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Ash's Proposal- The Wait is Over! Ch 3 P3 and Ch4 POSTED!


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adam is a total facking nob.....(no offense pichu) i hope you continue it soon! dan didnt deserve that! if i could get sucked into that story i'd give adam a piece of my mind! >=D

magnet soldier..im not a noob....and i love this....its the best fanfic ive ever read so......im no nooblord go pick on someone else you big bully! >=[

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Oh comeon. It was a joke. I am not a bully. I was just saying(And again, no offence meant pichu. You are a great writer and I await more fantastic work) that this is not the best Fanfic out there. Just look. And not just on the first page. Look back at all the pages(Hypothetically) and you will find better ones. There is one that only the first chapter is up and it is dead but it is extremely good and gripping. I wont telll you the name as you will have to look through them all.

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i like this fanfic a lot and i LOVE that bran2939 thinks it is the best

 

CH3 P2 Sneak Peek!

 

"Bring it on!" Ash yelled to Adam.

"Ok. Go Dragonair!" Adam yelled while throwing his PokeBall. A Dragonair popped out and was ready for battle. Pikachu ran out in front of Ash.

"Pikachu, use Shock Wave!" Ash told Pikachu. Pikachu sent a wave of lightning to Dragonair. Dragonair tried to dodge, but was too slow. Dragonair was hurt.

"Water Gun, Dragonair!" Adam told his Dragonair to do. A long water blast flowed out of Dragonair's mouth. Pikachu was hit! He wasn't hurt too bad.

"Pikachu, Thunder!"

"Dragonair, Hydro Pump!"

The Pokemon attacked and blasts hit each other and blew up!

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