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Name: Dr. Reno

Age: 34

Gender: Male

Appearance: Long Silver hair usually hidden by a black cloak. Always has a maniacal smile on his face, his teeth are sharp. He uses the chaos duel disk.

Deck: http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/thread-189767.html

Bio: Placed in a Mental Hospital at age 10 escaped at age 18. Was cursed with the chaos seal of Orichalchos and now corrupts minds into becoming his. His deck consists of the Chaos Archetype.

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Here's my App

 

[spoiler=Dark Signer App]

Name:Dylan Marks

Age:14

Gender:Male

Appearance: anime_guy-1.jpg

He makes the impression that he is pure evil' date=' but his rage fueled that hate.

Deck:Destiny Heros

Bio: Dylan grew up as a loner, and he was 10 years old when he died. A criminal robbed his house, and then his father tried to catch him, but he got arrested because he had a gun on him. Then the criminal revealed himself to be an undercover agent of Yliaster and promised him that he was going to help him. But, his father broke out of prison and tried to kill the agent, but his father actually shot him, because Dylan stepped in the way to save him. Thats when he became a Dark Signer and the agent's apprentice. Then he killed his father and joined the Dark Signers with the agent.

Dark Signer Mark: [img']http://www.pheonix-az.com/pheonix_tattoos1.jpg[/img]

Earthbound Immortal: Pyro Ignis

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Two questions:

1. Is the phoenix an actual Nazca Line? And even if I let that slide, EBIs are DARK. Change the card to reflect that.

2. So, the criminal who robbed your character's place just says "lol I'm Yliaster, I can help you." and the kid TAKES A BULLET FOR HIM? There's something wrong here. Change it so that it makes sense.

 

Recteik If You Look At Cardmakermasters RP You Will Find Character Number 1 This Is Character Number 2

Name: Mokuba Kaiba

Age: ( How Old Is Mokuba Anyways? I Think He'd Be At Least 17 By Now So He Is 17. ) 17.

Gender: Male

Appearence: Imagine Mokuba But Older.

Deck: Spellcasters Command

Bio: After Kaiba Left To Become A Famous Worldwide Duelist mokuba And Shadow Were Recruited By Yalister If You Duel Them They Will Change The Rules Of The Duel to 2v1 Here Are The Rule Changes:

1: They Split There Life Points Between Each Other. ( As In They Each Have 4000 LP Well The Opponent Has 8000 LP )

2: They Share There Turn. ( As In They Each Sumon 1 Monster Draw 1 Card etc. )

3: Opponent Gets To Summon 2 Monsters And Draw 2 Cards Per Turn. ( of The Opponents )

Now You Know my Char. And As Said Before... Just Look At The Rp Of Cardmakermaster for shadows description.

 

Name: Shadow Kaiba

Age: 10

Gender: Male

Appereance: Black Shoes Socks Sweat Pants Sweatshirt Black Hair Only Thin Not Black On Him Are Duel Disk Witch Is Battle City model and his skin color is white.

Deck Name: Warrior's Strike/Spellcasters Command

Trump Card: Pheonix Gearfreid/Endymion The Master Magician

Bio:Shadow's Just Your Normal 10 Year Old. Except He Was Abandoned For Being Able To Do Nothing But Complain Then With His Reamaining Money He Bought The Decks He Uses ( Look Above For Deck Name's ) He Hopes To Win The Tournament To Earn The Prize Money. ( Prize Money Is imaginary If There Is Any I Assume? ) He Is Also A Pro Duelist But Does It For Fun. And Kaiba Adopted Him After Shadow Beat Kaiba And Yugi And Joeys Best Cards With One Card Combo.

Ooc: Second Deck/Trump Card Is Mokubas. And When They Duel Alone They Use Normal Rules.


Oh And if i duel you in the rp then tell me what your cards do because i have norton and that stops me from seeing the images. either that or make your deck list of cards have the effect of the cards.

 

So...let me get this straight. Yliaster just kinda scoops Mokuba up and suddenly he's a top-ish-ranking member? And I do apologize if I offend' date=' but Shadow is a flat out Gary Stu. Abandoned by all, then adopted by a main character due to his prodigious dueling skill? And there is no tournament. Yliaster is committing a terrorist act.

 

Name: Dr. Reno

Age: 34

Gender: Male

Appearance: Long Silver hair usually hidden by a black cloak. Always has a maniacal smile on his face, his teeth are sharp. He uses the chaos duel disk.

Deck: http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/thread-189767.html

Bio: Placed in a Mental Hospital at age 10 escaped at age 18. Was cursed with the chaos seal of Orichalchos and now corrupts minds into becoming his. His deck consists of the Chaos Archetype.

 

Who is reno allied with? Why was he put in a mental hospital? Come on, put some effort into it?

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Here's my App

 

[spoiler=Dark Signer App]

Name:Dylan Marks

Age:14

Gender:Male

Appearance: anime_guy-1.jpg

He makes the impression that he is pure evil' date=' but his rage fueled that hate.

Deck:Destiny Heros

Bio: Dylan grew up as a loner, and he was 10 years old when he died. A criminal robbed his house, and then his father tried to catch him, but he got arrested because he had a gun on him. Then the criminal revealed himself to be an undercover agent of Yliaster and promised him that he was going to help him. But, his father broke out of prison and tried to kill the agent, but his father actually shot him, because Dylan stepped in the way to save him. Thats when he became a Dark Signer and the agent's apprentice. Then he killed his father and joined the Dark Signers with the agent.

Dark Signer Mark: [img']http://www.pheonix-az.com/pheonix_tattoos1.jpg[/img]

Earthbound Immortal: Pyro Ignis

139540a.jpg

 

 

 

Two questions:

1. Is the phoenix an actual Nazca Line? And even if I let that slide, EBIs are DARK. Change the card to reflect that.

2. So, the criminal who robbed your character's place just says "lol I'm Yliaster, I can help you." and the kid TAKES A BULLET FOR HIM? There's something wrong here. Change it so that it makes sense.

 

Its been changed, and no, its no a real nazca line because i hate using other peoples things

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...Fine. Then I Guess Just Forget Shadows app and i i will make a new one later.


Recteik If You Look At Cardmakermasters RP You Will Find Character Number 1 This Is Character Number 2

Name: Mokuba Kaiba

Age: ( How Old Is Mokuba Anyways? I Think He'd Be At Least 17 By Now So He Is 17. ) 17.

Gender: Male

Appearence: Imagine Mokuba But Older.

Deck: Spellcasters Command

Bio: After Kaiba Left To Become A Famous Worldwide Duelist mokuba And Shadow Were Recruited By Yalister If You Duel Them They Will Change The Rules Of The Duel to 2v1 Here Are The Rule Changes:

1: They Split There Life Points Between Each Other. ( As In They Each Have 4000 LP Well The Opponent Has 8000 LP )

2: They Share There Turn. ( As In They Each Sumon 1 Monster Draw 1 Card etc. )

3: Opponent Gets To Summon 2 Monsters And Draw 2 Cards Per Turn. ( of The Opponents )

Now You Know my Char. And As Said Before... Just Look At The Rp Of Cardmakermaster for shadows description.

 

Name: Shadow Kaiba

Age: 10

Gender: Male

Appereance: Black Shoes Socks Sweat Pants Sweatshirt Black Hair Only Thin Not Black On Him Are Duel Disk Witch Is Battle City model and his skin color is white.

Deck Name: Warrior's Strike/Spellcasters Command

Trump Card: Pheonix Gearfreid/Endymion The Master Magician

Bio:Shadow's Just Your Normal 10 Year Old. Except He Was Abandoned For Being Able To Do Nothing But Complain Then With His Reamaining Money He Bought The Decks He Uses ( Look Above For Deck Name's ) He Hopes To Win The Tournament To Earn The Prize Money. ( Prize Money Is imaginary If There Is Any I Assume? ) He Is Also A Pro Duelist But Does It For Fun. And Kaiba Adopted Him After Shadow Beat Kaiba And Yugi And Joeys Best Cards With One Card Combo.

Ooc: Second Deck/Trump Card Is Mokubas. And When They Duel Alone They Use Normal Rules.


Oh And if i duel you in the rp then tell me what your cards do because i have norton and that stops me from seeing the images. either that or make your deck list of cards have the effect of the cards.

 

So...let me get this straight. Yliaster just kinda scoops Mokuba up and suddenly he's a top-ish-ranking member? And I do apologize if I offend' date=' but Shadow is a flat out Gary Stu. Abandoned by all, then adopted by a main character due to his prodigious dueling skill? And there is no tournament. Yliaster is committing a terrorist act.

 

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1: Forget About Shadow.

2: Forget About Mokuba.

3: I Will Make 2 New Characters.

4: If They Are Cartoon Characters Not From Yugioh I Will Make Them Use 1 Of my Decks I Think Suits Them. Ex: Kevin Levin From Ben10 Alien Force Uses Warriors Strike Deck.

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My Dark Signer App. Credit for Pappagallo's image goes to Bakupenguin

 

Name: Sazuka Jinkuri

Age:29

Gender: Female

Appearance: A thin lightly built woman. With long red hair and bright green eyes.

Deck: Blackwing Devastator

Bio: She has history with Recteik. She and he where both involved in the same accident that whiped Recteik's memory. She died of her injuries two weeks after he woke up but he didn't remeber her and never even knew she excisted. She died hating him for abandoning her.

Dark Signer: Frog

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Yes' date=' you can.

EDIT: But be sure they are ORIGINAL CHARACTERS. Copy-paste characters are against the RP rules.

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What's a copy-paste character? Are they characters that have been copyrighted like cartoon characters?

 

A character that has been used in another RP, and is copied and pasted into this one. If you DO go with a cartoon character, I'll accept it iff and only iff the app is good. (Yes, I used two ff's for a reason.)

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Name: Dartz

Age: Unknown

Gender: Male

Appearance: Dartz' usual outfit consist of closed white and blue robes, including a foot length cloak which trails behind him, padded shoulders, cuffed wrists, a raised collar and a stone bearing the symbol of the "Orichalcos" around his neck. He wears a fragment of the Orichalcos Stone in a chain on his forehead. His light blue hair features a two locked fringe and trails to near knee length and is tied at waist length. Dartz originally had gold irises, but after being corrupted by the Orichalcos, he has heterochromic irises; his right iris is green and his left is gold. His right iris became green when he was corrupted by the Orichalcos, but returned to the gold color after he was defeated by Atem (Yami Yugi) and Yugi.

Deck: Orichalcos

Bio: Ten thousand years ago, Atlantis, an island isolated from the rest of the world, was a perfect civilization. One day, however, meteors rained down upon the kingdom. These meteorites were mysterious and powerful stones of the Orichalcos, and glowed a bright greenish blue. These stones imbued the people of Atlantis with ultimate knowledge and power. In just a few years, Atlantis became the most advanced civilization on the planet, even more advanced than the modern world of today. But with power comes corruption and greed.

 

Ironheart, the king of Atlantis, gave his throne to his son, Dartz. Soon, the stones of the Orichalcos began to expose the evil in people, turning those with darkness on the inside into monsters on the outside. Dartz witnessed his own wife, Iona become a horrid, ugly beast (In the Japanese version, she attacks him and he kills her with his sword). Confused and frightened, Dartz consulted a stone of the Orichalcos for guidance. The Orichalcos granted Dartz great power and lent him soldiers to do his bidding. It also gave him control of a powerful beast, the Great Leviathan (Orichalcos God in the Japanese version), which would help him to destroy the world and create a new one that would be free of evil. Eventually, Dartz became corrupted and misguided.

 

Ironheart and Dartz's daughter Chris fled and called upon the world of Duel Monsters and its guardians, the three Legendary Dragons (in actuality, three soldiers whom Dartz had transformed into dragons) for help against the corrupted Dartz. One day, an army of goodly magical creatures—including the three dragons—led by Ironheart met with Dartz’s army of evil Orichalcos soldiers and the Great Leviathan, and the Battle of Atlantis took place. The battle concluded with neither side being victorious. The three dragons were frozen in ice, and the magical creatures were sent back to their own world. The bestial soldiers of the Orichalcos were destroyed, and the Great Leviathan was sealed away from this world. The island of Atlantis sank beneath the sea.

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Name: Ross Drew

Age: 14

Gender: Male

Appearance: 5 feet tall, black hair, intimidating green eyes like daggers, light skin with a tan. Dressed like a normal duelist, unlike most Dark Signers, Hummingbird mark on left arm.

 

Deck: Aslla Piscu

3x Aslla Piscu

3x Mystic Tomato

2x Double Coston

2x Caius the Shadow Monarch

2x Krebons

1x Dark Armed Dragon

1x The Dark Creator

1x Dandylion

1x Morphing Jar

1x Breaker the Magical Warrior

1x Gorz the Emissiary of Darkness

=18

 

3x Fires of Doomsday

3x Magical Citadel of Endymion

2x Earthbound Revival

1x Swallow's Nest

1x Terraforming

1x Allure of Darkness

1x Heavy Storm

1x Mystical Space Typhoon

1x Brain Control

=14

 

2x Revival of the Immortals

1x Threatening Roar

1x Roar of the Earthbound

1x Mirror Force

1x Torrential Tribute

1x Bottomless Trap Hole

1x Magic Cylinder

1x Call of the Haunted

=9

 

Total=41

 

1x Armory Arm

2x Ally of Justic Catastor

1x Goyo Guardian

1x Brionac, Dragon of the Ice Barrier

1x Flamvell Uruquizas

1x Ancient Fairy Dragon

1x Black Rose Dragon

1x X-Saber Urbellum

1x Dark End Dragon

2x Stardust Dragon

1x Red Dragon Archfiend

1x Thought Ruler Archfiend

1x Mist Wurm

=15

 

 

Bio: Ross was abandoned by his parents for an unknown reason, and grew up alone on the streets, being picked on a lot by older gangs. Ross became a Dark Signer as revenge. Smart, would probably have done well in life if he had been taken care of. Thinks on his feet to avoid certain annoying situations. Knowing how it feels to be defenceless against something more powerful than you, he is pityful on his opponents when he beats them in a duel, usually leaving them lying in a dark alley, instead of destroying them.

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