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Call of Duty: War of the Century *CHAPTER 2 COMPLETED.*

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Well, i wanted to write a Novel, so first ill write a prolouge. Oh and it might be offensive to some Viewers.

[spoiler=Prolouge]

[align=center]2019, Wood Mill, Afganistan

Task Force 637, Alpha 1[/align]A vechile stopped, outside the Mill. "Ok guys. I see..6 Tangos outside the 4WD. The Voice was replied over the Commlinks.

"Yes Captain. I see them. Just make sure you dont get me killed. OK?"

The first voice was Captain Dominic 'Hawk' Sisa. Hawk looked down the sights on his SAPMOD.

"Ill take the one having a piss." The replying voice was LT Benjamin 'Power' Sargent.

"Ok. Suppress weopons ONLY." 2 More Voices were heard in Hawk's Comm.

"This is SGT Frank 'Hitman' Murphy. Iam on the Hill with the PFC."

Hawk shot the Tango in the chest with his SAPMOD. "I should probly use a scope."

He pulled out a Thermal Scope and attached it to the SAPMOD.

"PFC Johnny 'Spider' Vellian. Iam the Medic."

Hawk moved in through the scrubs. Checking his corners. He spoke quickly in the Comm. "Power, Hitman and Spider. Move in from the West."

The 3 replied before moving down the West Hill.

"Hoorah."

The rest went down the hill and took cover near the West door.

"Breach and Enter." Hawk said through the comm."

A loud AK was heard.

"CONTACTS!"

Power threw a Flash-bang and heard 4 shots from next to him.

"There were mine." Hitman said before reloading his Vector.

Hawk smashed a door open. Then Sliced the throat of a smoking Tango.

"Done".

The 3 from the west entered the Mill. "Tango on the 4th floor. His looking out the window."

Power aimed his M16 and shot the Tango. He fell out the window.

"Tango Down."

The PFC ran up the stairs with his SPAS-12. 3 shots were heard, then 2 bodys dropped off the 2nd floor.

"Very Nice." Hawk Laughed after saying this. Hawk was on the roof. Lighting a flare. "C'mon Guys! The choppers comming our way!"

Power was the first to run up. But Spider was already in the chopper.

"Wait!"

The chopper was already off the ground, but the ladder was deployed.

Hitman was sprinting as fast as he could. He just caught the ladder.

"Lets go back to HQ."

Hitman climbed up and saw ammo was there for him.

He reloaded his gun before lighting a cigar. Then a beeping sound was heard in the Chopper.

"What is it!"

Hawk saw a missile homming in for the chopper. "Brace yoursel..."

The missile hit the chopper. It began spiraling out of control. The helo crashed somewhere. In Afgan.

[spoiler=Chapter 1: War in D.C]

*BANG*

The sound of Captain Micheal 'Steel' Mcgregor's M14 EBR hitting a Tango in the chest.

*BANG*

Another round was fired at a Russian.

"Squid do you read over?"

"This is Squid. What do you need, Over?"

Steel reloaded his M14 then looked around to make sure the coast was clear.

"I need you to tell the AC-130's to bomb the WWII Monument. And yes i know waht your thinkin'. Crazy."

No reply was heard for awhile. Then Steel ran to a Sand Bag wall.

"Ok. I Told them to hit it. But they cant see it from up there. You need to light a flair to get them to hit it."

Steel was taking cover but then heard what Squid said.

"ARE YOU CRAZY? I might as well walk in there and kill everyone my self."

Laughter was heard. But Steel didnt see the funny side.

"Just use your MP5 and shoot the Fireworks that are there."

Steel swiched out for his MP5. Then cocked the gun before attatching a ACOG-Sight.

Steel aimed down at where Squid told him to.

He saw the box of fire works. He shot the box then saw fireworks fly everywhere.

"Squid here, AC-130 Gunner sees you. Take cover and have fun."

Steel looked and saw the Monument blow up and saw everyone in the area die.

"Thanks for the assist Squid. Steel Out."

Squid continued to aid the Rangers in the Destroyed city after the Nuke went off.

Steel switch out for his M14 EBR. He looked around the bombed area. He saw Enemy BMP's heading for the bombed area.

"No. That wasent the plan!"

Steel found a Ghille Suit. He put it on and quietly headed for the other side.

"Steel, Squid here. New plan. Were geting you out of their. Head 133yds North. There is a E-vac Helo."

"Ok, but iam kinda busy getting out of here, BMP's every where."

Squid locked on Steel's Position then saw the BMP's.

"Ok. Your not far from the E-VAC Site."

Just keep going North."

Steel continued heading North. He saw the BMP'S were long gone so he got up and sprinted for the Helo.

"There it is."

He kept running and jumped in the Helo.

"Lets go."

 

 

 

 

[spoiler=Chapter 2: [i]Meeting of Old Friends[/i]]

[align=center]2019,

Somewhere in Afghanistan

Task Force 637, Alpha 1.[/align]Smoke Covered the Night Sky.

*BANG*

A shot was heard from a distance. Hawk woke up, disorientated.

“Oh… What...Where are we?”

Hawk looked around, before standing up.

“Pilot’s dead.”

Hawk saw Spider looking around for something.

“What are you doing Spider?”

Spider was still looking around before looking up at Hawk.

“Where are the guns?”

Hawk saw that the guns were sitting in a fire.

“Too late for them.”

Spider saw Hitman trying to get up.

“Hitman, get up.”

He helped him get up before looking around for Power.

Hitman got up and saw a Helicopter with a Spot Light heading their way.

“Captain, Enemy Helo.”

Hawk quickly looked at the approaching Helicopter.

“Crap, where is Power? Damn, we gotta get to some cover before they find us.”

Spider bolted to a small shed. Calling out to Hitman and Hawk.

“C’mon! In here, quickly!”

Hawk and Hitman ran for the shed. They quickly stopped moving.

The Helo searched all around but left.

“No Guns, No weapons..”

Hawk quickly stopped Spider before he could finish his sentence.

“Wait, we got the Knives. And our Commando Skills.”

Hitman and Spider both agreed.

*100 Meters away from Hawk*

Power was covered in hay.

“What the..”

Power got up, getting the hay off him at the same time.

“Jeez, where’s the Captain? And Spider and Hitman?”

Power looked around and saw gun fights in the distance.

Power ran off to the site.

“GET DOWN!!”

A loud explosion hit the area.

A Squad of Task Force 637 were fighting off some Afgans.

The captain of the Squad saw Power looking around.

“YOU THERE! GET OVER HERE!”

Power saw the man waving him to go there.

“What’s your name Soldier?”

“Lt Benjamin ‘Power’ Sir.”

Torch looked around and found a Dragunov next to him.

“Here, use this.”

Power took the Sniper and aimed down the field. But something spotted his eye.

“Is that Captain?”

Power lit a flare. An Orange Smoke arose from it.

“Captain, have a look.”

Hitman pointed out the Smoke.

“I think that’s Power’s Flare!”

Hawk sharply turned to the smoke.

“It is. Let’s go.”

Hawk looked around before Sprinting down the field. Hitman and Spider both followed.

A BMP started to drive down to Power’s and Torch’s location.

Torch reloaded his Shot-gun before seeing Hawk running to them.

“Hawk?”

Hawk sprinted to the sand-bags. Hitman Followed.

“Torch? Haven’t seen you for awhile… Wheres Spider?”

Hawk looked back and saw Spider lying on the ground.

“Oh Crap. Got himself killed.”

Torch looked around and saw a Laptop. Saying ‘Predator Controller’.

Torch grabbed it pressing buttons before a camera showed on the screen aiming for the BMP.

*LOUD EXPLOSION*

“Dam! Hawk, We gotta get outa here.”

Hawk picked up a AK-47 before agreeing to Torch.

“But where to?”

Hitman pointed out a Small Door, leading underground.

“There! Torch, cover us!”

Torch nodded, before aiming his Rifle over the Sand bags.

“On my mark Alpha 1… NOW!”

Torch let off some rounds before throwing a grenade over to the attacking forces.

Hitman and Hawk sprinted for the door. Hitman almost got shot but continued to run over to it. When they got there, they opened the door, then called out for Torch.

“C’MON HURRY UP!”

Torch threw the gun over the bags before sprinting for the door.

Torch dived in through the door. Hawk then bolted up the door.

“Where are we?”

Hitman looked around before answering to Hawk.

“Where in an Escape tunnel..”

 

 

Rate and w/e. And if you want to be in the Story use this app.

I need at least 2 more comments before I write Chapter 2.

 

Name: (Full name with a Code Name in the Middle)
Age:
Task Force/ Army Rangers:
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Nice story mate! I think you should space out the words a bit e.g

 

Gronus threw himself to the floor.

"Get out of here!" he shouted to his comrades.

"We are not leaving you!" His men replied.

 

Not this:

 

Gronus threw himself to the floor. "Get out of here!" he shouted to his comrades. "We are not leaving you!" His men replied.

 

7/10 Good start though and i really like the story!

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Well, could use a bit of fine tuning, but just follow what Bassa said, and you should be fine.

 

As for the App... Well, I don't think I'll have to think up a character, I'll just use myself in real life.

 

Name: Henry "Squid" Bruyn

Age: 20

Task Force/ Army Rangers: Army Rangers

Rank: ET3 (Equivalent of Corporal. Character is IA from US Navy.)

[Note: Seeing as my job in Navy is "Electronics Technician (ET)", I figured you could have me be the guy that fixes the radios.]

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I like the idea but all what they both said...and then it should be fine...

 

my app:

Name: Simon "Torch" Monfort

Age: 39

Task Force/Army rangers: Task Force

Rank: Captain

 

You will be Alpha 2. But the nex chapter will be The AR.

Well' date=' could use a bit of fine tuning, but just follow what Bassa said, and you should be fine.

 

As for the App... Well, I don't think I'll have to think up a character, I'll just use myself in real life.

 

Name: Henry "Squid" Bruyn

Age: 20

Task Force/ Army Rangers: Army Rangers

Rank: ET3 (Equivalent of Corporal. Character is IA from US Navy.)

[Note: Seeing as my job in Navy is "Electronics Technician (ET)", I figured you could have me be the guy that fixes the radios.]

 

Do you want to be on the field, or in Command with the General?

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[spoiler=Chapter 1]

*BANG*

The sound of Captain Micheal 'Steel' Mcgregor's M14 EBR hitting a Tango in the chest.

*BANG*

Another round was fired at a Russian.

"Squid do you read over?"

"This is Squid. What do you need, Over?"

Steel reloaded his M14 then looked around to make sure the coast was clear.

"I need you to tell the AC-130's to bomb the WWII Monument. And yes i know waht your thinkin'. Crazy."

No reply was heard for awhile. Then Steel ran to a Sand Bag wall.

"Ok. I Told them to hit it. But they cant see it from up there. You need to light a flair to get them to hit it."

Steel was taking cover but then heard what Squid said.

"ARE YOU CRAZY? I might as well walk in there and kill everyone my self."

Laughter was heard. But Steel didnt see the funny side.

"Just use your MP5 and shoot the Fireworks that are there."

Steel swiched out for his MP5. Then cocked the gun before attatching a ACOG-Sight.

Steel aimed down at where Squid told him to.

He saw the box of fire works. He shot the box then saw fireworks fly everywhere.

"Squid here, AC-130 Gunner sees you. Take cover and have fun."

Steel looked and saw the Monument blow up and saw everyone in the area die.

"Thanks for the assist Squid. Steel Out."

Squid continued to aid the Rangers in the Destroyed city after the Nuke went off.

Steel switch out for his M14 EBR. He looked around the bombed area. He saw Enemy BMP's heading for the bombed area.

"No. That wasent the plan!"

Steel found a Ghille Suit. He put it on and quietly headed for the other side.

"Steel, Squid here. New plan. Were geting you out of their. Head 133yds North. There is a E-vac Helo."

"Ok, but iam kinda busy getting out of here, BMP's every where."

Squid locked on Steel's Position then saw the BMP's.

"Ok. Your not far from the E-VAC Site."

Just keep going North."

Steel continued heading North. He saw the BMP'S were long gone so he got up and sprinted for the Helo.

"There it is."

He kept running and jumped in the Helo.

"Lets go."

 

 

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Much better Ara' date=' it looks much clearer.

 

I really like chapter 1 and can't wait for the next one. :)

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Really?

AwsomeLicous

Just i dont know why anything new wont pop up on the First post. :(

Well in the 2nd Chapter is when they crash inthe meadow

 

*SNEAK PEAK*:

They wont have any guns. And it will determine their Commando skills. And Spider might die, beacuse he woundt stop moving when a Helo was above him.**

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