|Ice| Second Splice |Ice|

[Godot]

[align=center]Yeah, I know, odd choice of Pokemanz, but I had an idea in mind. Too bad this isn't what I wanted. xD

 

 

(Octillery, Masquerain and....Lairon?)

 

So yeah, this is what I got. This scary crap. CNC. xD

 

Oh, and I know I didn't do that much, but I'm still working on it, and I may add spikes to the tentacles....

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[Kuro no Keiyakushu]

[align=center]The outlines look distorted, but at least you got the

shading somewhat right. The wings look out of perspective. They just

don't look right. I'm not digging the colour scheme either. I don't hav

any current ideas of what it could be, just not this. Hope this didn't

sound to harsh compared to the 1-word "Epic" CnC's you give me. xD[/align]

[Godot]

[align=center]The outlines look distorted' date=' but at least you got the

shading somewhat right. The wings look out of perspective. They just

don't look right. I'm not digging the colour scheme either. I don't hav

any current ideas of what it could be, just not this. Hope this didn't

sound to harsh compared to the [b']1-word "Epic" CnC's you give me. xD[/b][/align]

 

FFFFFFUUUUUUUU

 

xD

 

Yeah, I know, I didn't like the wings either, and the outline that looks disorted is on the top, amirite? The color scheme comes from masquerain, but I may change it to Lairons color scheme. And what I wanted it to have, is the skull thing that Lairon has over its head. xD

 

Thanks Kuro.

[Kuro no Keiyakushu]

[align=center]The outlines look distorted' date=' but at least you got the

shading somewhat right. The wings look out of perspective. They just

don't look right. I'm not digging the colour scheme either. I don't hav

any current ideas of what it could be, just not this. Hope this didn't

sound to harsh compared to the [b']1-word "Epic" CnC's you give me. xD[/b][/align]

 

FFFFFFUUUUUUUU

 

xD

 

Yeah, I know, I didn't like the wings either, and the outline that looks disorted is on the top, amirite? The color scheme comes from masquerain, but I may change it to Lairons color scheme. And what I wanted it to have, is the skull thing that Lairon has over its head. xD

 

Thanks Kuro.

 

Anytime. I hate people who only like "OMG RAWRSUM EPIXNESS MAKE ME SUM PLZ K LUV UR STUFF" CnC. xD

 

On the top and on the bottom where there's mostly just black outline is where the outlines don't look good.

[Godot]

[align=center]The outlines look distorted' date=' but at least you got the

shading somewhat right. The wings look out of perspective. They just

don't look right. I'm not digging the colour scheme either. I don't hav

any current ideas of what it could be, just not this. Hope this didn't

sound to harsh compared to the [b']1-word "Epic" CnC's you give me. xD[/b][/align]

 

FFFFFFUUUUUUUU

 

xD

 

Yeah, I know, I didn't like the wings either, and the outline that looks disorted is on the top, amirite? The color scheme comes from masquerain, but I may change it to Lairons color scheme. And what I wanted it to have, is the skull thing that Lairon has over its head. xD

 

Thanks Kuro.

 

Anytime. I hate people who only like "OMG RAWRSUM EPIXNESS MAKE ME SUM PLZ K LUV UR STUFF" CnC. xD

 

On the top and on the bottom where there's mostly just black outline is where the outlines don't look good.

 

But...it's true. And really, sometimes I'm just lazy. xD

 

Yeah, the top was part of Lairon, so I understand that, but the bottom was never touched..

[Jappio]

Well hard to add anything more beyond what Kuro says. I would have totally skipped commenting at all, but I did notice one thing that he didn't mention that I have to say I don't like.

 

The overall appearance of this splice is too simple. It looks just like a modified Octillery. The addition of wings rarely ever adds any good flare to it, and the head piece is an easily miss-able change. So it comes off as an Octillery with wings and an odd color, not the most impressive thing, nor anything 'cool' or 'amazing'.