to get rid of writers block and plenty of other questions.

 

 

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Sorry for being off topic their, well, again, i don't watch the dub anymore unless I am at home, but other than that, I might have to see how screwed up 4kdstv will get when they catch up to episode 136.

[Kaisu]

[spoiler=Stupid Story]There's not really a way to counter this. Just keep trying. Everyone's going to be criticized.

 

[spoiler=Story Line is bad.]Hmm... This is easily one of the hardest parts. You've got to tie in character development. Like, in Animorphs the events change everyone from what they were into a wartime-recreation. They slowly change until something impacts them big.

 

[spoiler=Grammar-I am good, but not the greatest.]Just get someone to proofread. Then give that to someone else. ;3

 

[spoiler=Fan-Fic Basis: Is it better to write as a script or to write it as a story.]Write it as a Timeline, Character Descriptions, a script, then a story. Note that Script Format is banned on this site. Also, remember NOT to put in character descriptions. It's better to introduce them in the story.

 

First Person POV(Me, I, Our)

Then there's ___. I've known him/her for ages. etc.

Second Person POV(You, He, They)

You know ____ from school. etc.

Third Person POV (He, She, They,)

___ had known ___ all his life. They had met at school and...

 

[spoiler=Should I use Spoilers to dedicate chapters.]Yes. Definitely. If you have to, link to the chapters that don't fit on the first post, or add into the title(Do not post) and make a few posts for extra storage.

 

[spoiler=How to get rid of writers block and plenty of other questions.]Writer's block is different for everyone. I get it every few seconds, stand up, go to my room, come back, write, etc. Try reading books with similar themes and/or listen to some appropriate music.

 

[Master White]

Thank you, that helps, but I guess when I get done, I'll have you proof read it, if you want to.

[Flash Flyer - Sakura]

@Bassa: Yeah 4Kids does change the lines a bit, although I'm surprised they used "Absolute Powerforce" as RDA's attack (usually they'd use Crimson Flare or something). And they're doing Crashtown next week as well (Thought they weren't gonna do it because of gun violence and language)

[Alexis Rhodes]

I love it when they say

 

"What was that just now?"

[Flash Flyer - Sakura]

5Ds, did you watch the dub today or you were busy catching up with the subbed ones (unedited)

[Alexis Rhodes]

I'm on 112 now I think.

[Atomic Nebula]

Do you people ever talk about anything other then Yugioh? Jesus. This is what brainwashed me to go on my Spam spree that got be Perma'd on Code Red.

[Flash Flyer - Sakura]

We'd discuss Pokemon but lately it's been turning into a YGO themed club.

Latest one is Best Wishes if you saw it (I haven't watched episode 10 yet, but I'll get to it later today when I go home)