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Well... their not exactly "Keen" cards to have in a deck... or... for that matter, good OCG, and a little underpowered. Potential, Decent to great art, but, push the OCG writting a little more, and just tweak them a bit, they should be good.

 

6/10 Art

4/10 Overall Effects

7/10 Set Follow

5/10 Playability

OVERALL:.... 5.5/10.

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Effect revision is needed. Capitalize words such as Deck. Also, I suggest you check out some tutorials on grammar, because you have a few problems with that. Also, ditch the whole Dragon/ Zombie thing. You should add "This card's Type is also treated as Zombie" to the effect.

 

Overall, 6/10

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Alien dragon- two types for one monster and most aliens are considered reptiles. horible OCG. overpowered effect.

 

Ruby dragon- Text should read "this dragon is made entrely out of rubies"

 

Shalion dragon of the dead- again two types for a monster. mabe this is what you wanted i dont know. may i sugest making it "dragon-zombie" Decent effect. there is smome potential in this one. a few OCG problems but not too many. good job.

 

Gold plate dragon- except for the improper grammar use its fine a well ballanced attack and defense with an awesome picture to boot.

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