Monkey Posted February 13, 2010 Report Share Posted February 13, 2010 [align=center] Which one do you like best? I think I like the 2nd or 3rd one... Scizor + Rhyperior + Heracross Horn/Scyther Wing/Quilava and Cyndaquil Flame *Theme for splice came from another splicer on another forum. [/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ensenada Posted February 13, 2010 Report Share Posted February 13, 2010 I think that it would look better if you kept the fire shading. Otherwise, this is really good ;-) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
metalflygon08 Posted February 13, 2010 Report Share Posted February 13, 2010 the 3rd looks best IMO, though the fire should overlap the shoulder a little, and the feet could use a better transgression from leg to foot, because it's half scissors leg + all of Rhypherior's leg. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jolta Posted February 13, 2010 Report Share Posted February 13, 2010 I like these brownies. First one looks horny Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Monkey Posted February 15, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 15, 2010 @ Enesada: fire shading? Like recolor the whole spite to match the fire? @metalflygon: transgression? If you mean the transition from scizor's skinny legs to rhyperior's large legs, I intended to do so to make it look like he has heavy platings on his arms and legs thanks for all the critiques and comments guys. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest JoshIcy Posted February 15, 2010 Report Share Posted February 15, 2010 Looks kinda like a castform thing going on lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Monkey Posted February 15, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 15, 2010 Yeah, you could say that. Now that I think about it, I have a good idea! If I can pull it off... Which I probably won't because I'm not good at scratching yet Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chrid97 Posted February 15, 2010 Report Share Posted February 15, 2010 awesome i like the last a second Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jappio Posted February 16, 2010 Report Share Posted February 16, 2010 I'm going to stick mainly commenting on the one with fire, as I think it is the best. One problem I have with this would be the arms and legs. Both are quite large for what seem like weak connections. The little twigs coming out of Scisor's body don't look like they can support those massive things. I'm not necessarily against this type of thing generally, but yours is perhaps just a tad over the top. The thing M.F. mentioned on your legs also bothers me. What I want think he is saying is that you have half of Scisor's legs, and all of Rhyperior's. So in a way, each leg has two different knee areas, one where Scisor's legs end, and the other where those orange pads are on Rhyperior. Anatomically, it doesn't make the biggest amount of sense. I will admit that although I do notice and realize this, I don't think it looks that bad. However there is another issue with the legs mainly. There seem to be pixels just randomly cut off or that don't look right. For an example the left foot has two black pixels at the heal. There is a toe with a cut off tip. The right leg has they weird border issue where it has a bit of a spike. The left leg where the two connect is colored in black. There are other general small pixel errors too, so I'd suggest a little more time dedicated to cleaning it up. Beyond that, the sprite isn't all that bad. Beyond looking a little ridiculous, it does have a cool factor to it too, and I generally like the concept. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Monkey Posted February 16, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 16, 2010 For the twiggish legs/arms and the massive extensions, it was intentional. I can make scizor's parts a little larger. I'm sure it will look better Ah, I see what you are saying, I'll see if I can fix that. Yeah, I noticed those extra pixels once I posted the thread. I'll fix them when I make the other changes Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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