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Burning Treasure of Lost Kings | Chapter 11 added!


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loldaisukereadsinnapropriatemagazines...

 

I must say, I like this chapter.

 

A whole lot, since it involves messing with minds.

 

Although I can't help but feel as if this whole "friend against friend" illusion has been overdone...

 

still, great work.

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Let's see...

 

I think it was a good chapter...

 

I think you missed a comma or something in Kailyn's Kaillin's last line...

 

This interests me... although I find it hard to believe someone would know that much about a certain thing, and be able to recite it like that...

 

but, it just goes to show something about Nicholas. He's studious/intelligent.

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