SebastiaanZ Posted December 20, 2007 Report Share Posted December 20, 2007 Well I make one more thread, this is where I'll post some old stories I once made. This first one is about a boy called Damien Underwood who utilizes the powers of Orichalcos for good purposes. He indeed has every version of the Seal. He does not lose his soul when he loses but he can purify his opponents from all evil. He also has the power over the Orichalcos-Soldiers. Damien Underwood was brought up in a orphanage. It was burned down by some businessman (including his father) and Damien decided to fight them of. He got send to a jail-island where the biggest criminals were brought. The only way he could survive was when he duelled. He never had duelled before, so he took lessons from an old duellist who gave him the first deck of Orichalcos. He battled every criminal crimelord on the island and in the end he was allowed to leave the island again. Now he returned to his original home of his original family where a private tournament would be held. He participates in it of course. 1. Turtle Battle! Damien vs Eiga! Upon arriving at the place of his parents, he sees his little sister Sara who is looking at all the duellists. She notices Damien, but doesn’t recognise him because of his sunglasses. He drops a card, but Sara sees it and tells Damien he lost a card. That`s right Damien says, looking at her. She thinks she saw someone familiar. She sees the card, a Orichalcos Guardian Angel Eran. She says she has almost a card like this, Guardian Angel Joan. She says she hopes she can face him in a duel during this tournament. She’ll be participating as well. Damien`s father announces that the tournament is going to start at midnight. It is an all out tournament. The last one standing will be allowed to first duel against the wiz kid of the family, Daniel, Damien`s brother and then against the master, his father. A reporter asks about the rumour that the second son of the father called Sander, is going to compete as well. Sander tells them he doesn’t know of a second son. He only has one son and a daughter. Damien says under his breath two sons. Everyone set of to their rooms and Sander asks two guards to remove Damien and make sure he is in his room. He keeps watching as the guards approach Damien, but then suddenly the Seal of the Orichalcos appears on his head and around Damien. Three Orichalcos Soldiers appear on Damien`s side. The guards retreat and Damien sends one Orichalcos-Soldier, in mini-version to the room of Sara to watch over her and keep an eye on all of her duels. That evening, Sander, Sara, Daniel and the mother are dining. Sara asks why Sander didn’t invite Damien. He is no duellist, Sander says. The mother, Gwen, tells him she heard different. He became one of the most powerfull. No-one could stop his deck as soon as he used the full power and potential of the deck. Sander tells them to finish dinner in another room, he need to talk to others. A few dark men appear from the waiting room and Sander tells them they need to take out Damien. He must not reach the finals. He won’t stand a ghost of a chance. The man with grey clothes says he will take Damien on first with his Turtle-deck. Sander agrees. They leave. Damien activates the power of Orichalcos in his room, to see who will duel him first. He sees it is Eiga, who uses a Turtle-deck. Damien laughs and says he knows exactly how to take him on. He then uses a magiccard from his deck, Orichalcos-Mirror to see how Sara is doing. He is surprised to find out she still has a picture of him when they were young. Then the clock shows midnight and he arrives at the grounds where all duellists have gathered. Damien is surprised to find out Sara is competing as well. She must have improved her deck. Damien is walking through the grounds and a duellist appears from the bushes challenging Damien to a duel. Damien agrees and activates his dueldisc. The opponent is surprised. Damien says it is a customized dueldisc. The faith of the opponent, Eiga has already been sealed. They start their duel. Eiga activates the magiccard Swamp of Turtles. He summons his Catapult Turtle (1200/2000) and then DD Turtle (500/500). He activates the special ability of Catapult Turtle and fires DD Turtle at Damien, lowering his lifepoints to 3750. Then he is able to summon another DD Turtle and fires it again, leaving Damien with 3500 lifepoints. Damien asks if he is ready. Eiga says for now and sets one card facedown and ends his turn. Damien says he’ll go on, playing Orichalcos Dai Grepher (1700/1600). Then he plays the magiccard Seal of Soul. It removes every card that is sent into the graveyard and allows him to gain 300 lifepoints. So he sends one card into the graveyard, removing it from play. That activates the trapcard from his hand, Grave-Sealing-Sword. Duellists can’t sent any monster into the graveyard, but allows Damien to gain 500 lifepoints per monster that Eiga has to remove from the game. This activates the second ability of his Seal of Soul, to summon another monster to the field every time Damien removes a card and the opponent is forced to. So Damien removes a card and summons Orichalcos Gendal-Fried (200/800) in defencemode. It deals 200 lifepoints per turn to Eiga. Eiga (3800) asks so what, he can destroy Gendal-Fried next turn. With what, Damien asks. Eiga says with his monsters of course. Damien doesn’t think so and removes another card from the game, by sending a card into the grevayard. He gains 300 lifepoints (4100). Eiga says Dai Grepher has not enough attackpoints to destroy his Catapult Turtle. Damien agrees, but if he sacrifises all but 1 lifepoints he has. It makes his Dai Grepher uninvincible (∞/∞). Further, he has the ability to deduct damage from Eiga even without having his opponent`s monsters in attackmode. So he attacks, but Eiga uses Turtle-Shield and forces Dai Grepher back. Damien says no problem he’ll defeat Eiga next turn. There won’t be a next turn, Eiga says. Damien sets one card and ends his turn. Eiga summons Giant-Turtle (1500/1200) in attackmode and attacks Gendal-Fried. It is destroyed, but instead removed from the game. Eiga says his special ability of Giant-Turtle allows him to deduct battledamage even though his opponent`s monsters are in defencemode, so the lifepoints of Damien are 0. Wrong, Damien says. A new monster appears, Orichalcos Tia Tao Snake (2200/2000). It lays an egg every time a monster attacks him. So he believes the turn would end. Eiga says no and activates the special ability of Catapult Turtle to launch Giant-Turtle at Damien, dealing 750 lifepoints. But instead the attack is negated and Damien suddenly has 750 lifepoints. It is because of his Tia Tao Snake. It absorbs the battle damage it is done directly and add it to his own lifepoints. Tia Tao Snake can then automatically destroy a monster, which hightens Damien`s lifepoints by 500 (1250). Further Tia Tao Snake gains 200 attackpoints per time Damien uses one of his abilities. Eiga tries to switch Giant-Turtle to defencemode, but Tia Tao Snake`s special ability, Glare, allows Damien to force Giant-Turtle into attackmode again. Tia Tao Snake attacks directly (1600). Eiga says it is not over yet. No, says Damien, it is just starting. He plays a magiccard called Orichalcos-Force. The egg disappears and then Damien activates the second effect of Orichalcos-Force, sending in Orichalcos Dobledomas (0/0). Per card removed from the game it gains 600 levelpoints. Having 7 cards removed he gains 4200. He tells Dobledomas to attack directly, lowering Eiga lifepoints to 0. Dark energy appears around Eiga and disappears. Damiens says his mind has been erased from dark thoughts. Don’t allow Damien to duel his dark personality again. Eiga leaves quickly and tells the father he lost. The father says he didn’t expect Eiga to win either. His next assassin will be Rai……… Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zane trusedale Posted December 22, 2007 Report Share Posted December 22, 2007 great job man. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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