barsam Posted December 20, 2007 Report Share Posted December 20, 2007 I cant think of a good title I dont want to name the title the name of the card anymore. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
VainZiler Posted December 20, 2007 Report Share Posted December 20, 2007 In order: It's die not dice.Life Points is capitalized.Increase, not gain.Monster doesn't need to be capitalized.LIGHT-Attribute, not type. Another poorly done card... the effect is just scattered and hardly does anything of use. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yusei Fudou Posted December 20, 2007 Report Share Posted December 20, 2007 ^Yes, nice correcting. My rating of this card would be 6/10. Good effort at trying to reach good card grammar, and somewhat weird effect, but not enough effort. Want to know how to improve your card-making skills? Check out my card-making tutorial. (not advertising, but instead of making a whole tutorial here there is already one there.) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Draco Straybyrn Posted December 20, 2007 Report Share Posted December 20, 2007 Vain stole my bit. 6/10, do what he said. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Professor Cobra Posted December 20, 2007 Report Share Posted December 20, 2007 Good pic. Okay effect. A couple grammar problems. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Natedog2001 Posted December 20, 2007 Report Share Posted December 20, 2007 Great Card 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RestLess-BoTics Posted December 20, 2007 Report Share Posted December 20, 2007 Work on some grammar problems. Pretty cool though! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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