Tourmaline Posted February 19, 2010 Report Share Posted February 19, 2010 Hey, Raymond, if you need help with grammar, you can easily ask me for help. I am an unofficial member of the Grammar Police. Trust me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MKJ Posted February 19, 2010 Report Share Posted February 19, 2010 can u check my app for grammar? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
raymond5577 Posted February 19, 2010 Report Share Posted February 19, 2010 Hey' date=' Raymond, if you need help with grammar, you can easily ask me for help. I am an unofficial member of the Grammar Police. Trust me.[/quote'] Alright!! Thank you, then please help^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Otaku-sama Posted February 19, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 19, 2010 @MKJ: Accepted. @JC: Sound control? I guess that is acceptable, but give me a range of frequency in Hertz. Also, can he simulate voices and music or can he only create pure sounds?@Raymond: Not much better. I don't like the power to summon weapons. It's too battle oriented. Your powers should be versatile and able to be used in many contexts. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
六兆年と一夜物語 Posted February 19, 2010 Report Share Posted February 19, 2010 Hope it's not too late... Name: Sugoi Dorobou Gender: Male Age: 14 Appearance: He stands at 5' 1", with blond hair. He dislikes athletic ability, so his muscles are rather small compared to the jocks around the school. His father was a Chinese business man on a trip to Japan for, god knows what reasons. Even with different country backgrounds, he still looks like a normal Japanese person, seeing the fact that his parents are both Asian. He doesn't like missing school, so his hair is a mess giving the fact he usually oversleeps. He's forced to skip breakfast, making him a bit thinner than everyone else. Personality: He forces himself to stay calm, yet he has trouble doing it. He finds himself in a tight spot when he looses his temper. He tries to think about a problem rationally as many times as he can, though he has a 50% success rate. Even though it's easy to get him angry, it's difficult to make him create an outburst, since he grew up with a cap on his anger. He rarely gets sad, although it happens when a powerful traumatic event happens. He wishes that he can control his personality and emotions one day. Affinity towards: Creation. His powers vary depending on his mood, literally showing what he feels inside. For example, when angry, he can create a powerful weapon that in no way can be used for body defense. When sad, he is the polar opposite of his anger mood, being in a poweful defense position, making him feel isolated. During each day, his power slowly grows, making things more powerful. However, trying to push his limit would make him weaken his growth and even turn him backwards a bit. Strongest Subject: Physics. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
raymond5577 Posted February 19, 2010 Report Share Posted February 19, 2010 Change it to Magic, how's now ? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Azure Flame Kite Posted February 19, 2010 Report Share Posted February 19, 2010 Not quite sure on the exact range of hertz, but he can control it to an extent that he can break eardrums if he's really concentrated and if the target doesn't move. And yes, he can simulate voices. Music... we'll see, probably just an instrument at a time. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Otaku-sama Posted February 19, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 19, 2010 @Rosudek: Power is too powerful and uncontrollable. The power must be able to be controlled. Also, spontaneous creation is too powerful and godmod like. Also, Sugoi is not a name as far as I know. Sugoi is an exclaimation similar to 'Amazing!'. @Raymond: You have have the power except for the power up friend power. Accepted @JC: Eardrum breaking is not from pitch, but from volume. Simulating anything but pure sound (one tone) will be given later in the plot. Breaking eardrums will come later as well. Accepted. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
raymond5577 Posted February 19, 2010 Report Share Posted February 19, 2010 Oh, ok let me erase that part =) and thanks hehe, Rosudek's name, Amazing Thief XD ---and done~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Otaku-sama Posted February 19, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 19, 2010 Starting in 10 minutes... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Naimo Posted February 19, 2010 Report Share Posted February 19, 2010 One question, (I do want to apply but I can't right now): will you still be accepting after you've started? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Otaku-sama Posted February 19, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 19, 2010 OoC: Probably not. Sorry. Okay, we are starting now! You must use OoC: from now on! As a reminder, no one starts with a superpower. You start now in your character's homeroom before being switched into the new one. IC: It was a morning like any other at Ryoo High School. Students exchanged rumours and tv show synopsi while the principal droned on the PA system. The chatting ceased until the principal started to talk about something not boring: As some of you may have known, there has been a strange vigilante running around the Saitama Prefecture, causing many societal disturbances. This masked criminal has been interfering with police investigations according to authorities, and say that she is to be considered dangerous and armed with a deadly weapon. As the principal of Ryoo, I feel obliged to inform you, the students, to urge you not to walk around after sunset, as that is the time this dangerous vigilante roams... As this announcement played, several homeroom teachers entered their classrooms bearing a note. Each note had a similar message: The student (name) has been transferred into the new homeroom of I-1 on the second floor. Their new homeroom teacher is now Yukari Tanizaki. Send them to the room immediately. -Administration As this message went out, the halls became loosely populated with students who have been transferred. Some of them knew eachother, but most did not. A select eleven students, however, this was not simply a change of homeroom. Little did they know that their world was about to be changed forever... OoC: RP now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Lightning Posted February 19, 2010 Report Share Posted February 19, 2010 OoC: So we all attend Ryoo High School, I'm Guessing? IC: Hirosuke, better known as Rai, was sitting in his homeroom seat. He turned and glanced around the room and took notice of the other students that sat around him. Judging by the expression on most of their faces, they were bored. But not Hirosuke; He sat on a seat that had a small, but satisfying window still. From this window, Hirosuke was able to watch everything taht went on in the lives of the people below the classroom. Hirosuke then turned his head towards the front of the room. The student Hirosuke Rai Kanji has been transferred into the new homeroom of I-1 on the second floor. Their new homeroom teacher is now Yukari Tanizaki. Send them to the room immediately. He heard the message, grabbed his bag, and then walked out of the classroom and into the hallways, which were rather crowded. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zaneko Posted February 19, 2010 Report Share Posted February 19, 2010 Kiyoshi," the teacher called. "Kiyoshi! KIYOSHI!" Taiga jumped, the yell jolting him awake from his nap. "Pie-r-squared!" he stuttered, rubbing his eyes. The teacher sighed and waved for him to come to his desk. "I don't know what kind of dream you were having during homeroom," The teacher sighed, "but this note is for you." Taiga blinked and took the proffered note, reading it quickly. The student Taiga Kiyoshi has been transferred into the new homeroom of I-1 on the second floor. Their new homeroom teacher is now Yukari Tanizaki. Send them to the room immediately. -Administration He looked at the teacher in surprise. The teacher smiled a bit sadly. "It's officail. From this moment, you are no longer in my class." He sighed again. "I'm a bit sorry to see you leave. The classes were always... interesting with you around." Taiga made show of leaving, faking crying and bidding goodbye to the students, plants and even the chairs and desks. His homero.. correction: old homeroom teacher chased him out with a few flying sticks of chalk. I wonder what kind of teacher this lady is. Taiga thought as he headed off. Yukari Tanizaki? Tani from valley I think, and -zaki form cape or maybe edge. Yukari means lily if I remember correctly. So... Lilly of the Valley's edge? He shrugged. Not that names really mattered, after all, his name called he was a pure tiger. As if. As he walked, he remembered half-hearing a notice about female vigilante or something while he was napping. Strange that the school suddenly got a new homeroom too, were they connected. He dismissed the thoughts and entered his new room with a yawn. No other student was there yet so he chose an ideal seat; second row from the back, by the window. A tree shaded the seat from the worst of the sun's glare so he made himself comfortable a waited to see if anyone he new was transferred as well. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
raymond5577 Posted February 19, 2010 Report Share Posted February 19, 2010 OOC: correct me if I'm wrong but I think your missing a letter in synopsi The halls became loosely populated with students who have been transferred including the new transfer student. As he heard the message, he starts to head over to his class. After walking for sometime, Raydoz remember one of the teacher told him this morning that his class is situated on the second floor. As he move to the second floor, he starts to talk to himself: "Alright, a new place means I can meet some new friends. I wonder what homeroom teacher look like.... Hopefully not strict." When he gets to the second floor, he look left and then right to see where is his class room. "Let's see, I-1, I-1, where is I-1... Ahah! There it is, on to my destination! " he said cheerfully as he skips towards his class but he stops when he approaches the door. Raydoz felt nervous all of a sudden and took a deep breathe. He knock the door and slide it open, when he enter he gave a loud greeting "Yo! Good morning everyone!" showing a peace sign to the student inside but he was dissapointed when there is only a teacher inside. "Emm, hello teacher, good morning~ I'm the transfer student, nice-ta-mit-ya" said Raydoz to the teacher with a smile on his face. Suddenly he noticed, there is someone at the back of the class and say "Morning! " cheerfully as he waved to his new classmate. OOC: Sorry, will sleep NOW(correction), lol Taiga's funny XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Tainted Black Posted February 19, 2010 Report Share Posted February 19, 2010 Noir sat in the back of his homeroom, reading a book. Johnny Tremain, an American Novel which had been translated into Japanese. It took place in the 1770's when America was a mere colony. His mind was completely absorbed by this book, and did not hear his teacher when she walked up to him. That is, until she slammed her hands on his desk and snapped. He looked up, grinning at the Young woman. "Yes, Mrs. Sakura?" He said, evoking a reaction from her. "My name is Mrs. Kuro to you, you little snot!" The 29-year old woman snapped. Noir chuckled. "Of course it is, Sakura. Now, what did you need?" Mrs. Kuro slammed the note down on his desk. "Here! You're out of here, mister!" She looked overjoyed as he said it. Noir had never seen eye to eye with her, anyways. He picked it up, and read it to himself. The student, Tanekai Izumi, has been transferred into the new homeroom of I-1 on the second floor. Their new homeroom teacher is now Yukari Tanizaki. Send them to the room immediately. -Administration He scowled as he put the note down, for two reasons. The first was that it used his real name. He never used, or let anyone else use, his real name. The second was that he could not taunt his teacher anymore. Yet, a small thought appealed to him. He could start over. He put on his grin and looked up at her. "See ya, ugly!" He said as he stood and picked up his bag and book. As he walked out, he heard Mrs. Kuro yelling obscenities, but he didn't care. Time for a new beggining. He held in a laugh, and turned it into a chuckle. "This... this will be fun." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zaneko Posted February 19, 2010 Report Share Posted February 19, 2010 Taiga looked up at his new classmate. His extremely cheerful new classmate. He took in the white hair without comment."Hi. And Morning. My name is Taigi Kiyoshi'" He smiled. "Most people in the school have heard about me already." Taiga tried to place a name to the face before him. He failed. "It don't think I know your name, so you most be the famed transfer student." He flipped lightly over his desk and leapt over the other to stick his hand out."Nice to meet you!" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Lightning Posted February 19, 2010 Report Share Posted February 19, 2010 Hirosuke entered the room casually and slowly walked into the classroom. He glanced around to the people who were also in the classroom. He casually and clamly waved to Taigi, although he did not know who he was. Hirosuke walked over to a seat in the back of the room and sat down. He pulled out a light novel, because he found himself having nothing else to do. Hirosuke started reading the light novel and after a while of this, he sighed. How boring... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tourmaline Posted February 20, 2010 Report Share Posted February 20, 2010 Katsuri was in his math class, with a message stating that he has been transferred to a new homeroom class. As he stood up from his seat, a silence came over the rule. He picked up his books, and, without a word, walked out the room. As he was walking around the school, he had been checking the room numbers, so he could find his. "Yukari Tanizaki....I-1...I'll find the class as quickly as I could..." He noticed several other students walking towards, apparently, the same class. He decided to follow them. About five minutes later, he ended up at a class. Above the door was written I-1, and inside, several students. He walked inside, sighing before entry, analyzing the people and class. He kept to himself, considering his normal shyness and mild loneliness. He decided to go to the back left corner of the class, next to a window. Slowly sliding his books onto his new desk, he sat down and looked outside the window. "I wonder who this dangerous lady is..." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hydra of Ages Posted February 20, 2010 Report Share Posted February 20, 2010 Yorushira blinked at the scrap of paper in her hand, trying to puzzle it out. Her homeroom was being switched? But why? She hadn't requested anything like that, and her class wasn't too full. If anything, with her gone, they were a rather tiny class.'It's not fair.', she thought to herself with a sniff. She had just gotten used to that teacher, those other kids in there... And now she'd have to make all those connections over again. She'd mess things up, like always, several times before she got it right... she'd already done all that painful stuff back at her old class, so why did she have to do it all over again? Holding back her sniffles, she counted down the numbers of the second floor classrooms, looking for the first one. She brushed her long black bangs away from her face, trying to avoid sulking. She wanted to cry and whine about it, but knew that would be a bit overreacting. Didn't change how she felt though. She found the door, sighed, quickly touched the Yen coin strung around her neck, for luck, the fang, for courage, and the rosebud, for benevolence. Taking a deep breath, she fiddled with the red cloth tied around her wrist, and turned the knob on the door. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Andx Posted February 20, 2010 Report Share Posted February 20, 2010 Kenji had been quite bored for a good few minutes. The time before school started was always so dull. Nothing going on, nothing to do. There was a strange announcement about a dangerous woman but Kenji hardly payed attention to such things. True the fact that anyone would be stupid enough to be a criminal perplexed him but he never bothered himself about them. The police did their job well enough so Kenji seriously doubted anything would be happening too soon. "So, seems like another boring day ahead." he thought as he sat in his homeroom. It was at that moment that his teacher walked over and handed him a note. This note stated that he would be transferring homerooms, namely to that of one Ms. Yukari Tanizake. Kenji hadn't heard of her before though that wasn't all that strange, he was only a second year student and even seniors never knew all of the teachers. Switching homerooms was a relatively minor annoyance to Kenji but it did leave him curious. Throughout his school career he'd never had schedule or homeroom changes. He was quite lucky that the counsellors never made issues with his classes. A friend leaned over and asked what the note was about."Seems I'm getting a homeroom change. See you guys later then." he said. His friends were a little sad to hear the news but it wasn't that bad. They'd still see each other and obviously still had to have at least one class together. A homeroom is just a homeroom was Kenji's way of thinking about it. He collected his things and got on his way. Kenji would be headed on his way up to the second floor as that was where the note stated Ms. Tanizaki's room was located. No other students were about though Kenji knew that as he approached the room that he would see the others that had been called to the room. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saiba Aisu Posted February 20, 2010 Report Share Posted February 20, 2010 Adrienne frowned as she heard the announcement concerning the mysterious female criminal who had been agitating the local police forces as of late—what kind of dork would do something so hopelessly stupid, unless she had some sort of death wish? The dark-haired girl sat up straighter at her desk and tossed a tress of her inky black hair over her shoulder idly, trying without much success to interest herself in what her friend, Janine, was babbling about. "And then," the brunette giggled, unaware of Adrienne's painfully obvious lack of enthusiasm in her story-telling, "he told me that all that really he wanted to do was—" "Excuse me, Adrienne?" came a tentative female voice from behind the two girls, shocking the girl out of her one-sided recital. Adrienne turned away from Janine with poorly concealed disdain—after all, the girl was hopeless when it came to men, always exaggerating every detail in order to make herself seem more attractive. She wasn't expecting to see Miss Yara, the first period teacher, but like always, her perfectly formed and softly tanned features did not reveal what she was really thinking. The diminutive woman silently handed the dark-haired girl a white paper note, folded over twice, indicating that she should open it, which she did, the crisp letter crackling in her hands. The student, Adrienne Guadiacco, has been transferred into the new homeroom of I-1 on the second floor. Their new homeroom teacher is now Yukari Tanizaki. Send them to the room immediately. -Administration Adrienne raised a slim brow in a quizzical gaze at the paper as she read, and then transferred her glance to Miss Yara, who merely shrugged ruefully, as if to say that she didn't know much about the mysterious and unexpected change, either. The Grecian girl rolled her eyes and stood up, crumbling the note and tossing it into a nearby trash can without looking. She began to move about, gathering her backpack and school materials, while Janine looked about in confusion. "But, Adrienne...!" the other girl said in a voice that was almost a whine, once Miss Yara had retreated to the safety of her desk. "Don't you want to hear the rest of my—?" "I'll see you later, Janine," Adrienne replied in a cool, bored tone as she made her way to the door, skirt swaying slightly. She closed the door behind with a decisive thud, and began to make her way to room I-1; fortunately, she was already on the second floor, so she didn't have too far to go. She came to a stop in front of the classroom, wondering briefly why she had been switched to another homeroom in such a sudden manner—still, there was only one way to find out. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Azure Flame Kite Posted February 20, 2010 Report Share Posted February 20, 2010 Like 10 others, Jun was sitting in his homeroom class when he got the note. "What the...?" He whispered disbelievingly, reading the note he'd been given again and again. "I've got to move," He declared to the teacher, standing up, packing his stuff, and heading out, leaving with a victory sign and a 'see ya!' "So I'm in I-1, huh? What's with the sudden move?" Jun mused, folding his hands behind his head as he ambled down the hall. He hadn't asked for a move, in fact, he was quite content with his previous class, so why the sudden change in homeroom? He tried to look on the bright side of the situation; maybe this wasn't a completely bad thing, sure, he'd left his friends behind, but he'd make new ones. Yeah! And a new teacher and new classmates, alright!Now eager and unable to bear the suspense building inside him, Jun sprinted down the hall. Looking ahead, he spotted a sign. It was the one he was looking for. Skidding to a stop, he slid open the door and power-walked in. "Yo!" he declared loudly before heading to a seat. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MKJ Posted February 20, 2010 Report Share Posted February 20, 2010 AS Alex was sitting in the back of the room looking through his latest of books: The complete works of Sherlock Holmes he noticed his homeroom teacher look at him as though wondering if Alex herd her. She repeated "Come to the front of the class I have something for you." As he stood up he herd one of the students say " Finally the geek got in trouble wonder what he did." As some of the students snickered he took the note that Ms. Yuka was holding out, it read: The student Alex Bright has been transferred into the new homeroom of I-1 on the second floor. His new homeroom teacher is now Yukari Tanizaki. Send him to the room immediately. -Administration As he finished reading the note Ms. Yuka addressed the class that Alex would be leaving. She turned to him and said that she would miss him. Alex nodded, went back to his seat, picked up his bag and many books, and left the room. As he was doing so one of the students put out his leg as to trip Alex, but Alex saw if and quickly tapped the side of the students leg where a very painful pressure point was and as the student quickly retracted his leg in pain Alex left the room. As he turned the corner towards room I-1 which was next to the library (his favorite place in school) he saw more students about 9 or 10 walk the same way. As he entered he thought to himself: "It was a good thing I read that book on massage therapy last week." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bury the year Posted February 20, 2010 Report Share Posted February 20, 2010 The student, Sengoku Maria, has been transferred into the new homeroom of I-1 on the second floor. Their new homeroom teacher is now Tanizaki Yukari. Send them to the room immediately. -Administration. Crumpling up the notice in one slender hand, Maria grumbled many unprintable obscenities under her breath and tossed the small paper over her shoulder, not stopping to watch it bounce along the linoleum tiles in a mournful fashion. She was pissed, and for good reason. Nakagawa Sumiko and Kisaragi Midori, her two closest friends/gossips/people who she connected to/etc, etc, etc, were in her class for the first time in what seemed like forever. There should've been some sign to tell the brunette that things were too good to last. Of course, it was, and just a few weeks into the school year, that fateful message came ringing over the intercom like some big gong from Hell. She had taken her departure in stride, of course. The one rule that Maria always followed was to never let her composure slip, even if it meant not saying proper goodbyes. When Nionomiya-sensei had straightened his tie and gave one of those slight fake coughs after announcing Maria's name, she knew that it wasn't good. Over the years, she had gotten used to reading those subtle tics of the body that indicated deeper meaning. The nervous cough? An apology, and an insincere one at that. She knew that the man was wary of her. She knew girls like her were a dime a dozen, but the brunette sure as hell didn't care. Maria knew her goals, and she was going to make them. Body ladders were just a side effect. She had left the classroom with a sweetly fake smile on her face and a promise to see everyone again soon. The latter half was only directed at two people, of course. Sumi-chan and Micchan were her girls. Maria knew they were there for her in spirit. However, she couldn't say that with any certainty for these new people. She'd be all alone. Oh well. Those were the types of environments in which she worked best. New people were the easiest to infiltrate. The door had came up on here faster than she expected. Odd. She must've been soliloquizing for too long. Whatever. Fixing her face up in a perky smile, Maria put her hand on the doorknob and twisted it decisively, entering it with a wave and a quick "Hi, everyone!" (((If this is Japan, you should use Eastern order for names. Silly Otaku. Also, sorry I'm late, and I'm still not sure what to do for a different power for Maria.))) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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