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Ash's Proposal- The Wait is Over! Ch 3 P3 and Ch4 POSTED!


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There's something really odd about this.

 

The first chapter was pretty good. It was nice and long.

 

Then, I took a peak at the chapter 2 and 3, and I was like WTF?

 

Care to explain why they're suddenly short and not very good?

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There's something really odd about this.

 

The first chapter was pretty good. It was nice and long.

 

Then' date=' I took a peak at the chapter 2 and 3, and I was like WTF?

 

Care to explain why they're suddenly short and not very good?

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yes i worked on ch 1 a lot and most chs will be longer

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There's something really odd about this.

 

The first chapter was pretty good. It was nice and long.

 

Then' date=' I took a peak at the chapter 2 and 3, and I was like WTF?

 

Care to explain why they're suddenly short and not very good?

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yes i worked on ch 1 a lot and most chs will be longer

 

Why in the world would you not work on the other chapters a lot? Chapter 1 was the only good chapter.

 

Also, is the name Jordan familiar to you?

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[url]http://jordan-blackbird.deviantart.com/art/Ash-s-Proposal-chapter-1-119209978[/url]

Care to explain that?
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Whoa, Pichu. You like stoles it. You took his idea and then added onto it? Not good. I thought the others chapters weren't as good.
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I'm deeply ashamed...I can't belive it. He stole the first chapter and then wrote the others? I can't belive you would do something like that, Pichu...

And looking back, I realize the chapters declined in quality, as well as the first chapter being written in a different hand then the others! Pichu!

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thank you

you've meet -Pichu- on deviantART!

 

I'm surprised that you'd continue to lie instead of apologizing. This is the second time you ripped another person's work.

 

If you look at the profile, it says he's 19 and he lives in Poland. It also says his name is Adam. All of this is not in your YCM profile. I WILL report this.

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