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[align=center]My 2nd fic. Hopefully you think it's quite interesting. ;D

 

[spoiler=[b]Prologue[/b]]In the spiritless city of Kruden(Cr-oo-den), strange things usually happen, but none have even come close to this.

 

"Ah!" A loud scream echoed in the halls of Kruden Emergency Hospital.

A quite large woman with the name of Kichi Akira, wife of Yasuo Akira, was giving birth.

 

"It's OK. Big deep breaths, Kichi." Yasuo replied to Kichi's scream.

 

Kichi continued to scream, when before she knew it, the nurse was holding a baby boy. "Miss, here's your baby." The nurse handed over the baby boy.

 

"Thank you." Kichi replied. As Kichi took the baby, she noticed something different. Her arms seemed to drop right down when she grabbed him. "Wow, he's really heavy." Kichi explained. "Would you be kind enough to weigh him nurse?" Kichi asked.

 

"Sure thing." The nurse replied. As she put the baby on the scales, The numbers '15.00' popped up. "Wow, that can't be right..." The nurse said. She started tapping the scale, when she thought again. Wait, have I even tried to see how heavy he feels when I lift him up? Thought the nurse. While lifting him up, the nurse's face started to go red. Wow, he really is heavy! The nurse thought again.

 

"Well miss?" Kichi and Yasuo replied simultaneously.

 

"He's 15 kilograms.." commented the nurse.

 

"Ohh well." Kichi said. Kichi took back the baby and started thinking. "Yasuo, what would a good name be?"

 

Yasuo took a minute to reply, then said, "Kiyoshi?"

 

"I love it. Kiyoshi Akira." Kichi said.

 

10 Years Later

 

Kiyoshi was having a normal life. Until one day. April 16th, 14:37 to be precise, he was playing handball with his mates, out on the abandoned main road of Kruden.

 

He went to hit the ball, when suddenly, metal wires ripped out of the skin of his right arm, and started covering it.

 

"RAHH!" He screamed. All his friends stepped back, leaving him in pain. It had rained a few hours before, so the ground was wet.

 

Kiyoshi fell to his knees, putting both hands on the ground. His right arm was fully covered in the metal. When his arm touched the wet ground, something strange happened. The water on the ground lit up, as his arm did, and started to 'Merge'. The water was gone, the ground left dry and Kiyoshi's arm still looked metal like before.

 

By now his friends had run off, and Kiyoshi had fainted due to the pain.

 

[spoiler=[b]Chapter 1[/b]][spoiler=[i]The Quiet One[/i]]2 years after Kiyoshi's arm was infected by metal, he decided he would start school, to try and get competent enough to hold his own.

 

To hide his wicked right arm, he wore a long white glove, and to be safe he always wore a long shirt.

 

On the first day of school, the kids were outrageously noisy in Kiyoshi's class. As his teacher, Miss Keiko, tried to educate the class no-one could hear a single word she was saying. Everyone in the class was basically shouting or talking, except for lonely Kiyoshi. Kiyoshi had English this period, just before lunchtime.

 

'Ringggggg' the bell went, telling everyone that lunch was beginning. All the students raced out, except for Kiyoshi who was dawdling out the door. He walked to the basketball courts, and sat in silence with his head down.

 

Near the end of lunch, a child, almost twice Kiyoshi's size stood in front of him and announced, "Hey, loser. Why don't you go back home to your mummy. No-one wants you here."

 

A tear ran down Kiyoshi's face. As Kiyoshi stood up, the boy ripped his right sleeve off, revealing a part of his metal arm. Kiyoshi still hadn't said a word.

 

"Haha, what a geek! Putting a plastic toy on his arm!" The boy laughed. Kiyoshi's face went red with rage. Medium-size, razor sharp spikes come out of him metal arm, ripping the glove off. Kiyoshi leaped at the boy who was bullying him, made a powerful swing with his arm, and slice the boys neck off. Kiyoshi tried to stop, but it was like his arm was controlling his movements. Kiyoshi kept on chopping up the boy, until there was blood splattered over the court, and the kids around him.

 

Kiyoshi ran out of the school and started crying. Miss Keiko saw him run past her classroom. She chased after him, and when she reached him she noticed the blood on Kiyoshi's shirt. "W-What happened?!" She asked.

 

"I.. I-I killed him.." Whispered the sobbing Kiyoshi.

 

"Who?!" Miss Keiko asked.

 

"I don't know who he is.." Replied Kiyoshi.

 

He didn't mean to kill the boy, but secretly, he wanted to.

 

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