Twig Posted February 17, 2010 Report Share Posted February 17, 2010 That chapter made alot more sense. Glad to see some changes going on. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
radio414 Posted February 18, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 18, 2010 Thanks. I'm glad that's better for you.On an offtopic note, could you add this to the Writers Arena FanFics? I feel like only 3-4 people are actually following this. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Twig Posted February 18, 2010 Report Share Posted February 18, 2010 K. I'm adding it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
radio414 Posted February 22, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 22, 2010 Seeing as there's still positive review coming in, and a positive poll majority, Day 6 is up. The only thing I don't like is that only Twig is continuously posting as of current. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Twig Posted February 22, 2010 Report Share Posted February 22, 2010 I'm sure other people are reading. Anyways, Day 6 was great. Lots of action, but maybe make it a little longer. Keep it up. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dissonance Posted February 25, 2010 Report Share Posted February 25, 2010 Interesting choice, not making the glass "reset" when the day started over. I liked the idea that despite her doing things different, the end result remains the same (ie, she put the glass further away from the edge, but then bumped it with her robe, so the end result was still a broken glass on the floor). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
radio414 Posted March 3, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 3, 2010 Day 7 is up, finally.Does the plot seem to be going to fast? Maybe it does only because I know what is supposed to happen at the end. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dissonance Posted March 3, 2010 Report Share Posted March 3, 2010 By Day 7, I'm utterly bored and want her to realize whats wrong already, so we can progress beyond this monotonous daze of her feeling sick and sleeping. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
radio414 Posted March 17, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 17, 2010 OK, sorry it's taking so long with these "Days" Real Life keeps getting in the way. Anyways, Day 8 is (finally) up. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
radio414 Posted April 12, 2010 Author Report Share Posted April 12, 2010 This may or may not be a necrobump, but...BUMPÂ And yes, I know it's slow, but I would really appreciate some comments. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dr. Cakey Posted April 12, 2010 Report Share Posted April 12, 2010 A New Commentor Has Appeared! So, yes, intriguing idea and good execution. With Day 2, I think I might have made some sort of small change at the end, so that somebody is skimming and suddenly they hit it and say "zomgz it r a difrince this iz basfimy" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Twig Posted April 12, 2010 Report Share Posted April 12, 2010 I thought this was dead. Glad you're still working on it. Chapter 8 was nice. ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
radio414 Posted May 7, 2010 Author Report Share Posted May 7, 2010 Day 9 is up (finally)I saw that more people voted in the poll, so that encouraged me to make another chapter. I have also decided that there is almost nothing left for me at YCM besides this and participating in the Writers Club, so this will be on a higher priority list. Also, I apologize for being late, and apologize in advance for being late for future chapters. There is Real Life out there, including something called school. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Twig Posted May 7, 2010 Report Share Posted May 7, 2010 Day 9 is up (finally)I saw that more people voted in the poll' date=' so that encouraged me to make another chapter. I have also decided that there is almost nothing left for me at YCM besides this and participating in the Writers Club, so this will be on a higher priority list. Also, I apologize for being late, and apologize in advance for being late for future chapters. There is Real Life out there, including something called school.[/quote'] I'm glad you continued. =D For some people, life is YCM and YCM is life.(Do you get what I'm saying?) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
radio414 Posted May 17, 2010 Author Report Share Posted May 17, 2010 It feels nice to be back on some sort of schedule... Anyways, Day 10 is up. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
radio414 Posted June 14, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 14, 2010 BumpI'm not writing if people won't comment. Fortunately, though, I have writers block, so it's not too detrimental. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
radio414 Posted June 25, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 25, 2010 This is my final bump on this fic. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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