DL Posted February 13, 2010 Report Share Posted February 13, 2010 I loled at Nicholas' monologue in the end XD Good chapter, if a bit short. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sploda Posted February 13, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 13, 2010 What was funny about it? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted February 13, 2010 Report Share Posted February 13, 2010 It was funny cause he went on this speech while alone, and then just left XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sploda Posted February 13, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 13, 2010 Well, what else was he supposed to do?Just go with it, you'll understand later in the story. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted February 13, 2010 Report Share Posted February 13, 2010 I'm not saying I didn't like it, I just thought it was funny XD The things he said were poetic and philosophical, true. But what he DID was funny XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sploda Posted February 17, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 17, 2010 Finally finished Chapter 5.Now to work on Chapter 6... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sploda Posted February 18, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 18, 2010 Chapter 6 is up.I think I'm getting the hang of this. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Twig Posted February 19, 2010 Report Share Posted February 19, 2010 I'm glad the chapters are longer. So far, it's okay. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kailyn Leona Kyosuke Posted February 19, 2010 Report Share Posted February 19, 2010 well, so far is looking good, tho i should point out that i cannot imagine the locations they're moving to very easily. Keep in mind the things i brought up and you'll continue to do well. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sploda Posted February 20, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 20, 2010 Thanks for reading, Chapter 7 will be up soon. Edit: Chapter 7 is up. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Twig Posted February 20, 2010 Report Share Posted February 20, 2010 “Have you now? Nicholas what lies have you told this poor soul?” Ha! Fun chapter. Can't wait for more action. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nexev Posted February 20, 2010 Report Share Posted February 20, 2010 Kailin? Daisuke? Only I am allowed to make subtle symbolism, honestly Karmdarcer is better at it. Ignoring that it's pretty good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sploda Posted February 20, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 20, 2010 Notice Chapter 7 title: I did it on purpose.Don't worry unlike your RP they probably won't play an important role.and Kaillin is an original character, only Daisuke is a Cameo. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted February 21, 2010 Report Share Posted February 21, 2010 Kaillin Ryosuke the swordsperson?Daisuke the perverted ninja? ha ha, very funny Creator. Not trying for subtlety, are ya? Anyway, aside from that, it's quite well-written, humorous. Starting to seem like an RPG, qith all the classes, and clans and level and stuffz. Keep it goin! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kailyn Leona Kyosuke Posted February 21, 2010 Report Share Posted February 21, 2010 Fascinating. xP I want to see where your story will lead. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sploda Posted February 21, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 21, 2010 @DLActually Kaillin is a weaponmaster but prefers the sword.Also she can't use fire techniques.and yes you made a Cameo, don't you feel special. As for the Clans and Guilds, that will be explained soon enough. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sploda Posted February 23, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 23, 2010 8th Chapter is up. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Enma Kozato Posted February 24, 2010 Report Share Posted February 24, 2010 I can already identify the charactersNicholas is obviously representing youSamantha:...Kari or Aqua maybe?Daisuke: second I saw the name I knew it was linkKailin:not gonna bother answering that...I see a few plot holes in the characters setting and storyline that make the story hard to followmight wanna elaborate a little more on things Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kailyn Leona Kyosuke Posted February 24, 2010 Report Share Posted February 24, 2010 lol @ pwnage over DL. other than that...i like the whole "taking notes" part of the fight. Let's see that next chapter then, shall we? (im enjoying this) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nexev Posted February 24, 2010 Report Share Posted February 24, 2010 So why did you attack DL? "Because complete emotionless dickery is kewl." You can pretend people are nothing more than puppets for you when you manage to inflate your power to Negi's level. In which case you pretty much got a Game Over. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted February 24, 2010 Report Share Posted February 24, 2010 ... darn it. I lost. Meh, it was a good chapter, if I set that aside. As kailyn said, the taking notes part = me like. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sploda Posted February 24, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 24, 2010 Yes I am basing all characters except Samanatha off people know. Happy?Anyway the Notes thing has to do with the fact I watch and mimic attacks from others.@NexevWTF are you talking about? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Twig Posted February 25, 2010 Report Share Posted February 25, 2010 lolwerebeavers It was good and long chapter. As always, keep it up. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted February 25, 2010 Report Share Posted February 25, 2010 Yes I am basing all characters except Samanatha off people know. Happy?Anyway the Notes thing has to do with the fact I watch and mimic attacks from others.@NexevWTF are you talking about? If he means negi from negima, then I can see where he's coming from. I don't suppose you've read negima, since it has ecchi. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sploda Posted February 25, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 25, 2010 Obviously not. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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